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((resolved)) Not what this page is for ~~ GB fan ~~ talk 15:32, 30 April 2010 (UTC) I bought every can of this I could find in my area, and then all of a sudden it was gone and 2-3 more scents popped up. Why was this limited? It's probably the best you've ever had and I'd like to find out how to get more. I don't even like the new ones. This was the best ever and you should know that according to how fast it sold out. Thanks, Beverly Stark, RN —Preceding unsigned comment added by 68.187.9.74 (talk) 15:33, 1 April 2010 (UTC)
((done)) reviewed with no response since the review from creator ~~ GB fan ~~ talk 15:40, 30 April 2010 (UTC) User:GeraldRice/Dave Lange
I'm looking to be sure my article on graphic designer Dave Lange is formatted correctly. Any help is appreciated. GeraldRice (talk) 19:30, 1 April 2010 (UTC)—Preceding unsigned comment added by GeraldRice (talk • contribs) 19:28, 1 April 2010 (UTC)
((done)) deleted per Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Vision Care for Homeless People ~~ GB fan ~~ talk 15:42, 30 April 2010 (UTC)
Vision Care for Homeless People Caring optician (talk) 21:01, 1 April 2010 (UTC)
Hope that helps, feel free to contact me if you need help or have additional questions. --Nuujinn (talk) 17:41, 4 April 2010 (UTC)
((done)) reviewed almost a month ago, no work by creator since review. ~~ GB fan ~~ talk 15:49, 30 April 2010 (UTC)
Hello! I am a new contributor and long-time reader of Wikipedia. I've decided it's time I become a more active participant. I've started by creating this simple article User:Ninjashoes/Romex_Cable which I hope to move to the main space. Please let me know if this page is a good candidate and how it can be improved. There is a disambiguation page for Romex, but no further description of the item itself. Thanks :) Ninjashoes (talk) 21:13, 1 April 2010 (UTC)
((done)) reviewed and speedy deleted A7 ~~ GB fan ~~ talk 15:53, 30 April 2010 (UTC)
Mariah 2010 (talk) 04:12, 5 April 2010 (UTC) Maria H 05/04/2010
I do not understand why this is happening. We are trying to create a profile for a company that is well known, well established. I see that you have been deleting everything. I do not know if there is something that we may have violated. If so, I think, you should let us know the appropriate links, that helps us get facts straight and improvise upon our work. However, I see that there is an element of pride in deleting, and announcing, NOTHING WAS LEFT. Would it not be so obliging if you as an admin showed us the path, rather than showing, how you could just undo all that we did. We are neither spammers, neither junk, we are genuine, and want to be a part, if you could let that happen. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 117.195.194.123 (talk) 15:50, 6 April 2010 (UTC)
Sorry, forgot to sign in, like I said, we are new to this. For us users, any little definition or information that we look for, the first thing that we google is topic+wiki. The reason is simple, we think that they(wiki) will have accurate information. Well Infotech Enterprises is a company based in Hyderabad, and we do not have a wiki page. Yes, we are not here to advertise, else, we would not have our website, or spend so much on our ICM. We are here since we would also like to be known for what we are. We have not developed wiki pages, and do not understand the criteria that needs to be followed. I would be deeply obliged, if you could let me know what it takes to write a corporate profile about a company. What are the kind of citations you look forward for? What are the external links you look forward for? I have seen the corporate profile of Microsoft Corporation, and we are trying to develop something on the same lines. Ofcourse, we still have a long way to go, but our work is increased, when admins delete our work, instead of probably just letting us know where we lack,and how it has to be corrected. I will try and develop more content over the next couple of days, and request you to let me know where I do not follow guidelines, rather than deleting my work.
Thanks
Mariah 2010 (talk) 16:18, 6 April 2010 (UTC) Maria
((done)) moved to mainspace ~~ GB fan ~~ talk 16:16, 30 April 2010 (UTC)
Wrote an article on the lance rest that can be found at: User:Thjothvitnir/Lance Rest from what appear to be reliable online sources, one of which is the Metropolitan Museum of Art. It's relatively short but fills a gap in the elements of medieval armor group. Thjothvitnir (talk) 05:42, 27 April 2010 (UTC)
((done)) moved to mainspace ~~ GB fan ~~ talk 16:16, 30 April 2010 (UTC) To Whom It May Concern:
Please review my article at User:Davidwlo/Anshen & Allen.
I truly appreciate your time, comments and suggestions.
Thank you.
--Davidwlo (talk) 01:14, 28 April 2010 (UTC)
((done)) speedy deleted g7 ~~ GB fan ~~ talk 16:17, 30 April 2010 (UTC)
Kizer Energy Inc.
