The example hook here isn't what I think it should be. It should look like: .... that... blah blah...?
It should be just one interrogative sentence, not two sentences with one interrogative and another sentence. Also, there's no need for the "Did you know" since the Main Page already has "Did you know..." on it. Another thing to keep in mind is that there must be a space between the ... and the beginning of the hook. This is the formatting that is used on en.wikipedia and many other Wikipedia, and I think we should do the same. – RyanCross (talk) 09:02, 26 September 2008 (UTC)