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The result was keep. For all the words in this debate, the consensus is quite clear that the article is to be kept. Mkativerata (talk) 23:14, 6 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
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Polish dictionary word, non-encyclopedic, not notable, not suitable for English wikipedia. Relevant policies: WP:ENGLISH WP:DICTIONARY (see my comment at my vote below) --Lysytalk 23:13, 28 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Note: This debate has been included in the list of Poland-related deletion discussions. — — alf.laylah.wa.laylah (talk) 23:50, 28 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
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- Delete Twice over. WP is not a dictionary and doubly so not a Polish language dictionary. North8000 (talk) 23:51, 28 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Weak keep Not all words are notable, but some are. What makes it less notable than entries in Category:Polish words and phrases and Category:Exonyms? The discussion of the word by Kłoskowska or Piróg seems to suggest it is notable. On a side note, it would be nice if the author would learn how to format references properly (cite templates...) and avoid the humongous quotes. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| talk to me 01:05, 29 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- No, it's not a toponym. Regarding notability, you could easily find a source in Polish on cucumbers in Lesser Poland. Would this warrant an article titled ogórek (Polish for cucumber) on English wikipedia ? Would the fact that the Polish source discusses "ogórek" in Polish make it more notable ? --Lysytalk 14:09, 29 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- There is no need for ogórek, however I think that we could use a dedicated article on Polish pickled cucumbers. Pl wiki distinguishes those from pl:ogórek konserwowy, and if there is no established English name for it, we may end up having an article on ogórek konserwowy on en wiki... --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| talk to me 16:44, 29 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Likewise, there may be a reason to have Racism in Poland but no need to have an article on Murzyn, Cygan, Żyd, Chińczyk, Grek, etc. --Lysytalk 17:21, 29 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- If we are talking about a correct name for the article, this already suggests a keep vote (and a RM to start). Some words are encyclopedic, their usage is studied by scholars. The sources I noted above suggest this is one of them, and that it is of interest to scholars, just like Negro or similar words - even if it is much less researched. Also, I think we should have an article on Żyd, dealing with the word meaning in Polish language (analyzing the stereotypical image of the Jew in Poland through the use in proverbs and such) - although it could be a section in some larger article. Murzyn could also exist as part of some article describing words for black people in different languages, but as we are most likely missing them, keeping this one seems like a reasonable outcome. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| talk to me 20:28, 29 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- This is actually a very good illustration of the problem. If we could separate the article Żyd, concerned with the actual word, from anti-Semitism in Poland, it would be fine. The problem is that it's very hard to avoid having both articles discussing the same after some time. The same with Murzyn, we claim it explains the particular Polish word, but I'm sure it will have the tendency to evolve into Racism in Poland, which should be a separate article. But if we create it we would end up with two differently named articles with more or less the same contents. --Lysytalk 17:30, 30 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Strong keep This is a notable word like negro, sambo (racial term), nigger, nigga and indeed Polack. The sources presented show that in Poland there is a considerable amount of academic and general societal discussion surrounding this word (whether it is racist and whether it should be replaced by other words). That's why I noticed it in the first place. It's the main word for 'black person' in Poland, has a long history, and deserves coverage. That it's from a foreign language is neither here nor there (see Ang mo, Ah Beng, Chukhna, Giaour and many other foreign words found in [Category:Ethnic and religious slurs] and probably other categories). I have the strong feeling certain editors object more to the airing of dirty linen, than to this article's actual encyclopaedic worth. Malick78 (talk) 14:57, 29 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- First Malick78 is the creator of the article so he is, understandably, fighting to keep it. Second, Malick78, you're assuming that this word belongs in the "Category:Ethnic and religious slurs" - it doesn't, it's not a slur. All the examples you gave above (Ang mo, Ah Beng, Chukhna, Giaour) are in fact slurs, and in each of these cases an alternative non-offensive word exists. Here "Murzyn" pretty much IS that non-offensive word in Polish. Yes, there are some people who are saying now that it's outdated and politically incorrect - more or less the same way that some people think that the term "black" in English is politically incorrect relative to "African-American" - and there are other people who say it's not but until a new word comes along and gets established this is just a standard translation of the word for "black person" in Polish. The fact that Polish academics are discussing the etymology of a Polish word is not sufficient for an English wikipedia - Polish academics discuss the etymology of lots of Polish words. You say " It's the main word for 'black person' in Poland" - but that's precisely why it belongs in Wikitionary not Wikipedia. Volunteer Marek 20:11, 29 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- I didn't say that it deserves to be kept because it's a slur. I just found some foreign words (sure, slurs) that had articles about them, in order to show that foreign words are worthy of English language articles. I fully realise that it's a multi-faceted word with many interpretations, and therefore needs in depth examination to fully appreciate the complex nature of it. Hence an article ;) Malick78 (talk) 21:56, 29 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Moreover, here's a video of Poland's first black MP John Godson discussing the term on Polish state TV with a black Polish musician. Does the word 'ogorek' get this kind of coverage? The comparison is completely inaccurate. Malick78 (talk) 14:57, 29 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Absolutely: here's a source comparable to the one used for "cycki murzynki": Czas na ogórki!, here is a video prominently featuring ogórek and providing the rich cultural context Ogórek wąsaty, here is a political article about the role of ogórek in European Union policies: Unia przegrała z naturą, about ogórek's presense in Polish parliament:Efektowna konferencja, and here is another vital info, mentioning the "day of ogórek" Dlaczego ogórek nie czyta ?. The word "murzyn" does not even have its day. --Lysytalk 11:24, 1 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Most of those things are about cucumbers, not the word 'ogorek'. In your excitement at finding such a wealth of information I think you may have got a little confused and off-topic. As for the link to "cycki murzynki", that was to prove it exists. You know it exists, all Poles know it exists, so a link to something about it was just a courtesy. Malick78 (talk) 11:45, 1 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- No, I only wanted to demonstrate that it's absolutely easy to find obscure or irrelevant sources. Relevant RS might be a problem, as it is in the case of murzyn. --Lysytalk 11:58, 1 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- There's even a research paper on ogórek by the famous Pirog: J. Pirog (2008). "Przydatność krótkich ogórków uprawianych w tunelu foliowym do kwaszenia jako małosolne". Zeszyty Problemowe Postępów Nauk Rolniczych. 527. and there are many more ... OK, enough ;) As for "cycki murzynki" it's the first time I've heard of it so this was educative as well. --Lysytalk 11:51, 1 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- keep—yes, wp is not a dictionary, but any word that is rich enough in conceptual content to inspire sufficient numbers of reliable sources that discuss the word itself as a topic (as opposed to merely using it) satisfies the gng, and we should have an article on it. i would take this position even if the article lacked sources, providing i could find sources, but in this case, there's no need to do that since the article is impressively well sourced. the article is well written, and convincingly makes the case for the notability and encyclopedicity of the term. i also find Malick78's comparisons with articles on other racial slurs to be quite convincing. these are exactly the kinds of words that turn out to be notable, and are exactly the kinds of words that need both definitions in a dictionary and entries in an encyclopedia— alf.laylah.wa.laylah (talk) 17:03, 29 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- The article rather discusses racism in Poland than the Polish word. How about renaming it to Racism in Poland ? Looking through the "sources", they are either obscure, bogus or irrelevant. It's possible to write a similarly "impressively well sourced" article on almost any Polish dictionary word. --Lysytalk 17:13, 29 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- i don't read polish, so it's true that i can't evaluate the quality of the sources as i would be able to do if they were in english, but it strikes me that your dismissal of them is too sweeping to be completely accurate. the one by Antonina Kłoskowska is clearly reliable, and the one by Patrycja Pirog certainly appears to be so, if the translation is accurate and the source is, as it appears to be, the proceedings of an academic conference. these two alone seem to me to be enough to satisfy the gng. i think that as it stands, the article is actually not about racism in poland, but about the word itself. the sources seem to discuss the word, not racism in general. if some of the other sources don't strike you as reliable, you could edit them out if you wanted. it wouldn't be possible to write such an article about almost any dictionary word in any of the languages i know. is there something special about polish in this regard?