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Just making the note, please don't delete the page. I will go through it and work on it. -Barras (talk) 09:50, 4 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Tagged complex

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I didn't got through everything, but just in the history section, paragraphs 1, 4, 6, and 7 seem to be just copied directly from En. Others have very minimal changes. The En page has a Reading Ease score in the low 70s and this version is in the high 60s. It just isn't simplified. Much of the rest of the article looks similar. Gotanda (talk) 07:40, 27 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

On the other hand the lead and the African American Art Collection section are vastly simpler and the European Art Collection section is completely new. The en version is 26,155 bytes, and this version is 22,958 bytes long. Further work on this article was suspended when I was asked to do the chemistry articles. Racepacket (talk) 03:02, 28 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Some other long sentences

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THose should probably be shortened if possible:

Otherwise it looks quite good. -Barras (talk) 12:33, 21 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]