This is my first draft of this article. I suspect the plot summary is way too long, and I'm having difficulty filling out some of the other sections. I need to find which book -- either The Fall of Atlantis or Ancestors of Avalon -- gives a little history behind when and how it was originally written. Do I need a main character list? What else can I do to improve the article before publishing? Kltk78 (talk) 20:31, 16 July 2010 (UTC)