((done)) ~~ GB fan ~~ talk 16:18, 30 April 2010 (UTC)
Can I please get a review of Crabapple, Texas so that we can get the "new unreviewed article" tag removed. Maile66 (talk) 15:57, 29 April 2010 (UTC)
((done)) appears the creator does not need any additional help ~~ GB fan ~~ talk 00:10, 1 May 2010 (UTC) Carl Moyer Program
Please give a general review of this recently posted Wiki entry. I want to make sure it is clear and that all citations are noted.
--Riezebos Holzbaur (talk) 02:37, 3 March 2010 (UTC)
((Talkback)) Thanks for the feedback. I'll get on this right away to address the citation and neutrality issues! Riezebos Holzbaur (talk) 18:08, 10 March 2010 (UTC)
((done)) speedy deleted ~~ GB fan ~~ talk 23:31, 2 May 2010 (UTC)
Beachcomber Hotels
Hi, I've just modified my article. Adding some internal and external links to it and some more text as well. Can someone tell if either the article is ok or not plz and when are both of the top banner are going to be removed?
Thanks
Webbchot (talk) 05:47, 1 April 2010 (UTC)
((done)) speedy deleted ~~ GB fan ~~ talk 23:32, 2 May 2010 (UTC)
Scottish SlimmersThis page has been rewritten as I have a conflict of interest. Feedback would be welcome. Yvette Rayner Yvetterayner (talk) 13:34, 1 April 2010 (UTC)
((done)) speedy deleted ~~ GB fan ~~ talk 23:33, 2 May 2010 (UTC)
User:Deberam/Michelle_Farmer_Jewelry
This article is about noted jewelry designer Michelle Farmer and some of her one-of-a-kind jewelry collections such as Pearls and Leather.
Deberam (talk) 14:39, 1 April 2010 (UTC)
((done)) speedy deleted ~~ GB fan ~~ talk 23:41, 2 May 2010 (UTC)
User:BSapp/Enter your new article name here
BSapp (talk) 21:28, 31 March 2010 (UTC)
Iman Shumpert: Basketball player for Georgia Tech, currently playing in 2010 NCAA Men's Division I Basketball Tournament
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Guru120/Iman_Shumpert --Guru120 (talk) 16:46, 21 March 2010 (UTC)
Chzz ► 12:36, 22 March 2010 (UTC)
A new page for the National Private Pilots License (NPPL) User:Mobilesense/National_Private_Pilot_Licence
It's my first new page on Wikipedia, so be gentle ;)
It is intended that this be linked from the existing and extremely comprehensive page on Pilot_licensing_in_the_United_Kingdom as being the first level of UK license.
As a new student to flying in the UK, I found the information about NPPL confusing, inconsistent and difficult to uncover. I have assembled the key facts into a single page and shown supporting references where possible/relevant.
While the NPPL covers two categories (aeroplanes and self-launching gliders/powered handgliders), I've concentrated on the aeroplane aspects as a start.
Mobilesense (talk) 09:57, 23 March 2010 (UTC)
Hello,
I have created an article in my userspace about one of the few big, if not biggest, anime convention of Germany, User:Andersenman/Connichi. I am writing as an insider so I am somewhat struggling to find actually published references to, or by, "reliable sources" (although I am not revealing any "secret" interna) to make it entirely verifiable. This is my first article. I am looking forward to reading your responses. Thanks. Andersenman (talk) 13:22, 23 March 2010 (UTC)
I'd really appreciate you having a look at User:P4parrot/VirginMediaPioneers. This is the first time I've written a wiki articleso any feedback's appreciated.
Virgin Media Pioneers is a new video-blogging n=community for young entrepreneurs.
Thanks,
P4parrot (talk) 16:38, 23 March 2010 (UTC)
Thanks so much will definitely update that P4parrot (talk) 11:27, 24 March 2010 (UTC)
Rebecca_Smith_(beauty_queen)
User:Seth60426/Enter your new article name here
Good afternoon, I'd like to post an article on Mrs. Maryland 2009. Please reveiw and send any suggestions. I also can't find how to change the name. I'll keep looking.
