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The article fails the featured article criterion in several ways. The lead is excessively long and does not summaries the article (2a), several sections lack citations (1c) and I also find the structure weird. How can an article about a military doctrine start with a section called "Interwar years"? --Peter Andersen (talk) 06:47, 23 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Comment. Images need alt text as per WP:ALT. Eubulides (talk) 07:13, 23 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Images The fair use rationale for File:PanzerInfantryAdvance.jpg is too weak; there must be free-use images of tanks available. File:Il2 sturmovik.jpg: licensing may be invalid as there is no information on first publication or date of the image. DrKiernan (talk) 10:01, 24 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]
@Dapi89: The "Limitations and countermeasures" and "Operations in history" sections are largely uncited. This should be dealt with. But first of I'm more concerned about structure and the actual content. I'm not convinced that the present structure is ideal. I'm thinking something like:
Comments?--Peter Andersen (talk) 19:48, 25 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Okay, well I'll ry to introduce a section entitled "the popular perception of Blitzkrieg" first. And see if that gives some initial context. Dapi89 (talk) 13:00, 29 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Comment. I also find the structure of the article odd. There is not a straightforward history of the origins of the word (that could include any alternative explanations) and followed by its history. Rather the headings and their order do not follow a typical encyclopedia format: