I've listed this article for peer review because I wish to take this to FAC. It is a relatively short, but comprehensive article. Little is known about this amazing woman with extraordinary achievement of being the first American woman to win an Olympics event! Feel free to comment prose, MOS, sources, etc. Thanks! – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 03:33, 13 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Usually "Olympic" and not "Olympics" would be the adjective form, so I'd remove the 's' in an Olympics champion, Olympics victory, etc. For your mother was an Olympics champion: this is a direct quote, and the source says "Olympic champion".
I may have a few more comments later, but there's not much for me to nitpick here: it's a fascinating and well-written article about a fascinating person. I doubt you'll encounter any serious issues at FAC; ping me once you get there. Cheers! Extraordinary Writ (talk) 04:03, 25 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
"Her father was a wealthy American merchant..." but her mother is notable enough for an article but isn't introduced here?
Well, my reasoning is that her mother is notable only because of her participation in the 1900 Olympics, the same reason why Abbott is notable too. I am not sure how to introduce her, very little is known about her. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 12:40, 4 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Chicago Herald -> our article says it was called the Chicago Times at this time.
"Golf clubs allowed women to join only if they were accompanied by a man" this seems odd, was it really joining while accompanied or did they need to be married to join? Or could they play if accompanied by any man?
fine, but I am not sure we need the full name differing in only 4 character, nor 4 lines for the different sources?
Well, the MOS requires full name to be repeated in the lead, first mention in the prose, and the "full name" section of i-box. I'm afraid I can't understand what you mean by "4 lines for the different sources". Can you please help? – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 15:20, 8 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks a lot, Gerda! Much helpful comments! I too which we had more information about this remarkable woman, but history is not fair to all, I'd say. We would have various full length biographies on her if people knew (in 1900) that she was the first American woman to win gold at Olympics. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 15:23, 8 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]