Thank you!!!Seth60426 (talk) 18:22, 24 March 2010 (UTC)
This is a request for feedback for the page created on Robert Kozma. He is a highly experienced professor at the University of Memphis and Director of several projects that are of interest to the scientific world. I am a third party creating this page and therefore have kept an unbias tone. Thank you for your help. Helios Kirk (talk) 13:49, 24 March 2010 (UTC)
User:Lizzard388/Example/Steiner Electric
This is an article about Steiner Electric Company. There is not a page for them yet and I wanted them to be on Wikipedia since they are a well-known large company. This is my first time making a page on Wikipedia and wanted feedback. I also wanted to know how to make those boxes usually seen on the right hand side of company like pages on Wikipedia. Thanks! 3/16/2010 Lizzard388 (talk) 21:56, 16 March 2010 (UTC)
Thanks, I tried to work on it more and I added a lot more references and made some links throughout and got my infobox created. If you get a chance to look at it again it would be much appreciated! Thanks. Lizzard388 (talk) 20:56, 25 March 2010 (UTC)
User:Lizzard388/Example/Steiner Electric Hi, I made a draft of my first article on Steiner Electric Company in my userspace and want to make it a live article in the mainspace but wanted some feedback first so that it doesn't get deleted. I added a bunch of references and found more hard copy magazines that they are mentioned in that are not online from a few years back that I can add as well. I needed help with editing and making it as good as I can before I submit it to the mainspace. I also needed help with copyright issues and trying to upload the logo that is trademarked. I see other companies have their logos but I do not understand how to upload the one I have. Any feeback would be much appreciated as I would like to make it a real article as soon as possible! Thanks so much! Lizzard388 (talk) 16:13, 24 March 2010 (UTC)
Thank you! Looking forward to your reply after checking my draft! Lizzard388 (talk) 20:55, 25 March 2010 (UTC)
Hello Everyone, This is my first article and I would appreciate some feedback. This article is about Philadelphia motion picture director Jamie Moffett.
Thank you for your help!!
User:Meghan T/Jamie Moffett
--Meghan T (talk) 21:14, 25 March 2010 (UTC)
((Done)) - deleted (twice). – ukexpat (talk) 15:30, 6 May 2010 (UTC)
We are a a group of business students from Cal State San Marcos working with a company for our senior project and one of our tasks was to create a Wikipedia page for them. We are fairly new at this and any feedback you may be able to give us would help out a lot. Thank you for your time. Once again the article was Digital Group Audio.
Thank you,
Opmongooseegg (talk) 20:03, 3 April 2010 (UTC)Senior Experience Team, April 3, 2010
((Done)) - in mainspace and reviewed. – ukexpat (talk) 15:32, 6 May 2010 (UTC)
Hi, I'm trying to post an article on interior designer Glenn Gissler (should be either User:Misterajp/glenn gissler or Glenn Gissler. This is my first article for wikipedia - I've been very careful about making sure the subject is notable and has appropriate sources, but i'm getting very confused/overwhelmed by the protocol of actually posting. Any help would be much appreciated - thank you so much! Misterajp (talk) 21:20, 5 April 2010 (UTC) MisterAJP April 5, 2010
((Done)) – ukexpat (talk) 15:25, 6 May 2010 (UTC)
sir, plz give me detailas of shri ambika mander history. as wel as posibl. thanks Regards, <redacted>
((Done)) - article deleted per Afd, Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Digital Group Audio. – ukexpat (talk) 15:29, 6 May 2010 (UTC)
Digital Group Audio Digital Group Audio
We are a group of business students working on a project and one of our tasks was to create a Wikipedia article. Our first article was deleted for unambiguous advertising and since then the Team has changed the content drastically many times to make sure that it fits the rules and guidelines of Wikipedia. Instead of promoting a company or product, we made sure that it is used as a source for factual information. We realize it is difficult for start-up companies to enter articles onto Wikipedia because they tend to promote their products or brand name, so we revised the content several times over and read the guidelines in order to meet these requirements. With this said, the Team would love to hear any feedback that you may have in regard to this article. The Team has tried multiple times to rewrite the content and even considered retitling the article in order to meet these standards. Thank you for any feedback you can give us.
Egroset2010 (talk) 22:28, 26 April 2010 (UTC)Senior Experience Business Team, April 26,2010Egroset2010 (talk) 22:28, 26 April 2010 (UTC)
((done)) Speedy deleted G-11 and user blocked ~~ GB fan ~~ talk 20:28, 6 May 2010 (UTC)
This is a wiki about GodLike Machinima Productions which is a creation that was made by David Fraser a YouTube user. This is my first wiki. —Preceding unsigned comment added by GodlikeMachinima (talk • contribs) 19:43, 6 May 2010 (UTC)
User:Mcjanus/GlobalVision_Communication: I created an article on the company providing the world's first VideoStreetView - that is StreetView in 360° immersive motion video. Please help me review it to ensure it is sufficiently documented and well written.
