The following discussion is an archived debate of the proposed deletion of the article below. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as the article's talk page or in a deletion review). No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was delete ɑʀкʏɑɴ 16:25, 6 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Risk communication (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views) – (View log)

Initially speedied this as a copyvio, but have had second thoughts so am bringing it here. The article as a whole seems to make no sense, and I honestly don't believe it would make sense even to a specialist in the field. The first half (the section in quotes) is a word-for-word copyvio from the first reference, while (as best I can tell) the rest of the article takes 200 words to say "it's a good idea to warn people before they do something dangerous". The article's been tagged for cleanup since July, and while the author has made some minor edits to it since then, it doesn't seem either to be being cleaned up or to be cleanuppable. iridescent (talk to me!) 01:44, 1 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]

since you opened this discussion, in that case, can you actually do something constructive and restructure it instead of merely(and simplistically)nominate it for deletion?? thank youGrandia01 03:44, 1 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]
1)i repeat my request,can someone indulge us with the favor of working on it a bit to improve it,including you officegirl?? 2)this article is patent nonsense and cannot be salvaged wow hold on there,this article is-as i said before-merely nothing but 2 quotations from 2 governmental/public entities;if that's nonsense then what else isn't?? also,what do you mean patent nonsense and cannot be salvaged??thats it??this article is redeemed irredeemable just because the honorable master business strategist officegirl said so??sad 3)good use there of the word risk,if you would have used that talent in working on this article then things would be much different now,good life achievement i must sayGrandia01 05:28, 1 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  • RESPONSE Grandia01, even though you have now deleted a portion of the horribly poor and repetitive bad writing in the article the best thing that you have offered in defense of this article is an obscure, small paragraph (which, as is typical of committee-composed documents, is badly written and chock full of the word "risk" over and over again) hidden within a little-known 197-page document from a sub-organization of the United Nations. Basically you have shown us that you are trying to write an article about a phrase of techno-jargon that is not recognized or used in any notable way. The burden of proof was upon you, the article's proponent, and no amount of personal attacks leveled at the rest of us will lift that burden off your shoulders. Your documentation is proof that this is not an appropriate article for Wikipedia.OfficeGirl 06:07, 1 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]
ok so right now even a simple definition from the united nation is not worthy enough to exist in wikipedia because its 1)"not notable" and 2)techno-jargon as master smart a** officegirl said. amazing. hey officegirl,ur still single??Grandia01 06:12, 1 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]
thanks for your constructive(unlike most others') suggestion, but don't bother about giving your opinion here, even if you simply provided the most reliable definition/entry for this stub from the most reputable sources, world business masters here will still nominate it for deletion for various amazing reasons(see above).don't botherGrandia01 07:13, 1 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Delete - This is not a buzzword, it is two words stung together in exactly the way one might expect, meaning exactly what one might expect. Therefore, Grandia01, it does not merit an entry on Wikipedia. Speciate 07:48, 1 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]
oh gee Speciate you might want to forward this precious "correction" to harvard school as well hopefully your unmatchable prowess in business can correct their teachingsGrandia01 08:09, 1 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Comment - Business majors take obvious and straightforward things and make them part of their mysterious buzzword religion. Speciate 08:22, 1 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]
impressive Speciate, even harvard school needs your corrections i see. i'll nominate you to completely re-haul our education system one day. best of luck professorGrandia01 08:26, 1 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Trollicious. Speciate 08:33, 1 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Grandia, this is your last warning about personal attacks. Smashville 16:09, 1 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]
and bullshit is an apt description of this so-called contribution of yoursGrandia01 18:07, 1 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]
COMMENT Since you seem to have more detailed knowledge of the field of risk management than the average user, I am really glad you joined this discussion. I notice you are telling us that this term "risk communication" is rarely used in the field, and I think many in this discussion would heartily agree that as a term it is an awkward construction. I don't think there's sufficient justification for a redirect in this case. It's just not likely to be a search term that people will be interested in. I think you hit the nail on the head when you identified "risk management" as the useful search term and topic. OfficeGirl 17:24, 3 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]
REPLY The article as nominated is not stubby, but rather insanely substandard with no indications that anything good could ever be made of it. Not even good enough for the sandbox. HOWEVER, if you have access to real and intelligible reliable sources that you can use to make this topic into a decent article worthy of Wikipedia's standards AND if you get the article whipped into shape before the time expires on this AfD discussion, then I will be glad to change my vote. (and I mean really glad-- I would really give you your props if you did it) But evidence that someone POTENTIALLY COULD work on this article SOMEDAY is not justification for keeping the load of nonsense which we have been dealing with thus far in this AfD. Go to it, orlady! I am hoping to see good results.OfficeGirl 20:04, 3 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]
OfficeGirl, have you looked at the article recently? By the time I visited this AFD, the spammy advertisement for the conference next year had been removed from the article, and the only remaining content was a definition of "risk communication," sourced to the FAO. That's a stub, pure and simple. What harm is there in keeping a short stub? --orlady 20:55, 3 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Comment Now that the spammy advertisement for the conference next year has been removed from the article, the only remaining content is a copyvio from FAO, to be more accurateiridescent (talk to me!) 21:08, 3 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]
For pity's sake, why is it that so many people can complain so eloquently about the shortcomings of someone else's work without lifting a finger to help them fix it? I reworded definition slightly and added some more similar content from another source that happens to be public domain. It's no masterpiece, but it will serve to fill a hole until someone with expertise shows up to write a good article. --orlady 22:56, 3 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]
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