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I've listed this article for peer review because this list, a failed FLC wasn't updated in the last 4 years. I have expanded this list with statistics upto date. I want everyone's feedback on how to make this an FL.

Thanks, —Commander _{(Ping me)} 12:32, 2 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Comments –

• We have a helpful example of a similar FL at List of England Twenty20 International cricketers. One thing I notice right off the bat is that the first paragraph is more well-developed in the England list. Modelling the first paragraph here after the one there would be wise.

• I have rearranged the sentences now. Does it look okay? —Commander _{(Ping me)} 12:29, 3 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Yes, that looks much better. Giants2008 (Talk) 02:21, 5 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

• "having played 31 T20I matches for 16 wins and a tie against Pakistan." "for" → "with"?

• Done —Commander _{(Ping me)} 10:14, 3 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

• "In 2007, they became won the world championship...". Remove "became".

• Done —Commander _{(Ping me)} 10:14, 3 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

• Is the fourth-highest total in an innings sourced by anything?

• Done —Commander _{(Ping me)} 10:14, 3 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

• In the photo caption, the "till date" doesn't help the writing and would be better off removed.

• Done —Commander _{(Ping me)} 10:14, 3 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

• Could cite captains and wicketkeepers in the key, like the England list does.

• Done —Commander _{(Ping me)} 10:14, 3 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

• Players: "This list comprising of list of Indian cricketers...". Needs "comprising of list" taken out.

• Done —Commander _{(Ping me)} 10:14, 3 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

• In the footnote, "international" should probably be capitalized.

• Done —Commander _{(Ping me)} 10:14, 3 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

• The hyphen in the title of reference 2 should probably be an en dash. Such minor formatting improvements are permitted for ref titles.

• Done —Commander _{(Ping me)} 10:14, 3 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

• What makes http://www.itsonlycricket.com/entry/1888/ a reliable source? Giants2008

(Talk) 22:40, 2 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

• Replaced that with a RS. —Commander _{(Ping me)} 14:29, 3 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

• As Giants2008 suggested, improve the lead.
• Rephrase "they became won".

• Done —Commander _{(Ping me)} 10:14, 3 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

• Table does not meet WP:ACCESS requirements; use scope row, column and header, etc (if I'm not missing anything else).

• Done —Commander _{(Ping me)} 12:18, 3 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

• Categorize the column headings into batting, bowling and fielding.

• Done —Commander _{(Ping me)} 10:34, 3 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

• You didn't use ♠ anywhere.

• Done —Commander _{(Ping me)} 10:14, 3 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

• Fix this large white space in the "Players" section, above the table. I guess you need to adjust the width of the table, or don't use it at all.

• Did you mean removing the image? —Commander _{(Ping me)} 10:14, 3 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

No, I was taking about width parameter. Actually you should use more good quality images. — Bill william compton^Talk 03:49, 5 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

• West Indies → West Indies in the footnotes.

• Done —Commander _{(Ping me)} 10:14, 3 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

• Instead of using slashes use dashes in the titles of the references.

• Done —Commander _{(Ping me)} 10:43, 3 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

— Bill william compton^Talk 03:10, 3 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

• The Australian team is overlinked in the lead.

• Removed —Commander _{(Ping me)} 16:59, 3 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

• Tie v Pakistan isn't in ref 4.

• Done —Commander _{(Ping me)} 16:59, 3 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

• You expand MS of MS Dhoni, but not RP of RP Singh.

• Done —Commander _{(Ping me)} 16:59, 3 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

• Check sorting. E.g. HS, you have a 0 sorting before a bunch of en-dashes...

• Done —Commander _{(Ping me)} 04:49, 6 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

• Suggest you force the en-dashes to sort before 0's in all columns.

• Didn't get you. Can you make a dummy edit to illustrate tha if possible. —Commander _{(Ping me)} 09:47, 4 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

• Done. —Commander _{(Ping me)} 04:49, 6 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

• "first Twenty20 cap." not sure why "first Twenty20" is part of the link to the cap.

• Done —Commander _{(Ping me)} 16:59, 3 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

• Virendar Sehwag ->Virender Sehwag.

• Done —Commander _{(Ping me)} 16:59, 3 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

• Cricinfo linked in ref 1 and ref 4 only. Why not the lot or just the first?

• Done —Commander _{(Ping me)} 16:59, 3 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

The Rambling Man (talk) 13:53, 3 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]