— alf.laylah.wa.laylah (talk) 17:24, 29 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Some sources are obscure, but most of them are simply irrelevant. The video is a promotion of an anti-racist children book, the Żakowski article is about smoking and the author uses "I'm black" in the sense of "I'm being discriminated", the article by Pirog is about the connotations of black people in Polish art and culture (that's also what the conference was about). I cannot comment much on the text of Kłoskowska as it's not available online, but its title "Nation, race and ethnicity in Poland" suggests that it discusses racism rather than the actual "murzyn" word. Likewise the text by Ziółkowski is about the racist stereotypes in the US. I will not comment on the quality of the sources for cake recipes. --Lysytalk 18:55, 29 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Why not have articles on the translation of the term "black person" in Russian, Lithuanian, Finnish, Chinese, etc.? Volunteer Marek 20:12, 29 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- The video is not promoting the book, if you watch all 7 minutes you'll see it's about the use of the word 'murzyn'. Do you think that a Polish MP would come on the show just to promote the book? And why do the two black men start arguing? It's about the connotations of the word and how black Poles should be described. Please don't describe the sources inaccurately when not everyone here speaks Polish and can understand them for themselves. I would disagree with your descriptions of the other sources as well. Malick78 (talk) 19:07, 29 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- The Kloskowska source is online and the relevant part is basically a footnote. Volunteer Marek 20:09, 29 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Try Google Books search for "pojęcie murzyn w języku polskim". Unfortunately, most Polish books just give us a snippet view, but a quick overview suggests there are more sources available (if not easily online yet). Rozprawy Komisji Językowej, Volume 32 from 2006 seem to have at least several pages on this word (one quote: "Ustalając konotacje semantyczne zbiorowe, odnoszące się do nazwy Murzyn, a które zakorzenione są w świadomości zbiorowej użytkowników języka polskiego, opisać należy nie tylko frazeologię i paremiologię, lecz i inne aspekty kształtujące..."). The article currently is poor and could benefit from better refs and more research, but the more I look into this the more I am convinced the subject is notable. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| talk to me 20:28, 29 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- I don't think this is applicable in this case. Of course Polish linguists study this word, just like they study other Polish words - maybe a bit more. Additionally, most of the hits seem to be to (unavailable) sources which are picking up the word "pojecie" "jezyk polski" etc. Searching for "pojęcie murzyn w języku polskim" with quotation marks gives zero hits. Same for variations designed to increase the number of hits [1], [2], [3] - all no hits. Even looking at the search w/o quotation marks [4] which one of these sources is actually discussing the word itself, rather than using it in some completely unrelated context? None as far as I can see. I mean some of them are just translations of English language works about completely different topics - like translation of John Stuart Mill which obviously has nothing to do with how the word is used in Polish. Volunteer Marek 20:44, 29 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Also [5], [6]. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| talk to me 21:59, 29 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- The first one ("also" to what?) is a "maybe" - it's a Polish linguistics paper. So yeah, not surprising that Polish linguists would discuss a Polish word. But that's not really enough here, since that's what linguists do. The second one looks better, particularly since it's in English. But again, it's a linguistics publication - apparently about Slavic languages. So this too would support the inclusion of this type of entry in a dictionary, rather than an encyclopedia. The bottomline is that you can find these kinds of sources on almost any word, English, Polish, or other. Again, why not have an entry on how "black person" is translated into Russian, German, Hindu etc.? Volunteer Marek 22:22, 29 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- It's really quite simple. There are no academic articles about the word ogorek. Murzyn has dozens. That's why it's notable. Malick78 (talk) 22:35, 29 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Wait what?!? Where are these "dozens" of sources? Even the article now has only 13 sources over all and half of them are junk (somebody's webpage with some recipe on it, some opinion piece about smoking, letters to the editor etc.). And they're not academic. You got 1 sort of "academic" source which deals with it. You got a few academic sources which mention it in footnotes or passing. And you got one, maybe two, sources which are "academic" in the sense that they are articles by Polish authors about Polish linguistics. Quit making stuff up. Volunteer Marek 22:39, 29 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- What makes a word notable? If it is studied by the linguists, and touches upon sociological issues (discrimination, stereotypes, and so on), that seems to make it notable to me. It would be easier if we had Wikipedia:Notability (words), though (but we have a user essay, linked). But even the generic WP:N seems to suffice; the word received coverage in numerous, reliable sources - and I see no exception there that would make linguistic works not reliable for our purposes. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| talk to me 22:42, 29 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
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Ok, I don't know why this has to be repeated, but it's obvious that Polish linguists will study the etymology of Polish words - and you can find sources (in Polish) to that effect. That is NOT enough to show notability for the purposes of English Wikipedia, IMO.
But let's come back to this " coverage in numerous, reliable sources" - IT'S NOT THERE. Malick78 filled up the article with a bunch of junk he found on the internet consisting of things like:
- Letters to the editor, from a newspaper. Not a reliable source.
- Somebody's online cooking recipes. Not a reliable source
- Somebody's blog. Not a reliable source but this one was actually written decently enough that I left it in for now.
- An article about smoker's rights which uses the word in passing. Irrelevant to the topic.
- An article about the Oscar awards which uses the word in passing. Irrelevant to the topic.
The last two, or even four, are just random usages of the word out there in the internets. They are not reliable and they most certainly do not show notability - just the fact that people actually use this word sometimes (crazy!)
What's left after you remove this junk? What are these supposed "dozens" or "numerous" reliable sources?
- A link to a Polish dictionary [7] - which actually just shows that this belongs in a dictionary, not an encyclopedia.
- The source by Klosowska [8], which *I* was the one who put that in, trying to make something half way decent out of the mess that was in there. Importantly, this "source" for the word is a ... a one sentence footnote. Other than that it is again irrelevant.
- That whole "OPPOsite" website [9] and Patrycja Pirog which is really all that you have here. It's a goofy source (post-modernist writing nonsense) but I guess it does qualify under the heading of reliable sources. This is listed separately in the article's reference section 4 or 5 times, giving it an appearance that it's numerous sources being used, where it really is just one.
- A link to a tv interview by Poland's black MP who says he doesn't think the word is racist. Ok, relevant but by itself not nearly enough.
That's it. Of these only one can be considered both relevant and reliable, the Pirog article, though certainly not "high quality reliable source". And even that article is mostly about racism in Poland and only deals with the word in a minor manner. It's sort of as if you found an article on Racism in US, which discusses the word "black" and used that as a basis for creating an article on Black (word for black people) or something, rather than the appropriate article on Racism in US or Black people.