Mcjanus (talk) 09:54, 26 March 2010 (UTC) User:Mcjanus/ - 26.03.2010
Hello, Please help by reviewing the following article, and provide feedback in order to improve the Billie Jean black sequin jacket page. User:DinhoGauch10/Billie Jean black sequin jacket DinhoGauch10 (talk) 19:29, 25 March 2010 (UTC)
I would like feedback on my article titled 'Mogamma'. Please check it out, any feedback will be helpful.
Thanks Maryam Negm (talk) 09:45, 25 March 2010 (UTC) 09:42, 25 March 2010 (UTC)
New article. Need to get some feedback please. User:Ncr09/Seniorhousing (Ncr09 (talk) 13:51, 27 March 2010 (UTC))
New start for StartCom: User:Dtech/StartCom.
StartCom was deleted about 3 years ago because of too little notability and spam. The company has grown quite a bit since then and has gained an important unique role in ICT-security (read the page). Okay to add again? —Preceding unsigned comment added by Dtech (talk • contribs) 14:03, 27 March 2010 (UTC)
Rachel's Organics This article is about a Welsh dairy company who became the UK's first certified organic dairy. Thank you for your help in improving this article. --Rachel Aberystwyth (talk) 10:30, 29 March 2010 (UTC)
Data Scientist User:Hofftodd/Data Scientist
Todd Hoff Hofftodd (talk) 22:14, 29 March 2010 (UTC)
User:Lynchtribe/Dr.Anadalakshmy Versus Government of India, CBSE
This is an article regarding a controversial practice in leading educational institutions in India, which has since been outlawed by the Supreme Court of India, as well as the High Court of Madras, Chennai, India.
The legal clauses have been quoted from a transcript of the court hearing, I believe this is from a public information website and is hence not copyright. Another quote is taken from a news website, and I am unsure if this would be breaching copyright restrictions.
I believe that this article is important and encyclopedic in nature as it outlines an important controversy in Indian Education and the court case connected to this.
Any inputs on this page would be much appreciated. This is my first attempt at contributing to wikipedia, I have never found an article I was looking for unavailable here thusfar, and have hence never felt the necessity to create a page myself!
Thanks!! lynchtribe Lynchtribe (talk) 09:33, 30 March 2010 (UTC)
((done)) article in mainspace, ~~ GB fan ~~ talk 00:51, 11 May 2010 (UTC)
I am working on my first article, User:Pgrig/Fort Andrews, and have it up as a subpage. I think I have correctly given it a Talk Page. Please see the questions I raise there.
The draft article refers to Fort Andrews, a now-disused Coast Artillery fort on Peddocks Island in Boston Harbor, MA. If it seems generally OK, I intend to add a couple of other photos (including a 1921-vintage Army map of fort structures) and some more descriptive details.
Thanks for your time in looking this over!
-Paul Pgrig (talk) 14:26, 2 May 2010 (UTC)
Thank you, GBfan. Please do take a look at my Talk note. The name of "my" fort is without any doubt "Fort Andrews," but from a quick search of the web, the "other" one (which already exists on WP under "Fort Andrews") seems to be referred to 50-50 with and without the "s" at its end.
It looks to me as if the existing article might need confirmation and then editing, and if the "hatting" procedure is used (which I am unfamiliar with), I'd like to make sure that there's no confusion about the spelling and identity of "my" Ft. Andrews Pgrig (talk) 14:46, 3 May 2010 (UTC)
The other question on my Fort Andrews Talk page involved the appropriateness of an external link to my website, CoastDefense.com. I have edited the article to re-include this link, in case other reviewers miss my Talk page. Pgrig (talk) 15:03, 3 May 2010 (UTC)
Hi there, I have had this page deleted for the following reasons. This page has been deleted. The deletion and move log for the page are provided below for reference.
03:20, 29 March 2010 NawlinWiki (talk | contribs) deleted "E3! Style" (A7: No explanation of the subject's significance (real person, animal, organization, or web content))
I created this page as it is as relevant as say dick smith, or Big W. After all you only need to see the recognition and references to see its relevance and acolades.
Can someone please tell me why this was deleted. I used article wizard to create it so have no idea what I've done wrong. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Tamarax163 (talk • contribs) 06:18, 30 March 2010 (UTC)
User:Hewins/Universal Syncopations
I created an album page for "Universal Syncopations." I based it on the article for Extrapolation by John McLaughlin.
This is the first article I have created. I would appreciate any feedback.
Thanks, Dan
Dan Hewins (talk) 14:53, 30 March 2010 (UTC)
Hi,
I'm responsible (as in a paid employee of the candidate) for editing the wikipedia entry for Joe Hoeffel, a candidate for the Democratic nomination for Governor of Pennsylvania.
