"All three were scrapped after the war, and stricken in 1919." this suggests they were scrapped and then stricken, which I don't think would be the case? Suggest something along the lines of "All three were stricken after the war in 1919 and scrapped"
I feel like the First World War should be mentioned a bit sooner than it first is
Link North Sea (is this the main location in which S1 served?)
Do we have any further details on service? They may have just been particularly useless or unlucky submarines, but I expected to read of at least one or two succesful sinkings/captures?
@Pickersgill-Cunliffe: No problem at all, thanks for the review. I'm pretty snowed under at work at the moment, but will try to get to it as soon as I'm able. Feel free to poke me if I still to have forgotten about it! Harrias(he/him) •talk22:12, 22 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
My bad, looks like I covered off the easy stuff. Will try and have a look over the weekend and get the other points done. Harrias(he/him) •talk22:07, 22 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Harrias: Progress has slowed as you're clearly busy elsewhere. As such I'm going to fail this nomination for now. If you find yourself with more time later on and want to renominate, please give me a ping and I'll pick the review up again. Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk) 14:38, 15 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]