The tv interview is borderline - if this was really a notable article topic and there really were "numerous" or "dozens" (as people here keep erroneously asserting) of other sources on it, then I'd probably support it's inclusion. But there are no "numerous" or "dozens" of other sources - at best you got 1 - so by itself this doesn't cut it. Volunteer Marek 17:37, 30 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- I see you have a PhD, where did you get it? I want one from there too! Malick78 (talk) 19:48, 30 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Don't act like a stupid asshole. You've just dismissed everything I said with an obnoxious off-topic comment which is obviously meant to be insulting. Sort of speaks for itself. Volunteer Marek 16:00, 1 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- And you try to stay civil. Otherwise you might get in trouble, like you have been before (you are the editor-formerly-known-as-Radeksz from the Wikipedia:Arbitration/Requests/Case/Eastern European mailing list, aren't you?). Malick78 (talk) 17:44, 1 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Look, if you're gonna make personal attacks on people and make obnoxious comments then you have no right to demand that they "stay civil" towards you - you've given up the right to that kind of consideration. I could've reported you for that PhD comment but it's more time-efficient and to the point just to call you on it. Volunteer Marek 18:17, 1 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Surprised keep. Those who know of some of my previous AfD activity may be surprised to see this, but this is a good example of an article about a word that actually has valid encyclopedic coverage. I will point to this article in the future as an example of what some of the truly horrendous dictionary entries we have here should look like. Powers T 19:01, 29 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Delete - per comments above. This belongs in Wikitonary, not Wikipedia. Author of the article is trying to make the term seem more controversial than it really is by cherry picking sources to make it seem more notable - in an encyclopedic sense. Move the whole thing to a dictionary. Volunteer Marek 20:12, 29 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- it's hard to see how anyone could cherry-pick in order to make something seem notable. what would they do? omit mentions of sources that don't discuss the topic? if there are reliable sources that discuss the topic then it's notable. a place for cherry-picking opens up if there are opposing views on an already notable topic and someone doesn't give a balanced account of that. that's how the term is usually used.— alf.laylah.wa.laylah (talk) 20:42, 29 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Please assume good faith, Volunteer Marek. No cherry-picking was needed. The first articles I found were all about the controversial nature of the word. Not many people write about words to say how unexceptional they are :) Malick78 (talk) 21:59, 29 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- In a way this actually addresses alf.laylah.wa.laylah's objection. It's a relatively - though not completely - uncontroversial word. So yeah, the only sources you're going to find are going to be ones which say it's controversial (and write down, that's basically 1). The people who think it's not controversial are just not going to write articles about it. So to answer alf.laylah.wa.laylah's question - yes, that's what cherry-picking involves here - not mention all the sources which use it in a controversial way. Volunteer Marek 22:18, 29 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Hmm, so if I say Obama is a woman... can I back it up by pointing out the lack of webpages devoted to his female nature? Because, hey, if no one bothers to write about it, it must be something uncontroversial that everyone knows. Malick78 (talk) 22:35, 29 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- That's actually a pretty good example. It's as if you started an article on The femaleness of Obama and then claimed that it was a notable concept because you found some post-modern studies article (singular) (and I am certain that such exists) about Obama's femalness. And then claimed that it made the topic notable. And then said "well, I can't find any sources which say that don't deal with Obama's non-femalness, therefore the concept is notable". ??? Volunteer Marek 22:43, 29 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- find the sources, write the article, and i promise to !vote keep when it appears here.— alf.laylah.wa.laylah (talk) 22:51, 29 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- I'm afraid you missed the point ;) --Lysytalk 17:26, 30 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Keep: The "Murzyn" article provides substantial information on a notable topic, and the information is too extensive to fit in a dictionary. Comparable articles on use of analogous terms in other languages would also be welcome. As an electronic encyclopedia, Wikipedia can accommodate topics that might not be considered in a paper encyclopedia. Nihil novi (talk) 03:56, 30 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Keep: Upon a closer examination of the article, I'm changing my mind, and I support keeping it. Maybe I should have withdrawn this AFD now but first of all I don't know how to do that, and secondly, let's have it completed for the sake of future doubts like mine. At the same time I would like to apologize Malick and everyone involved for the time wasted on the afd :) --Lysytalk 17:23, 30 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Thanks :) Out of interest, what finally swayed you? Malick78 (talk) 19:43, 30 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Cycki murzynki. But seriously, some minimal research that I've done trying to verify some claims of the article. My initial impression was that this is yet another vanity article by a frivolous editor and that the term itself is trivial. However I've realized that the word actually does not translate well into English, and has an interesting and dynamic semantics. The article has some potential to develop, possibly into something different, which I perceived at a threat but hey, evolution is the spirit of wikipedia. Still, I stand that the sources are poor or irrelevant, but I've seen worse :) --Lysytalk 08:10, 1 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- I'm glad the article has inspired somebody to research the subject :) As for the sources, hey, if I'd written a perfect article I'd feel bad that I'd left nothing for anyone else to contribute ;) Malick78 (talk) 10:05, 1 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- That's what wikipedia is for ... --Lysytalk 11:22, 1 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Cycki murzynki? Now I feel like WP:RFD this. Is this cake even notable? I admit I've never heard of such a cake... Who is going to search for it? --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| talk to me 01:56, 2 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Check google. I was surprised myself. Apparently Malick knows more about this cake. Myself I'll try to find and try some. --Lysytalk 07:28, 2 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- It's a real cake, sure. Available in many places around Warsaw, though 'murzynek' is more common. Malick78 (talk) 08:20, 2 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Keep Some words are notable.Ezaid Fabber (talk) 19:28, 3 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Delete and salt: I can't see any possible reason to have an article in English WP about a racial slur in Polish or any foreign language, especially when a corresponding article under that heading does not even exist on Polish WP. Sometimes, a foreign language slur may become familiar to English language speakers, like the Japanese "Gaijin", but this clearly hasn't happened with "murzyn". Not by a long shot. The subject of the article is Polish-language-specific at best and totally lacks any global relevance or significance whatsoever for English language readers (except those that also know Polish, and then exclusively because they know Polish). Most of the sources are of dubious relevance and reliability, trivial or tangential; a Christian on-line newsletter, passing references in newspaper articles on completely unrelated topics, a dictionary entry for a cake with a similar name and the like. The only reliable sources that discuss the term in any detail are all entries in Polish language dictionaries. Delete per WP:NAD, doubly so because the term is practically never used in English except perhaps among Polish speakers. As for the argument that the word is notable because of the the "controversy" that surrounds it in Poland, that's simply balderdash. I've been living in Poland for nine years, speak Polish, read the Polish press and am rather conversant with what is controversial and what is not in Poland. The "controversy" surrounding the word is not particularly notable even in Poland (again, as the lack of an article on Polish WP demonstrates). Not notable enough, by any means, to warrant mention in English WP. The fact that this word has been discussed by Polish scholars doesn't mean much as much the same can be said for thousands of words in the Polish language. That discussion also has very little global relevance outside of Poland. Dominus Vobisdu (talk) 09:41, 4 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- And I in contrast started the article because, while living in Poland and conversing with my young, educated Polish friends, have noticed that the word has a controversial status. As for 'global relevance', that would suggest deleting all articles on Polish villages, non-ministerial MPs, barely-read-outside-Poland books... etc. Wouldn't deleting these be deleterious? Malick78 (talk) 17:37, 4 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- How conroversial, compared to Ojciec Dyrektor, Smoleńsk, lustracja. in vitro or the American visa question? It certainly doen't make the Top Ten list of controversies in Poland. I'm not that sure it makes teh Top Hundred. See, it's a matter of degree. Now do you think it's notable enough to incude on English WP. Also, the other types of articles you mentioned have their own sepaerate criteria for inclusion in WP. None of those criteria apply here. Dominus Vobisdu (talk) 17:54, 4 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Hmm, the fact that the white majority haven't quite twigged that racial terminology is important doesn't mean that it's not. But actually, I do think it makes the top one hundred :) And a Polish MP bothered to talk about it on TV... Think about that: it's hard to get them to do anything :) Malick78 (talk) 18:45, 4 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Hard to get a Polish MP to talk? You miust be kidding. It's all they ever do. Endlessly and ceaselessly about any kind of bullshit under the sun, including Tinky Winky. Dominus Vobisdu (talk) 18:51, 4 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Keep. The threshold for inclusion on WP is whether multiple reliable sources have discussed the topic in depth. (WP:Notability: "If a topic has received significant coverage in reliable sources that are independent of the subject, it is presumed to satisfy the inclusion criteria for a stand-alone article or stand-alone list.") Here are some instances. [10] is a 10-page journal paper entitled “THE 'MOOR (NEGRO)' HAS DONE HIS JOB, MUST THE 'MOOR (NEGRO)' GO? THE HISTORY AND THE FUTURE OF THE WORD 'MURZYN' IN POLISH” and its abstract includes the sentence “There is a repetitive question coming up in publicist sources, how to replace 'Murzyn', if Polish is to follow western languages, in which the word Negro has come out of usage.” Another source is entitled “A NEGRO DID WHAT HE WAS SUPPOSED TO DO...'