I think I'm doing well with NPOV and citing sources, but I'm not clear what would be too "promotional." Is it legit to post a list of the candidates' positions on a dozen major political issues? (I see other politician pages that do so). Is it legit to say he has positioned himself as the socially progressive or liberal candidate in the field if I can cite multiple major newspapers saying the same thing? Or is that out of bounds and I should stick to dryer facts like "is running for Governor."?
Thanks in advance for any feedback you more experienced editors can give!
JoeHoeffel (talk) 20:07, 30 March 2010 (UTC)
Hello, i have written a draft article on proactive policing which is here. Any feedback would be very much appreciated. Thank you YouAndMeBabyAintNothingButCamels (talk) 05:51, 31 March 2010 (UTC)
User:Kncipi/Institute for Private Investors
Hello,
I am writing to request feedback on a userspace draft that I have been working on and would like to create a new entry with. It is going to be on the Institute for Private Investors. If you could please offer feedback, that would be great.
Thanks,
Kncipi (talk) 18:34, 26 March 2010 (UTC)
Apologies for jumping to conclusions! – ukexpat (talk) 19:54, 30 March 2010 (UTC)
That's ok - I appreciate your feedback!! Kncipi (talk) 20:51, 30 March 2010 (UTC)
Dear Wikipedia editors:
I would appreciate it if you could review the following page for Professor Barbara L. Kelleman.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Barbara_L._Kellerman
Professor Kellerman is a Professor at the Harvard Kennedy School and this page is about her career and work.
Any and all input is greatly appreciated. Thanks!
Mike --128.103.18.145 (talk) 16:34, 30 March 2010 (UTC)
Xiaopeng Rick Niu Nanluoguxiang (talk) 01:38, 31 March 2010 (UTC)
Please kindly help review this Wikipedia page about Mr. Niu. Thank you very much for your time. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Nanluoguxiang (talk • contribs) 01:41, 31 March 2010 (UTC)
Philippa is a South African artist, author and curator. She has contributed to art development through the management of various generous art budgets, by writing educational supplements and by touring the MTN Art Foundation's large collection around the country. Hobbs is in the process of completing her 5th and 6th art book. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 41.247.119.244 (talk) 20:56, 31 March 2010 (UTC)
((done)) Speedy deleted G11 ~~ GB fan ~~ talk 18:00, 13 May 2010 (UTC)
Ben Wynter
Hi wanted to get some feedback on the article written.
I look forward to your response
Cheers Billionaireben (Billionaireben (talk) 12:29, 13 May 2010 (UTC))
Not Safe For Vampires [[1]] —Preceding unsigned comment added by RichyDzeta (talk • contribs) 07:12, 2 April 2010 (UTC)
Philippa Hobbs http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Philippa_Hobbs
Philippa Hobbs is an author and art historian in South Africa. I would like some advice as to how the subheadings of the articles should be ordered, what biographical personal information is necessary (such as family etc.) and whether her current projects - incomplete books - should be discussed.
Annasor963 (talk) 07:57, 2 April 2010 (UTC)
User:Penfold77/Loch_Long This is my write up for a class of wooden sailing boat. Looking for feedback/reassurance as to whether it's ready for going live, it's my first wiki page. Cheers. Penfold77 (talk) 19:29, 2 April 2010 (UTC)
I was looking for someone to review Murray Chevrolet so as to get rid of the "unreviewed article" tag it currently has.
Xpapax (talk) 21:56, 13 May 2010 (UTC) xPAPAx - May 13th / 2010 Xpapax (talk) 21:56, 13 May 2010 (UTC)
A new section was recently added[2] to War in Darfur. The new content is extremely biased but contains some ideas worth mentioning and has been superseded by 50+ comments. The article receives little attention but desperately needs some. I've posted a comment on its talk page looking for solutions. It needs feedback. What should we do? dmyersturnbull ⇒ talk 20:02, 2 April 2010 (UTC)
((done)), over 3 weeks since feedback, no response from author. ~~ GB fan ~~ talk 16:00, 17 May 2010 (UTC)
This is a very simple article about an increasingly prominent Australian fashion house. I would appreciate any feedback or additions to this article. Thanks! —Preceding unsigned comment added by Ratorg (talk • contribs) 09:24, 15 April 2010 (UTC)
((done)), review completed, no response from the author. ~~ GB fan ~~ talk 16:02, 17 May 2010 (UTC) Edwin Hodge
tjbw (talk) 21:03, 17 February 2010 (UTC)
I am requesting feedback on User:Houstongal82/ Kevin Warren Sloan in order to move my userspace.
Houstongal82 (talk) 14:49, 31 March 2010 (UTC)
Thank you so much for the wonderful feedback - it was incredibly helpful! I'll make these changes and request feedback one more time before I request a move.
