Promoted EyeSerenetalk 07:27, 5 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
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The last article in a future FT. These ships saw five of the major world powers of the time—France, Germany, Italy, the United Kingdom, and the United States—competing over the contracts to build them. Argentina used this hypercompetition to get what were probably the most advanced battleships in the world, but they were quickly eclipsed by more powerful and more numerous fleets of the major powers. Still, the intrigue during and even after their construction was surprisingly interesting to me; I hope it is to you as well. —Ed (talk • majestic titan) 05:54, 14 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
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Support per usual disclaimer. Just finished a second copyedit; comments welcome. - Dank (push to talk) 01:10, 26 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
*Is there a way to combine "Rivadavia and Moreno participated in training exercises, diplomatic cruises, and stints ..." with "The ship's crew conducted training and diplomatic cruises ..." just 3 sentences later? - Dank (push to talk) 14:45, 28 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Support It looks good on the first quick read I gave so far. Good job Ed and all. WikiProject Argentina -- Alexf(talk) 22:24, 28 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]