. A STUDY OF SOME ETHNIC METAPHORS’ [11] – its abstract states “The article reports on research whose goal is to analyze the image of black people in the Polish press after 1989. The aim of this work is a presentation of 'ethnic metaphors' with the lexemes 'Murzyn' (Negro), 'czarny' (a black man), 'Kali' (the name of a black hero in the novel 'W pustyni i w puszczy' by Henryk Sienkiewicz), 'Olisadebe' (the surname of a popular African football player, a member of the Polish national team) and others.” Those two articles are pay-to-view, but their abstracts speak to the in-depth coverage point. There is a derogatory form, ‘’murzyny’” as mentioned in the book ‘’Slavic gender linguistics’’ [12]. This article [13] about a Polish explorer, Sygurd Wisniowski, says: “In nineteenth-century Polish, "murzyn" functioned as a semantically neutral designation for "one belonging to a black race. African or American negroes"; its general application was possibly consistent with nineteenth-century anthropologists' attempts to create a terminology to categorise human races-"negro" being one such term. By contrast, Wisniowski's references to Maori employ a more varied, semantically structured set of terms, in which "Murzyn" features only once. Its use in "...parlament, w ktrym zaden Murzyn nie zasiada" [the parliament in which not one Negro serves] is significant in that it highlights both the absence, and the improbability, of any non-European serving in the New Zealand Parliament. As such, it functions as a statement of the inherent inequalities in the system of colonial government and of the author's perception of the European colonists' treatment of any indigenous population simply as another dark-skinned (and therefore unequal) people. In that context, "Murzyn" appears to issue from the mouths of the settlers, and thus could justifiably be translated as "nigger." Put together with the Polish MP’s statement and other material already in the WP article, this strikes me as meeting the notability standard. Novickas (talk) 16:00, 4 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Keep Has encyclopedic value beyond a dictionary definition.♦ Dr. Blofeld 16:01, 4 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Keep An article about the significance of a word that can go beyond the definition is always justified, if there is enough material--as there certainly is here. That the subject term also is found in dictionaries is not reason it would not be here: under that reason, we'd have to remove--among about a million other articles-- the article on Poland. And that the Polish Wikipedia has no corresponding article doesn't affect us if we can show the importance--the different encyclopedias have different coverage guidelines, or perhaps they haven't gotten to it yet, and will now. I'll just comment on two particularly misguided deletion reasons: one, that we ought to cover topics (including words & concepts) in Polish any less than we do English. We're the encyclopedia written in English, covering everything in the world notable enough to have an article for which we have people willing to do the writing--just as do other Wikipedias. Fortunately, many of the people active on other language Wikipedias are active here also, Polish being an excellent example of that, and we are in a better position to take advantage of that than some other Wikipedias may be. And another misguided reason that is fundamentally behind some of the delete opinions for words like this: that we do not cover topics which make some particular group look bad--that we might not want to recognize the fact that a particular language has a opprobrious term for outsiders; this is a failure to recognize the basic nature of NPOV and NOT CENSORED. The world includes a lot of unpleasant things, and they're part of the domain of an encyclopedia. DGG ( talk ) 02:46, 5 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
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The result was keep. Move to History of horse domestication theories and expand. King of ♥ ♦ ♣ ♠ 08:22, 5 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
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The theory appears to be non-notable, if not entirely non-existent. A google books search for "four foundations theory" gets exactly one hit, to a "book" which is actually a compilation of articles from ... Wikipedia. "four+foundations+theory" Worldcat, 0 hits; JSTOR, 0 results; Google scholar, 0 results. Searching the principal source cited in the article, Bennett's Conquerors, for the string "four foundations" in Google books gives no result (which may of course be due to shortcomings in Google). Justlettersandnumbers (talk) 12:10, 28 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Delete The portion of Bennett's book which is cited can be read through Google Books. It does not seek to establish any such theory; indeed, the number of subspecies Bennett talks about varies through the passage. I find it hard to justify keeping the article in the absence of a scholarly source that presents this theory under this name. Mangoe (talk) 12:38, 28 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Based on subsequent discussion I'm inclined to go along with the renaming proposals. Mangoe (talk) 16:02, 30 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Keep - while not named as such, it's covered in such books as The Horse by Julie Whitaker (published 2007, isbn 978-0-312-37108-1 p. 20), Horses and Horsemanship by Ensminger (1990, isbn 0-8134-2883-1 pp. 4-6) (note that this is a agricultural science textbook, so it was taught in schools), A Natural Approach to Horse Management by Susan McBane (1992, 0-415-62370-X, pp. 10-12), The Worlds Finest Horses and Ponies by Richard Glyn (1971, isbn 0-245-59267-9, pp. 13-16). That's just from a quick pull from my bookshelves. I'm not opposed to a rename, if a more suitable name can be found, but the fact that books published in 2007 are still peddling this now-discredited theory, certainly makes it notable. Ealdgyth - Talk 12:56, 28 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- If it's a theory without a name, wouldn't a short section in horse do? Mangoe (talk) 13:08, 28 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Keep -- the name is not a good one, but this is a topic with historical value considering history of horse research. It's a major theory, if obsolete, and should be covered. Pitke (talk) 14:16, 28 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Merge Material looks encyclopedic and sourced. North8000 (talk) 14:24, 28 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
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- Oppose deletion or merge, possible renaming: The Domestication article already covers this in a summary fashion, to add all of it there would put undue weight on this older theory when that article is already long and has extensive discussion of current science. The term "Four Foundations Theory" is out there, but it is not necessarily an "official" name -- not sure if there IS a name. The question, of course, would be finding a new name, but that's doable. Montanabw(talk) 16:33, 28 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Two responses: first, if the term is "out there", it is reasonable to expect a citation to that effect. Second, I'm opposed to spending a lot of space on a theory which is now found to be incorrect. If it is undue in domestication, it's undue anywhere. Mangoe (talk) 17:00, 28 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Your theory would mean that we would need to remove wiki articles on, say phrenology or Geocentric model. We need to explain some of these older concepts, particularly when they still have echoes in the modern age. As stated previously, I'm OK with a rename, but I'm just not sure if there is an "official" name for the four/seven/multiple origins hypothesis that this article discusses. For amusement value, but also to bring home my point, here is a 1913 article that argues BOTH that the Przewalski is the ancestor of the modern domestic horse (it isn't) AND that there were two body types, the "Forest horse" and the oriental type. Montanabw(talk) 17:34, 28 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
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Keep'Rename to more inclusive and neutral title and expand to reflect history of domestication origin debate. The four foundations 'theory' once was a valid hypothesis about the origin of the various horse breeds. It has been found incorrect later when DNA studies became available. The information is far to much for the domestication article, where the current coverage there is already more than what I would give it. Based on that it has been discussed in the scientific literature, and has gained some prominence for a while, it seems right to keep an article about it. The problem seems to be more with the name, specifically because there does not seem to be a name proposed for the idea. And as Montanabw indicated, there are a lot of variants of this idea with two three etc number of founders...-- Kim van der Linde at venus 17:44, 28 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Updated with proposal below. -- Kim van der Linde at venus 20:14, 3 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Proposal: I have no idea what an ideal title would be, but would "multiple origins hypothesis" work? Just throwing it out there. There were also a couple of single origin hypotheses out there, arguing either the Tarpan of the Przewalski as the predecessor of the domestic horse, and yet another that argued that the subtypes were acutally separate species. This article, with yet some other title, could also discuss those a bit more. Montanabw(talk) 18:01, 28 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Delete/merge I have never been very convinced of the prominence that has been accorded this concept in the wiki equine pages. As noted already in the comments above, it doesn't have a standard name, which brings up the problem of WP:synth if an arbitrary name is given it by wikipedia. It was noted on the Evolution of the horse talk page, it was a very short lived (almost) hypothesis, which was very quickly shot down by molecular research. It never made it to the level of theory, and is only covered in a few non peer-reviewed books.--Kevmin § 20:17, 28 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Most of the material you have been concerned about in various articles I think has been replaced with more updated material that has become available. For those who care, the primary source for the article is pages 4-7 of this work. The problem that this article originally was designed to explore, and one that is a gap in other articles as well, is the development of breeds and distinct phenotypes. If you go out to various breed registries, many STILL insist that their breed was descended from the "pure" wild horse that was first tamed (therefore their breed is better). We keep revisiting the "wild horse" issue on WP over and over again when folks with romanticized beliefs about their favorite breed make unsustainable claims of great antiquity. So whatever comes out of this discussion, that's the underlying concern from my end. Montanabw(talk) 22:52, 28 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- As already pointed out in several places, including higher up this page by both myself and another editor, that source does not mention the theory at all, and as such can hardly be considered a reliable source for it. The use of it as a reference in the article is in my opinion questionable. Apropos, does the other source cited in the article, Gladys Brown Edwards The Arabian: War Horse to Show Horse, specifically mention the Four Foundations theory? On which page? Justlettersandnumbers (talk) 00:47, 29 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- You are ignoring several RS's presented. You seem focused on not liking the title, so argue for a rename. Expanding that to an argument for a deletion on that basis is a real stretch.PumpkinSky talk 02:24, 29 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- The idea in the article has been very well established, it was never formally named much. Not naming things