I know this isn't primarily a military article, but I feel it is relevant enough to come here, and I am getting fairly desperate for feedback on this; both a peer review and an FAC nomination have failed to attract interest in what appears to be a rather niche subject. Perhaps the article's length and attention to detail intimidate some readers. After a lot of work over the past few months I feel that this article is ready for A class and perhaps FA class too, so I really look forward to hearing your thoughts. Please keep in mind that my responses may periodically cease because of my ongoing service in the Israeli Army. Thanks, —Cliftonian (talk) 10:36, 5 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Comments. As always, feel free to revert my copyediting. Please check the edit summaries. - Dank (push to talk)
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(up to the 'Rhodesia seeks British endorsement for a Lisbon mission' section - I'll complete the review tomorrow). Nick-D (talk) 11:02, 13 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Further comments (I'll keep going, and then revisit my comments above a bit later):
Sorry, I've got a few more comments before supporting: