Comments. Encouraging to see that this list had a decent peer review.
- ✗ Not done I agree that it should read "club" rather than "team". But use of singular or plural is discretionary. Whilst I don't think either form (singular or plural) is more correct, I tend to prefer Tranmere/the club/the team are. I don't know if this carries any weight, but this and the other Tranmere articles (such as the list of managers) consistently use the plural. U+003F? 12:09, 16 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- The discretion comes in being able to use either form depending on context, rather than in choosing one form and then sticking to it. When you're talking about TRFC the team, as a collection of players – "they were relegated" or "Tranmere are winning" – the plural comes naturally (and correctly) to a BritEng speaker. But in the opening sentence, you're not just talking about the players on the pitch, you're talking about the business, rules, structure, directors, deciding what pitch the players are to play on, whatever went to make up TRFC the football club founded in 1884. That's a singular entity so takes a singular verb. Have a look at this on the BBC's Learning English subsite. Struway2 (talk) 15:50, 16 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- Done I'm not sure about this. But I won't lose any sleep over the is, so have changed as suggested. U+003F? 18:34, 16 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- I know that continual use of "appearances" gets repetitive, but I'm not sure the word "caps" is appropriate for club appearances. To me, "most-capped player" implies "player with most international caps".
- Done U+003F? 19:24, 15 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- Players. Don't like using the word "competitive" as a definition of what you're including. It implies the Lancashire Combination and the Central League weren't competitive. Maybe something like "players who have made 100 or more appearances in nationally organised first-team competition" would be a little more precise.
- Done thanks, nice clear definition U+003F? 19:24, 15 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- Done forgotten, rather than excluded U+003F? 19:24, 15 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- Maybe "the three games in 1939, immediately prior to the Second World War" could be clarified? something like "the three games in the 1939–40 Football League season abandoned because of the Second World War"
- Done U+003F? 19:24, 15 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- Position key. If the left column is for positions before the 1960s, and the right column is for positions after the 1960s, what positions apply to players in the 1960s? Perhaps it might be worth adding an explanatory note, to the effect that over time, the names of defensive and midfield positions changed to reflect changes in playing formation, and these changes were largely complete by the 1960s. Maybe link to Association football positions#Tactical evolution. And then head the columns something like "Pre-1960s" and "1960s–". Centre all the columns, so it's clearer that Goalkeeper and Forward apply to both old and new. A better wikilink for Half-back might be Formation (association football)#2–3–5 (Pyramid), which has a (very) brief description of the function of full-backs and half-backs and the dual role of the centre-half. Have a look at List of Liverpool F.C. players (fewer than 25 appearances)#Players: the same comment was made at that list's recent FLC.
- Done U+003F? 19:47, 15 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- Table. What does the International column contain?
- Done U+003F? 12:09, 16 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- Are you sure that someone like Mathias, who made his debut in 1967 and played into the mid-1980s, should have a pre-1960s playing position?
- Done changed for everyone who made their first start in the 60s (for consistency) U+003F? 19:47, 15 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- Notes #4. Are you sure about "dual internationalists"? would have thought "dual internationals" was more common usage. Maybe add a few words of explanation, as at List of Watford F.C. players note d.
- Done U+003F? 12:09, 16 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- References General. Soccerbase is a work, and has a publisher, which you'll find after the copyright symbol at the bottom of all its pages. So long as you include the publisher in its description here in the general refs, you don't need to repeat it in all the specific Soccerbase refs.
- Done U+003F? 11:43, 15 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- References Specific. In #5, what makes The Cowsheds a reliable source?
- Done replaced source U+003F? 09:53, 16 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- Done U+003F? 11:43, 15 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- #45 month needs spelling out in full
- Done U+003F? 11:43, 15 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- Done U+003F? 11:43, 15 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]
hope some of this helps, cheers, Struway2 (talk) 10:16, 15 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- Cheers, I'll get to work on these. U+003F? 11:25, 15 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]
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