explicitly is a normal thing for ideas that are generally accepted (as it was for a long time). -- Kim van der Linde at venus 22:50, 28 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Delete/merge Probably best explained somewhere among the up to date theories.RafikiSykes (talk) 21:07, 28 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Questions: for Ealdgyth: thanks for posting some references, I envy anyone who has a real library; but unless in those references the Four Foundations theory is discussed under that name, how are they relevant here? For Kim van der Linde: if it was once a valid theory, it should be easy to find academic sources that discuss it; since I have signally failed to do so (perhaps because I am not a very good researcher, or don't have access to the right databases) can you point us to some? Thanks to both (and indeed to all who have responded). Justlettersandnumbers (talk) 21:30, 28 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Well, I think there are two issues. The current article is far to single-minded focused on a single book with a somewhat more than before worked out scenario of the 'Multiple Origins Hypothesis' (MO). This theory was carried to rest first in this article and all subsequent follow-up articles. As for older articles supportive of MO, I have no idea, never really looked for those articles, but they do go back many many decades, which are less easy to find online. The second is the name, and the more neutral 'Multiple Origins Hypothesis' should do. -- Kim van der Linde at venus 22:50, 28 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- that Science article calls the theory (or theories) "mutliple origins scenario" or "multiple origins hypothesis", which is fine as a name, as far as I'm concerned. Another RS - Equine Genetics & Selection Procedures by Equine Research Publications published in 1978. This is another text-book type work. Discusses "four ancestral types" on pages 17-21. The name may or may not be a perfect fit for the article, but the fact that there was once a widely considered theory of multiple origins for domestic horses is definitely true. The fact that it is now discredited doesn't negate the fact that at one time variations on the multiple origins theory held the field. Another reference - The Horse (second edition) by Evans, Borton, Hintz, and Van Vleck (1990, isbn 0-7167-1811-1) pp. 5-6 where they reference Horses by George Simpson (1951, Oxford University Press) as sharing the idea. As a side note, I don't watchlist AfDs, so if you have a question for me, you need to ping me on my talk page. I also have the Vila paper that Kim van der Linde mentioned above. Ealdgyth - Talk 19:58, 29 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Keep: Even if people call it different names, this is a historically significant theory that is still being discussed. Deleting this is sheer deletionism run amok. Redirs from each major name option should be made to the parent article (this one or an agreed upon rename). I would also support a section on this in Domestication of the horse with a subarticle link to this article. PumpkinSky talk 23:07, 28 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Other info, My point, again, is not to promote the theory as current, but to defend keeping a separate article that explains what was once a widely held view and one that several breeds have a vested interest in continuing to promote in order to make their breed sound more "special." To illustrate this, I did a search just on "Tarpan" in Hendricks and pulled 20 hits, most of which were claiming various wild horse antiquity theories for various breeds. (Hendricks' weakness is that she pulls from breed propaganda without a lot of critical review) Another source, dubious but completely independent of wiki and with a decent critique of the theory, and at least sourced, though not particularly well, is at a spam-blocked URL associatedcontent (dot) com, and it comes up if you add /article/7837506/the_four_foundations_theory_of_horse_pg3.html?cat=53 The same author (Rena Sherwood) has a similar article in helium (dot) com at /items/1879457-four-foundations-horse helium.com], which I freely admit is not an RS for wiki, but as far as evidence the concept is "out there" and not a WP:SYNTH or WP:OR figment of the imagination, this will help. Montanabw(talk) 23:19, 28 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- I'm sorry, but I fail to see how "what was once a widely held view" could have gone so very thoroughly off the radar that the only source for it is an essay on a collaborative website. If a theory is notable, like, say, Phlogiston, it leaves a documentary record which persists after it is discredited and largely forgotten. And what is the relevance of the Tarpan here? That is not a theory, it is a documented fact; I believe there are photographs of it. Justlettersandnumbers (talk) 00:47, 29 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Keep - This is a notable (though now discredited) theory on equine evolution/domestication. Besides the references that Ealdgyth and Montanabw provide above, discussions of this can be found in The Encyclopedia of the Horse (Edwards, 1994, pp. 22-23) and The Illustrated Encyclopedia of Horse Breeds (McBane, 1997, pp. 8-9). These two I found in just a quick look at my bookshelf, without even doing an in-depth search or checking out the local library. The references provided show that this theory has been discussed in everything from popular literature to textbooks. Both of these books call it the "Four basic types", but I doubt this would make a good article name. The information in this article would be undue weight if merged to another article - a discredited theory does not deserve this much discussion in either Horse or Domestication of the horse. However, it is a notable theory that deserves to have its own article, as has been shown by the many sources provided here. This theory did go through several variants (as is shown partly by the difficulty of deciding on a name for it), and the discussion of these variants will make a long (and well-sourced) enough article that it should be split out on its own. Dana boomer (talk) 00:32, 29 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Some thoughts[edit]
After thinking a bit more about this, I think we maybe can find a more constructive solution here. What we know is that the single origin/multiple origin has been a debate for many many years, and the end conclusion was that both ideas were true (stallions single origin, mares multiple origins), albeit without the explicit link between appearance and breed types. This debate has been discussed in length in many many papers, and it was only solved in this century after DNA sequencing became very wide spread. It has been named many things, one alternative example is monophyly versus polyphyly. I think the best solution would be have an article detailing this debate, and have summary statements in the relevant articles. As a name, we can think of something like "Single versus multiple origins debate in horse domestication". That would be a more inclusive article and provide much more information about the topic than the current rather narrow article. Any thoughts? -- Kim van der Linde at venus 20:16, 29 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- I like this approach. I think it would make sense to come up with a good article name, move this article to that new name, and then build upon it to make it more comprehensive. We also could just start plinking away at improvements in the existing article while we work on a name. (I also have Vila, I think) Montanabw(talk) 20:40, 29 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- I also like this approach. Because of the various multiples of the multiple origins theory (was it three? four? seven? twenty-eleven?) "four foundations" is too narrow. I personally find "Single versus multiple origins debate in horse domestication" very clunky, but so far haven't been able to think of anything else that describes what we're looking for... I'm willing to help on the new article, although I think my "help" might be more along the lines of copyediting, formatting and cheerleading, since you guys have better libraries than me on this subject. Dana boomer (talk) 00:00, 30 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- What about "History of horse domestication theories"? -- Kim van der Linde at venus 13:43, 30 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- In the right direction except that it isn't really quite domestication; it's more like origin of body types or breeds. Maybe "Domesticated horse origins hypotheses"? Still real clunky, but puts the subject first. Montanabw(talk) 17:47, 30 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Another try. History of horse domestication theories. -- Kim van der Linde at venus 20:14, 3 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Withdraw nomination. Kim has given us evidence that a theory something like this one, albeit with another name, was refuted in academic publications. If I understand correctly, that is taken as sufficient evidence of notability for a fringe theory here, so I believe I should withdraw my deletion nomination. I would be happy to defer to the scholarship of Kim and Ealdgyth, and see the article renamed and rewritten instead.
History of horse domestication theories seems to me as good a title as any, and definitely better than the previous suggestions. A question: as it stands, the article contains some discussion of hypothetical body types, and some of hypothetical species (
Equus agilis) and subspecies (
Equus ferus silvaticus); would/ should the latter be included under "domestication theories"?
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The result was no consensus. This is a case where we have a lot of coverage in independent reliable sources, but whether it is significant is open to debate. Many of them deal with iClothing as their primary subject, and when dealing with companies and their founders WP:INHERITED is always case-by-case. In this discussion, I did not find a consensus over this matter. Meanwhile, WP:COI and WP:BLP are non-issues with regards to deletion. First of all the COI allegations are speculation, and even if they were true, the article should stay if the subject is notable. BLP violations, if any, can be addressed by removing unsourced content from the article. King of ♥ ♦ ♣ ♠ 08:14, 5 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
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Fashionista subject is not notable per the following: guidelines:
- The person is regarded as an important figure or is widely cited by peers or successors.
- The person is known for originating a significant new concept, theory or technique.
- The person has created, or played a major role in co-creating, a significant or well-known work, or collective body of work, that has been the subject of an independent book or feature-length film, or of multiple independent periodical articles or reviews.
- The person's work either (a) has become a significant monument, (b) has been a substantial part of a significant exhibition, (c) has won significant critical attention, or (d) is represented within the permanent collections of several notable galleries or museums. (...)
After significant cleanup per WP:BIO, WP:SOURCES, and WP:BLP the article content indicates its subject is not notable in an encyclopedic way. Some media coverage has been given to the subject's clothing line as a concept, but a stand-alone article for this individual as a subject is not supported by that scant coverage. Having removed interested parties from references, the facts they asserted, and assertions unsupported by any citations, the article reads like a brief social media profile. JFHJr (㊟) 05:37, 28 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
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Hi JFHJr,
Reichman is not a Fashionista, she is a fashion entrepreneur [1]. Her iClothing brand and her Being Born Again Couture mark that.