User:Ultrageist/Steven Fox Hello, I'm new and this is my first article for Wikipedia. I was wondering if I could get a feedback for the page created on Steven Fox. He is a respected classical music conductor here in New York. He also has a group perform with Baroque era instruments (reproductions). I might have some mistake here or there so any feedback would be much appreciated! Thanks so much
Ultrageist (talk) 16:30, 31 March 2010 (UTC)
Ultrageist (talk) 06:32, 7 April 2010 (UTC)
Hello Everyone. I am here to seek advice for the article: Baggataway (manga). It is an article relating to a Japanese comic. Among advices that I most wished to hear include Correctness in citation, Notability, and English style, but please feel free to tell me whatever come to your mind.
There is specific detail content - like further information of the characters - that I can possibly add, but I feel I should not spoil the original work too much.
Thank you very much Scchan (talk) 03:21, 2 April 2010 (UTC)
Thank you for your input. I agree with you are correct that at least some sort of summary is needed for foreign language information. I like your input being specific and clear. Depending on the outcome of the delete process, I will make sure that be added to that page. I also work on Meteorology and Atmospheric Science pages; for those, I have no worry about foreign language (it is actually quite interesting that the big foreign journals in my field are actually all English). Scchan (talk) 19:58, 4 April 2010 (UTC)
Do you think endorsements and reviews from independent professionals help the notability of it? I actually find out the work is actually endorsed by award winning creator who publishes in different publishers, and added that to the page. And somehow the work is also now listed under Lacrosse category, so I hope someone from Lacrosse group in here will say something. Scchan (talk) 21:27, 4 April 2010 (UTC)
Any feedback or reviews appreciated! David Weir (writer) http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/David_Weir_(writer) Thanks! Fiona Weir Talk
That's useful, thanks very much! I'll look for some more sources. I'm kind of hoping other people will flesh out the article, since I know I'm on thin ice doing it myself, due to (real or perceived) COI! Fiona Weir (talk) 14:56, 6 April 2010 (UTC)
Hi there. Could anyone please see if User:Buggie111/Books/The Atlanta Campaign is ready for the Book: space? I'd like to know if it it's ready to be sent out. Cheers, Buggie111 (talk) 21:20, 2 April 2010 (UTC)
User:TBGF/S'Quarrels TBGF (talk) 05:53, 3 April 2010 (UTC)
User:Herriottj/KaisKids, Cambodia
This is the first article I have ever written for Wiki. I welcome feedback on whether it has been written correctly and follows the editorial guidelines?
Kind regards Jill Herriott Herriottj (talk) 12:22, 5 April 2010 (UTC) —Preceding unsigned comment added by Herriottj (talk • contribs) 04:36, 4 April 2010 (UTC)
This is an article about a music service I found online. I found a lot of sources, but would like for someone to check it for me, if possible. Thank you!
Ericcartmenez (talk) 18:38, 4 April 2010 (UTC) Ericcartmenez 04/04/2010
ICST User:Josemariasaldana/ICST
I'd like to know if this article can be published. It is about an international organization that organizes international ICT conferences and publications.
Thank you
--Josemariasaldana (talk) 13:00, 5 April 2010 (UTC)
Hi, I'm requesting feedback on this article, User:4117Ashford/Accrediting_Commission_for_Community_and_Junior_Colleges. I want the article to be helpful to academics and non-academics alike who want to know the nature and significance of this commission's accreditation process. I use six different sources, four of them third-party. Much of the description of the process I derive from ACCJC materials because it is the authority on policies and procedures. Thanks very much. 4117Ashford (talk) 15:52, 5 April 2010 (UTC)
Requesting feedback on new Wiki page. What can I do to improve the quality and value of the entry. Thanks?
Timeshare Relief, INC. Mytwocents02 (talk) 17:41, 5 April 2010 (UTC)
What can I do make it sound less spammy? That wasn't my intention at all. There are other timeshare companies on Wikipedia, and I actually tried following their model and templates even, like Group RCI and Wyndham Vacation Resorts. How did those entries stick? Is it because they have very little info in them? thanks Mytwocents02 (talk) 21:54, 5 April 2010 (UTC)
How do I move it back to my userspace so I can fix it. I also realized that I failed to mention some critical controversies that may make this article more notable.Mytwocents02 (talk) 17:35, 6 April 2010 (UTC)
Could someone please have a quick review of this short article. It also has a couple of discussion topics/ideas.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Rhymester/Aberdeen_Bach_Choir
--Rhymester (talk) 22:26, 5 April 2010 (UTC)
Hello, I have created the following article for a friend but would like to hear any comments as this is the first article I have ever created. Thank you
Saeb Eigner - http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Seigner/Saeb_Eigner#External_links Seigner (talk) 08:24, 6 April 2010 (UTC)
User talk:Aerialfirefan/National Aerial Firefighting Centre (NAFC)
Aerialfirefan (talk) 05:37, 23 March 2010 (UTC)
Hi this is my first article. Can you please give me some feedback. Thanks!!!
