Comments
- Not sure we really need to link common geographical terms like Great Britain.
- And then, it might be helpful to link tumuli since that's not a common term.
- "but they were finally destroyed" it sounds odd to my ear to hear about people being destroyed, normally I'd reserve that term for objects...
- Changed to defeated.— Rod talk 17:57, 7 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
- "Sites from the Middle Ages include several motte-and-bailey castles, such as Locking Castle and church crosses" probably my misunderstanding, but are you saying a "church cross" is a "motte-and-bailey castle"?
- Added a comma as the church crosses are also from the Middle Ages- does that help
- Not a biggie, but you pipelink "glassworks" to "Nailsea glassworks " which subsequently redirects to Nailsea Glassworks, could we at least avoid the redirect?
- You probably could link the industrial revolution.
- Added and surprisingly it appears to be capitalised as a proper name.— Rod talk 17:57, 7 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
- Banwell Camp row, Type column: capitalise the h of hillfort for consistency.
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- Done several now - I think I introduced this when I standardised hill fort to hillfort.— Rod talk 19:25, 7 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
- Confusion over whether things are Bell or Bowl barrows, e.g. compare Type and Description for "Bowl barrow 230 m NNE of Quarry Farm" and the two subsequent entries.
- Changed to Bowl.— Rod talk 17:57, 7 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
- Also appears to be some inconsistency between capitalisation of Bell in the descriptions.
- I've gone with capitalisation of the first word eg Bowl barrow but I'm not sure now.— Rod talk 17:57, 7 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
- "is a well preserved ..." would a hyphen not be normally used here?
- "Chantry Chapel" any reason the c of chapel is capitalised? Also, in the Type col you link the whole phrase, in the description you exclude chapel from the link.
- "A 3 metres (9.8 ft) high stone" should just be metre. If you're using the ((convert)) template, you can achieve this by adding a |adj=on parameter. Apply to other similar instances.
- Hope I've got them all.— Rod talk 17:57, 7 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
- Capitalise coal mine in the Type col for consistency.
- Be consistent with the hyphenation of "motte-and-bailey".
- And the capitalisation of Motte... (e.g. "A Motte and bailey castle was..." follows an entry which says "was a motte and bailey on "
- Not sure you need to link archaeology...
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- It's in the "Slight univallate hillfort and associated earthworks on Burrington Ham" row, you link it there but nowhere else in the table. The Rambling Man (talk) 19:11, 7 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
- "archaeological" unlinked (thats why my search for "archaeology" didn't find it.— Rod talk 19:25, 7 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
- "An oval hillfort approximately" you previously linked the Type when describing it, not here...
- You link univallate but not multivallate, any reason?
- You have some hectares converting to acres, some acres converting to hectares, I'm normally expect the conversions to be one way and consistent.
- I think it depends on the age of the English Heritage data sheets - they have changed over time, but tried to make them all convert the same way (the only one I found was Stokeleigh Camp).— Rod talk 17:57, 7 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
- "The crosshead was destroyed during the time of the English Civil Wars." that's some time span you're linking....
- I've removed that claim - in the article Wick St. Lawrence it is cited to an offline source I don't have and can't check for more detail.— Rod talk 17:57, 7 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
- Does St Lawrence have a full stop after it's St or not?
- I've put it back in as our article has one (see line above) but I thought MOS:ABBR was against it - on rereading it it depends on official useage. MOS may have changed.— Rod talk 17:57, 7 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
- Inconsistent linking in the refs, e.g. English Heritage is sometimes linked, the BBC is not, National Trust never...
- Wikilinking removed for consistency - hope I've caught all of these.— Rod talk 17:57, 7 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
- Also seeing BBC and British Broadcasting Corporation...
- Roman Britain or Roman-Britain.org?
- Roman-Britain.org.— Rod talk 17:57, 7 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
That's it for a reasonably quick run through. Hope it helps. The Rambling Man (talk) 09:14, 7 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
- Thank you. It is amazing how you can read the article hundreds of times and miss these sorts of things - it needs a new set of eyes.— Rod talk 17:57, 7 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
- You're always welcome. I've added a quick couple of responses above before I make dinner for the exhausted missus and the cats. The Rambling Man (talk) 19:11, 7 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
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