You have "cleaned up the article" in such a way that it is very obscure and there is nothing left of Reichman except a few lines which by itself aren't notable.
I don't know if I could do this, because I am new, but could I roll back your "cleanup" to the one before you "edited", therefore Reichman is notable once again?
- Keep and roll back the error
Thank you. Domenico.y (talk) 06:04, 28 September 2011 (UTC) Domenico.y
— Domenico.y (talk • contribs) has made few or no other edits outside this topic. [reply]
- Please have a look at WP:NN for general notability guidelines, then see WP:SOURCE, WP:BIO, and WP:BLP as to why the references were invalid, and as to why claims about living persons must be verifiable through reliable third-party sources. My edit summaries were adequate, and a rollback is uncalled for. JFHJr (㊟) 06:16, 28 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
"verifiable through reliable third-party sources" - interviewers and magazines interviewed Reichman for her notability and her fashion entrepreneurship for her founding of iClothing and she changed the course of history for 2 Australian fashion designers with Being Born Again Couture (which you took out).
Where are those cites of ABC News (America), CNN, The Wall Street Journal, Sydney Morning Herald (SMH), Gizmodo, www.news.com.au (Australia), 360Fashion, Fashion ONE TV, Channel 7 & Channel 9 (Australia), ChanceTV (NYC), Veja TV (Latino) and NDTV (China)?
She is Australian but she moved to New York City to make a name in the fashion industry which is mighty hard and she has.
Please roll back the changes that you have made so others can comment on her notability.
Domenico.y (talk) Domenico.y —Preceding undated comment added 06:37, 28 September 2011 (UTC).[reply]
- For context, this is the version of the article before I edited. I removed references and text gleaned from sources either directly from the subject, closely related, or which were uncited. There were no CNN, Wall Street Journal, Gizmodo, ABC, and other cites when I removed content. That's why I removed the content (see WP:BLP). Even when covered in media, one story does not establish notability. Please take care to verify that edits you think happened actually happened. JFHJr (㊟) 06:49, 28 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Ok, thanks - the references have been removed by a little pixie I think! I will edit the references back in but tomorrow evening. Thank you for your time. Domenico.y (talk) 07:01, 28 September 2011 (UTC) Domenico.y[reply]
- Delete - the references are nothing but fleeting mentions and the web pages mostly closely paraphrase the same articles or a press release about an event. This is not extensive coverage in the serious press that make for reliable sources. Fails WP:BLP, WP:BIO and WP:ORG whoever (person) or whatever (fashion company) the subject is. The article is a blatant vanity page. Kudpung กุดผึ้ง (talk) 12:33, 28 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
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- Delete per same rationale as Kudpung. Chillllls (talk) 16:21, 28 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Now, I have re-written the entire article so it has references before which JFHJr could not find. I have rolled back the comments till "Ok, thanks - the references have been removed by a little pixie" at 06:49, 28 September 2011 (UTC). Put a "rescue" tag for admins Domenico.y (talk) 19:29, 28 September 2011 (UTC) Domenico.y[reply]
- I've reverted your removal of other people's comments. Please don't do that anymore. --Floquenbeam (talk) 20:42, 28 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Please stop adding references published by Davina Reichman (Linkedin profile) or for her (Q&A by Reichman; statements by companies, groups, or events associated with Reichman). These are inappropriate because they are not reliable, verifiable, third-party references. Blogs are also problematic and should not be used as references. Please also make sure the cites you use actually refer to the content in the references; "DAY 4 RAFW 2010. Killer Wedges, Draping genius, True Blood and front row privalage(again)", Beyond the Runway and others that you added did not actually refer to the claims contained in the article. Also, if you can't find references, please don't cite the statement with "Couture Fashion Week NYC website www.couturefashionweek.com but can’t find reference – where should I look?" – if you put the content in the article, a reference must be ready. Otherwise please keep these things as a draft in your own user subpages. Thank you. JFHJr (㊟) 19:58, 28 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Wall Street Journal or News.com.au, a subsidiary of News Limited or Womens Mafia or Artmonthsydney not reliable? You have got to be kidding, JFHJr. Since when can that be faked or not reliable? I will edit the article again to ensure the references by NOTABLE publications are available for everyone to see.
Domenico.y (talk) 20:20, 28 September 2011 (UTC) Domenico.y[reply]
- For example, the WSJ Blog and news.com.au video are about iClothing, not really about the creator. Interviews don't necessarily establish notability for the speaker, but may be probative of the notability of the subject about which they're speaking (iClothing). Interviews and the like are objectively problematic because we're hearing firsthand accounts of the subject. Otherwise, mentions must be notable, and not every mention in press garners notability. The two-part article on Fashion Maga-Zine is clearly closer to an acceptable WP:SOURCE (here and here), but a notable person (cf. that person's products) should have wider coverage in well-known, reliable media if it's truly a notable person. JFHJr (㊟) 20:36, 28 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
I disagree - Reichman created and founded iClothing, facilitating them. She created a new technology-fashion instrument. How many of you out there have done that please? Please see the video on news.com.au and read the article on The Wall Street Journal, if you haven 't already.
Who's to say what is well known? Are you Australian? Do you consider the Mornings with Kerri-Anne "notable"? The population of Australia tunes in every morning to watch that show and it is on every workstation TV in consultancy's around Australia.
As for ABC TV, that is notable because they are in every country. They take off old links from the past 6 months every year to make room for more content. There was a link on ABC TV's Art Nation but now it appears to be gone. Shall I cite [dead link] but somehow get the archived old copy?
Please look at the images from the Being Born Again Show and compare them to the images on the different sites - they are exactly the same, Lo Sordo and Fenitti created garments with Reichman's assistance and influence.
Thanks Domenico.y (talk) 20:48, 28 September 2011 (UTC) Domenico.y[reply]
- Again, you've restored problematic text despite clear explanations why it's inappropriate.
1) "Her career in [[fashion entrepreneur]]ship started from that point on.<ref name="chance">http://chanceplus1.com/davina-aussie-celebrity-fashionista-takes-nyc/ "Aussie Celebrity Fashionista Takes NYC", ''Chance TV'', 16 May 2011</ref><ref>http://www.blacktiemagazine.com/New_York_Society/NYC_Awards.htm "New York Society News The Most Inspiring Individuals in NYC Awards", ''Black Tie International Magazine'', 30 June 2011</ref>" ... neither of these cites supports the statement you restored. You also added:[interviewed by] [[ABC TV]]'s "Art Nation"<ref> ABC TV,”Art Nation, presented by Fenella Kernebone”, 2 May 7pm [http://www.abc.net.au/arts/video/tv_program/ARTNATION.htm?clip=rtmp://cp44823.edgefcs.net/ondemand/flash/tv/streams/artsportal/artnation_10_fashionandart_hi.flv&title=Art%20Nation%20-%20Fashion%20and%20Art, retrieved Sun, Sep 25, 2011 at 11:32 PM</ref> Again, that video has zero to do with Davina; don't use irrelevant cites.
2) Davina Reichman is affiliated with the Being Born Again Couture Fashion Show, which is arguably not notable in itself. References authored by the BBACFS are unacceptable because they are closely associated with Davina, and because the event's mention is not notable.
3) Again, Q&A sessions are problematic because we're getting information about the subject from the subject. Please stop adding this reference for any of the content within it; also, interviews don't make the interviewee notable.