Aerialfirefan (talk) 07:31, 7 April 2010 (UTC)
on page subject BORAGINACEAE the list of genera is partly covered by a photograph. I have not seen this before. Is it a page problem or a problem with my (work) PC, which displays other pages properly? As it stands, I cannot check the list of genera, (though there are other sources of the data), which spoils the page. - js.Boraginaceae —Preceding unsigned comment added by 137.108.145.10 (talk) 14:58, 8 April 2010 (UTC)
Elena Miscodan User:DianaTocu/Elena_Miscodan DianaTocu (talk) 17:07, 7 April 2010 (UTC)
Hi,
A few weeks ago I created a new page on Wikipedia for the organisation that I work for. It still has not been reviewd and as such still has the tag at the top of the page. Please can someone review it so that the tag can be removed. The name of the page is: European Educational Exchanges-Youth for Understanding (EEE-YFU).
Many thanks,
EEE-YFU —Preceding unsigned comment added by 217.136.253.131 (talk) 16:35, 8 April 2010 (UTC)
Jamie McCartney is sn artist and sculptor living and working in Brighton. He has achieved notoriety through his sculptures created form casts of the human body. His latest work 'The Great Wall of Vagina' is due to be finished this month.
Vitaled (talk) 20:38, 8 April 2010 (UTC)
I started an article for a 2010 movie Eyes in the Dark.User:Anakin 99/Eyes in the Dark I believe it is almost ready to be made public and that I have good reference web links, but I am not sure if I did the references properly. I would appreciate some review and feedback since it is the first article I have started myself.
Thank you.
Anakin 99 (talk) 20:17, 7 April 2010 (UTC)
There seems to be a disagreement over which version of the article is better. The new one is significantly shorter, but that is due to a large amount of unnecessary info included in the previous version. Any opinions welcome.
A vote section I created [3].
The versions in question
1. - longer version [4]
2. - the new, shortened one [5]
diff: [6]
Wladthemlat (talk) 13:52, 8 April 2010 (UTC)
User:Mikemahalo/Human_Design
This is my first attempt at an article. There was a previous article named Human Design System that was deleted, I have since found out that was sponsored by the originator and had problems with bias and commercial interest, and possibly copyright. http://deletionpedia.dbatley.com/w/index.php?title=Human_Design_System And this is WHY it was deleted http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Articles_for_deletion/Human_Design_System
I wrote my first version here on my own blog www.humandesignblog.com - http://mikemahalo.vox.com/library/post/ideas-for-wikipedia-article-on-human-design.html
however clearly wikipedia needs a different style so I started again with references, and left out most of the content.
The most obvious reference is not allowed, the personal Facebook of Ra Uru Hu, so I had to think, what references are verifiable, and the remaining facts were just that this exists, over here, you can look, it claims this and that, and there are so many websites and online communities, and now an independent book.
I would like to include more details of WHAT Human Design says, but these are not within wiki style, as far as I can see, and most of my first attempt and that of the deleted entry are not suitable, perhaps. Mikemahalo (talk) 09:52, 8 April 2010 (UTC)
Thanks for your comment Nuujinn. I believe the fact that Harper Collins have published the first independent book on Human Design is the new key that establishes Human Design on the wikipedia map. I just realised, it is not only the birth day, but the solar birth hour of the originator of Human Design, Ra Uru Hu. By coincidence, the moon is in a place that gives me unusual confidence and energy, to succeed where others fail, and my mood, you understand, is carpe diem. I am posting in mainspace and ready with my water pistol to defend my baby..
Mikemahalo (talk) 02:15, 9 April 2010 (UTC)
thanks - thank you - merci .... mercy!! Mikemahalo (talk) 12:04, 9 April 2010 (UTC)
The Adeyer Sportif is a rare Australian car that many have heard of but few know details about. This article will be, as far as i am able to determine, pretty much the only online information available at this time. Too many forums have misinformation from unreliable sources regarding this vehicle. Ignatzmax (talk) 14:13, 6 April 2010 (UTC)
User:Ignatzmax/Adeyer Sportif Too much like hard work so Im not going to bother with it then. The ONLY information i have EVER found in the last 5 or so years of looking, is in the one copy of wheels magazine that i found by accident. Since there is no more info anywhere else, the subject and car will die and fade into obscurity. I dont have time or the inclination to make information about a rare car sound more like a checklist. The info i posted was reworked from the magazine and what they did was suitable for the general public, so delete, erase, dispose of or do whatever to this information cos its fine to me. I dont really care.