4) your references here do not support the claims you made in any way: Reichman created and influenced 2 famous Australian fashion designer’s range, Michael Lo Sordo<ref>Gallery Talk: Christopher Horder and fashion designer Michael Lo Sordo discuss their collaboration for Australian Fashion Week 2010, [http://artmonthsydney.com/_webapp_793518/Gallery_Talks_-_Precinct_3?A=SearchResult&SearchID=1836949&ObjectID=793518&ObjectType=35]</ref><ref>Runway Comms, photo of Lo Sordo’s fashion design print by Getty Images, exactly the same as the Being Born Again Couture fashion show print [http://beingbornagain.net/Images/web_sm/Michael_Lo_Sordo_Christopher_Horder.jpg] print a month before [http://runwaycomms.onsugar.com/RAFW-2010-runway-comms---Adelaide-Fashion-PR-Lui-Hon-Elliot-Ward---Fear-Saint-Augustine-Academy-Michael-lo-Sordo-8361646 "DAY 4 RAFW 2010. Killer Wedges, Draping genius, True Blood and front row privalage(again)"], ''Beyond the Runway''</ref>. and Nicola Finetti<ref>Nicola Finetti Guy Peppin Collaboration is exactly the same as the Being Born Again Couture fashion show print [http://beingbornagain.net/designers/Nicola-Finetti-Guy-Peppin-collaboration.html]</ref><ref>Nicola Finetti spring/summer 10/11 Arrow Peplum Full Circle Dress [http://www.nicolafinetti.com/eboutique/nicola-finetti-ss10-11/252-arrow-peplum-full-circle-dress.html], 2 May 2010</ref> using her Being Born Again Couture Fashion Show. ...these are not acceptable references for the assertions you're making! This is original research. Please read WP:SOURCE and WP:OR.
I'm removing the parts that cite only that Davina was interviewed. It's not notable that she was interviewed. If she's notable, there will be something about Davina from a third party source.
And finally, if you need to cite to a dead link, try searching the Wayback Machine (just google it). JFHJr (㊟) 21:12, 28 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Ok, hold on please ((hold))
Domenico.y (talk) 21:24, 28 September 2011 (UTC) Domenico.y[reply]
P.S. I take it you don't know about fashion, but when people influence 2 major fashion designers, it's notable, no matter what country they are from. The designers may not have mentioned this, but through photos and references, we can see that. That is the sole reason I kept in those references. Now I have to really go catch the train for work. I will be back online in 13 hours' time.
Thank you for respecting that ((hold))
tag. Domenico.y (talk) 21:36, 28 September 2011 (UTC) Domenico.y[reply]
- Again, you have re-added the following: Reichman created and influenced 2 famous Australian fashion designer’s range, Michael Lo Sordo <ref>Gallery Talk: Christopher Horder and fashion designer Michael Lo Sordo discuss their collaboration for Australian Fashion Week 2010, [http://artmonthsydney.com/_webapp_793518/Gallery_Talks_-_Precinct_3?A=SearchResult&SearchID=1836949&ObjectID=793518&ObjectType=35]</ref><ref>Runway Comms, photo of Lo Sordo’s fashion design print by Getty Images, exactly the same as the Being Born Again Couture fashion show print [http://beingbornagain.net/Images/web_sm/Michael_Lo_Sordo_Christopher_Horder.jpg] print a month before [http://runwaycomms.onsugar.com/RAFW-2010-runway-comms---Adelaide-Fashion-PR-Lui-Hon-Elliot-Ward---Fear-Saint-Augustine-Academy-Michael-lo-Sordo-8361646 "DAY 4 RAFW 2010. Killer Wedges, Draping genius, True Blood and front row privalage(again)"], ''Beyond the Runway''</ref><ref>Photo, Natalie Imbruglia wearing Michael Lo Sordo Morning Time Drape Skirt[http://blog.leblackbook.com.au/natalie-imbruglia-wearing-michael-lo-sordo-mo], May 2010</ref><ref>TALENT Q&A: Davina Reichman [http://www.womensmafia.com/2011/06/talent-qa-davina-reichman/], 21 June, 2011</ref> and Nicola Finetti <ref>Nicola Finetti Guy Peppin Collaboration is exactly the same as the Being Born Again Couture fashion show print [http://beingbornagain.net/designers/Nicola-Finetti-Guy-Peppin-collaboration.html]</ref><ref>Nicola Finetti spring/summer 10/11 Arrow Peplum Full Circle Dress [http://www.nicolafinetti.com/eboutique/nicola-finetti-ss10-11/252-arrow-peplum-full-circle-dress.html], 2 May 2010</ref>
<ref>Nicola Finetti photograph of Natalie Gruzlewski wearing Being Born Again Couture Finetti/Peppin Collaboration, [http://www.nicolafinetti.com/logies-2011-natalie-gruzlewski], May 2011]</ref>
The claim of influence is not supported by the cites you've provided; only one reference mentions Davina (her own Q&A), and even that one doesn't say she "influenced" anyone. Please cite only to references that support your claim. JFHJr (㊟) 21:51, 28 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Dear JFHJr,
If you please look at the photographic evidence, you will see. "influenced" - it does not need to say that when looking at those images. Please look and see and then you will note that it is correct in saying that Reichman influenced. I am busy finding articles after work - please let me finish work. And hold off editing till I get off work because it is unfair. Admin - can you do something here please to put a hold on the article? Domenico.y (talk) 22:20, 28 September 2011 (UTC) Domenico.y[reply]
- I've looked at every cite you keep restoring. Multiple times. I've even watched videos you've used as refs. The influence you're identifying is not stated in any reference you've cited. What you're describing is exactly what is forbidden by WP:OR and WP:BLP. Have you taken a peek at these policies? You can't synthesize what sources don't say on their own. Such use of references to further WP:OR is not academically or encyclopedically acceptable. Again, please stop attempting to restore that section. Besides, even if you could conclusively establish influence through valid sources, you'd still have to show notability to have a mention in a WP:BLP. Please do have a third, second, or perhaps first look at the numerous policies and guidelines I've tried to point you to. Thanks. JFHJr (㊟) 22:26, 28 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- If you're going to talk about synthesising sources, please link to WP:SYNTHESIS to aid matters - it's probably not a word to chuck at non-native English speakers without explaining. And I expect it's a concept many non-academic people are not too familiar with, either. Ma®©usBritish [Talk][RFF] 00:26, 29 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Keep The person gets coverage in reliable sources mentioned in this AFD already. Dream Focus 00:39, 29 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Delete severe conflict of interest indicated with long winded defenses of this individual. clearly fails WP:BIO. gnews reveals a mere mainly 8 passing mentions confirming attendance at events. hardly makes you notable. LibStar (talk) 00:55, 29 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Delete I know her from Australia. This was obviously written by her or someone on her behalf. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 68.175.22.238 (talk) 01:09, 29 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
— 68.175.22.238 (talk • contribs) has made few or no other edits outside this topic.
- WP:IKNOWIT is not a reason for keeping. LibStar (talk) 02:13, 29 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Comment - I have to admit that the extraordinary efforts that the defender(s) are making to keep this article do indeed appear to be indicative of a very strong confilct of interest. Kudpung กุดผึ้ง (talk) 01:50, 29 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- On the other hand, it's also very easy to disparage newbie eagerness as being COI. As much as I see "COI" being thrown around, I have yet to see what the COI is, specifically. Until then, it's either a choice between obeying WP:AGF or contradicting WP:BITE. Ma®©usBritish [Talk][RFF] 02:03, 29 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Right on, Marcus. As far as I can tell, the WP:COI comments seem speculative. AGF says assume the editor simply feels passionately until it's clearly demonstrated otherwise. Let's talk about Davina Reichman's notability here. JFHJr (㊟) 02:27, 29 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Quite right, as I see it, all these "COI" stones being hurled are what some people consider "legitimate" personal attacks, which AfDs often resort to so I'm not getting embroiled in this one in terms of deletion – COI is often in the choice of sources, not the editor themselves, and people need to learn to discriminate between the two – as far as notability goes, I can't be sure, my strengths lie in history where notability is not usually as difficult to determine as "modern" personalities and BLPs. What with all the crap on the internet: mirror sites, blogs, twitter, scoops, etc I much prefer real scholarly books, and being able to identify notability from more than any website can offer, including Wikipedia; plus I'm not really into over-paid/over-rated celebrities and media attention anyway – I don't read magazines, don't watch TV or follow the news, so I'm not too good at recognising notable modern biog sources, or more to the truth, I'm not just patient enough to filter through all the "COI" online crap to separate it from "reliable" online crap – Google is useless these days, 1 good site in every 100 results. Given the considerable COI changes to, and debate surrounding this article I'm borderline weak keep/delete, and think "keep and improve" might be the outcome. In the case it gets deleted, I think Domenico can still work on a v2 from scratch and have less trouble in the long run than he has now. Ma®©usBritish [Talk][RFF] 02:52, 29 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Sigh. Give the guy/girl a break, he's/she's new. Possibly more important, COI or not, there really are some reasonable sources in amongst the hype. Don't throw the article out with the bathwater. --GRuban (talk) 01:57, 29 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Weak Keep: Despite the extra-long text above, the issue is simple. Yes, its not a great article, and it was created by the subject and likely subsequently edited by people with COI issues. But as to whether she meets WP:GNG, its a fair nomination, because its a borderline case. The coverage cited by GRuban is either enough or its not, we'll either reach consensus or not. It might get deleted, it might not, the outcome in these marginal cases of notability is not always predictable nor consistent, and the delete !votes have merit as well.--Milowent • talkblp-r 03:34, 29 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Delete - Obvious WP:BIO and WP:BLP issues, not even getting into the additional areas where I think there is evidence of WP:COI, WP:SYNTH and WP:OR going on here. Also, WP:BITE is not even light-years close to being a valid reason for leaving an article remain in the encyclopedia when it should be deleted. Trusilver 04:59, 29 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Hi,
I was researching last night and came across this article: http://www.textileglobal.com/2010/05/the-fashion-group-international-of-sydney-presentation-interpreting-trends-aw-2010.html and in here is the I think proof I am searching for: "Davina created & facilitated the Michael Lo Sordo & Chris Horder collaboration for Rosemount Australian Fashion Week. Michael is using Chris’ prints for his fashion collection this season." - it is not a blog, it is textileglobal.com.
I could have sworn I put this in the first place, but I can't find it. Is this necessary proof?
What JFHJr is concerned about I have speculation, not proof and he is right because I failed to put in that article it seems, but I think this is proof? Then I can put in the references of the photo of Imbruglia wearing Lo Sordo print, that runway.comms article and the ArtMonth article referenced? I don't know if I am allowed to do this though because there is too many 'deletes' already?
Thank you. Domenico.y (talk) 18:04, 29 September 2011 (UTC)Domenico.y[reply]
- Put the question, and similar comments, on: Talk:Davina Reichman as it'll make this page less convoluted. Ma®©usBritish [Talk][RFF] 18:57, 29 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Comment - Apparently Marcus' own research regarding COI now seems to suggest he
believes has a concern there is a COI. Since this information has not been updated on the AfD I am providing a link here [43]. ConcernedVancouverite (talk) 14:13, 30 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Do not assume or infer what I believe - WP:OR - I don't jump to conclusions, like yourself. The diff above does not state my belief, it poses a concern, get off your high-horse. You are using information to advocate a POV, and further harassing Dom. I have warned you about this priggish wiki-lawyering already on ANI: [44][45] I suggest you take note of it. Ma®©usBritish [Chat • RFF] 14:54, 30 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Of course there is a COI editor problem with the article, no jumping is required. Its a textbook case. However, whether the subject is notable for purposes of AfD is a separate inquiry. Everyone is whining about mostly irrelevant stuff in this afd. Gruban and myself and have addressed notability in our votes, Kudpung has rationally stated the non-notable deletion rationale. I think no reasonable admin is going to give D.'s wall of text too much weight.--Milowent • talkblp-r 15:06, 30 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Comment - Sorry if I incorrectly read your concern as a belief, Marcus. I have struck the word "believes" from my post and changed it to, "has a concern." Regardless of if you believe it is a COI, the evidence of such is quite clear. But as Milowent has rightly pointed out, that is not the primary concern of the AfD, and this should focus on the subject's notability. ConcernedVancouverite (talk) 15:21, 30 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- What evidence - tell me how a "friend of Davina" is any less biased than a Christian editing religious articles, a Beatles fan editing John Lennon articles, etc? The COI is thin-ice, he hasn't admitted to working for her. You're pushing your point too far, I've already raised this concern on ANI, I think you're out of hand and using this AfD as a mission to "punish" Dom for your own reward. It's no longer amusing. Ma®©usBritish [Chat • RFF] 15:29, 30 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- I am only responding here because you have asked, and providing a link to the COI logic here [46] and follow-up with additional information here [47]. But as we have discussed upthread the COI is not the primary focus of this AfD. ConcernedVancouverite (talk) 15:37, 30 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Both editors seem to have differing points of view in Talk:Davina_Reichman#Comment_and_action.3F.
Conclusion:
In any case:
Christopher Horder [48] is famous Australian artist which exhibits in Liverpool Street Gallery, Sydney, Australia.[49]
Michael Lo Sordo is a famous Australian fashion designer.
After the Being Born Again Couture in April, Lo Sordo received heaps of press in regards to the prints (which were collaborated by Christopher Horder) which Reichman 'created and facilitated'. Lo Sordo was showing in Australian Fashion Week using those very prints in May.
Now even for ArtMonth, Sydney Australia says "Gallery Talk: Christopher Horder and fashion designer Michael Lo Sordo discuss their collaboration for Rosemount Australian Fashion Week 2010." [50]
They collaborated for Australian Fashion Week [51] " Christoper Horder's CV reads"...Being Born Again Couture, collaboration with fashion designer Michael Lo Sordo" [52] and there is of course facebook [53]
"Reichman created and facilitated a Michael Lo Sordo and Chris Horder collaboration project for Australian Fashion Week" (according to JFHJr is the correct citing of the text) Textile Global, The Fashion Group International of Sydney Presentation Interpreting Trends Autumn Winter 2010, [54], May 27 2010
(It is much easier to put the text on the AfD for Reichman, because only 2 editors commented and 2 out of possibly 100 editors is not the majority.)
Domenico.y (talk) 17:51, 30 September 2011 (UTC) Domenico.y[reply]
- Don't use <ref>s in comments as there is no ((reflist)) in most talk pages, just articles; use 2 square brackets to link to wiki pages, one square brackets for external links. Also, Facebook is not a reliable source. Ma®©usBritish [Chat • RFF] 18:25, 30 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Hi JFHJr,
Why did you remove my text when you said to do "Reichman created and facilitated a Michael Lo Sordo and Chris Horder collaboration project for Australian Fashion Week"? with that reference? I do not understand. On wikipedia, it says that you should not remove anything without explaining it fully. I have let that slide as I am sure you have a good reason for it, but this isn't offering me help to improve the article and what I had asked for initially is assistance and help and only a few you of editors have provided that. Thank you. Domenico.y (talk) 18:19, 30 September 2011 (UTC) Domenico.y[reply]
- This is not the place for that discussion. The explanation and discussion are at Talk:Davina Reichman. You have misrepresented what I've said and done, and it's not the first time. You have also disregarded every bit of advice regarding the addition you made. Please read advice until you understand it. Your edits are becoming disruptive. JFHJr (㊟) 18:28, 30 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Regarding notability JFHJr What makes a fashion designer "notable"? It is because you say so in many posts that Lo Sordo and Finetti are not notable? In Australia, they are notable, they just don't have wikipedia pages. The fact that someone isn't "noteable" in other countries besides Australia does not mean they are not notable in that country.
For example, why did ConcernedConcernedVancouverite, another editor with the same privileges as you all, remove "COI" in the Being Born Again Couture Fashion show article but they did not remove that in any other place like for example in the Hugh Evans (humanitarian), Davina Reichmann or Anina (model), after I said that I have no relation or do not promote any articles I am editing? Confused.
I meant to say in the post while 2 editors agree on this point, can we see what the 98 or other editors say *before* you delete my edits please.
Reasons being: I can see from comparing the images that Lo Sordo and Fenitti's designs that they are the same or similar etc, but JFHJr would not have that as "proof" because it did not say "influenced", even though I cited a bunch of articles which intimated(?) that Reichmann may have "something to do with" Lo Sordo and Finetti choosing those particular artists to "copy" and make their Australian Fashion Week range out of (and yes, fb is not a source).
Fashion is subjective in some parts, not objective, take the designer houses "Louboutin vs YSL" case which was fought in court, so that is why I asked initially that could anyone please find someone that knows fashion and that can comment on fashion to assist.
Domenico.y (talk) 20:18, 30 September 2011 (UTC) Domenico.y[reply]
- Take it to the talk page - no one is discussing edits here. Ma®©usBritish [Chat • RFF] 20:27, 30 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Keep WP:GNG - She gets significant coverage in reliable sources already in article. Rednevog (talk) 19:46, 3 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Comment – Her coverage is mostly in regards to iClothing, which may be notable. But she doesn't WP:INHERIT that notability. JFHJr (㊟) 06:22, 4 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- The above discussion is preserved as an archive of the debate. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as the article's talk page or in a deletion review). No further edits should be made to this page.