Ignatzmax (talk) 13:44, 9 April 2010 (UTC)
((done)) ~~ GB fan ~~ talk 02:03, 23 May 2010 (UTC)
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Dr._Magnifico/Joey_Allcorn
Page for indie alt-country artist Joey Allcorn, singer/songwriter from Columbus, GA who's collaborators include Hank III, Don Helms, Lloyd Green and Johnny Hiland. This is my first attempt at Wikipedia authoring; let me know what you think. Thanks,
Dr. Magnifico (talk) 21:54, 14 March 2010 (UTC)
((done)) ~~ GB fan ~~ talk 02:04, 23 May 2010 (UTC) I would appreciate any feedback on the following article
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Claire_Buchar
Many thanks —Preceding unsigned comment added by TinaEPO (talk • contribs) 15:09, 1 March 2010 (UTC)
Many thanks Nuujinn, I have made some edits and would appreciate additional feedback TinaEPO (talk) 17:41, 22 March 2010 (UTC)TinaEPOTinaEPO (talk) 17:41, 22 March 2010 (UTC)
((done)) ~~ GB fan ~~ talk 02:07, 23 May 2010 (UTC)
Please review my article that was posted on Thursday March 4, 2010. Thanks!!
Wendyfables (talk) 20:02, 11 March 2010 (UTC) Wendyfables
Wendyfables (talk) 11:26, 15 march 2010 (UTC) Wendyfables Thankyou for the feedback - i will make the suggested changes!
(Wendyfables (talk) 17:40, 16 March 2010 (UTC))I made more changes that were suggested. Can you please review again and consider removing the flags? Thank you! (Wendyfables (talk) 17:40, 16 March 2010 (UTC))
(Wendyfables (talk) 16:59, 29 March 2010 (UTC) I've made additional changes to the document (cleaned up the LEED link issue) and removed several lists - please remove the flags or explain where the neutrality is compromised. Thank you in advance. Wendyfables (talk) 21:00, 29 March 2010 (UTC)
((done)) ~~ GB fan ~~ talk 02:08, 23 May 2010 (UTC)
Hi, I'd like some help on writing an article about Anna Margaret from the Disney original movie Starstruck. I need more info and sources so if you can please check out my userspace draft and if there's anything you think I should add, let me know.
Here is the link: User:JRsingersongwriter/Anna Margaret
JRsingersongwriter —Preceding unsigned comment added by JRsingersongwriter (talk • contribs) 02:40, 17 March 2010 (UTC)
((done)) ~~ GB fan ~~ talk 02:09, 23 May 2010 (UTC)
User:Becca Berkenstadt/DePaul University's Coleman Entrepreneurship Center —Preceding unsigned comment added by Becca Berkenstadt (talk • contribs) 22:30, 30 March 2010 (UTC)
Dear Nuujinn,
Thank you for your insights. I will be sure to take them into account. You are very helpful.
Becca Berkenstadt (talk) 19:21, 13 April 2010 (UTC)
((done)) ~~ GB fan ~~ talk 02:10, 23 May 2010 (UTC)
Hi there,
Just looking any feedback on Wales Live wiki page....
Thanks a mil, Sarah
(1 April 2010). —Preceding unsigned comment added by Sarah McCaffrey (talk • contribs) 16:00, 1 April 2010 (UTC)
((done)) ~~ GB fan ~~ talk 02:11, 23 May 2010 (UTC)
I have substantially expanded this article on Antonin Raymond and would be grateful if someone could read it through and rate it. On the discussion page the previous author had added a Biography template, and I added Japan and Architecture one because I thought they were appropriate. Kenchikuben (talk) 13:20, 2 April 2010 (UTC)
((done)) ~~ GB fan ~~ talk 02:14, 23 May 2010 (UTC)
I kindly ask for your review of Ultimate Software User:Dporcaro/Ultimate_Software. It is a public company with many sources of notability that should be added to Wikipedia.
Your time and thoughts are greatly appreciated.
Thank you, Dporcaro (talk) 21:31, 9 April 2010 (UTC)Desiree Porcaro April 9, 2010
((done)) ~~ GB fan ~~ talk 02:15, 23 May 2010 (UTC)
Summary of the MIDMAC bridge bidding system, including Complete Hand Valuation. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Sngha2 (talk • contribs) 14:24, 11 April 2010 (UTC)