The following discussion is an archived debate of the proposed deletion of the article below. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as the article's talk page or in a deletion review). No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was Keep, with conditions - barely meets GNG, and article is sourced well enough. Because there's an underlying fear of COI and self-promotion, it should be watched and deleted without prejudice at a later date if the COI continues to add material outside of reliable sources (myspace, imdb, etc), citing this rationale. For now, I suggest keeping the article as it is now and leaving it at that. Consider this a warning that further fears of self-promotion will take this article back to AfD, where this will likely be deleted because of the drama it has caused and the thin ice the article is already standing on. --Xavexgoem (talk) 19:28, 1 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Andy Wisne[edit]

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Slight amounts of importance are asserted, yet most of the sources are from imdb. The article has one source from LA times, while source 8 and 9 are the same page, and both are only a passing mention. Source 11 is the only real source from the Tribune. The second source is simply his bio from a football website. Opinions? — dαlus Contribs 05:22, 24 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]

!Voting[edit]

I have gone through tediously and fixed the formatting. If anyone disagrees with my edits, and, take note, they were simply made to make this AFD easier to read for others, feel free to revert me, I shall not edit war nor argue.— dαlus Contribs 20:14, 25 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]

I, for one, thank you for this. Eeekster (talk) 20:49, 25 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Seconded. Peridon (talk) 20:55, 25 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • How does Andrew Wisne not meet WP:GNG? My comment above clearly outlines why he is notable because he is covered by multiple, independent reliable sources. I think I rebutted most of the comments by the preceding voters. Could you explain what problems exist with these sources? Cunard (talk) 08:55, 27 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • I still feel that there aren't multiple, independent, reports that give significant coverage to this person, hence failing the first hurdle of GNG.Verbal chat 11:14, 27 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Here's another reference from a reliable source that covers the subject well beyond trivially: Norwood, Robyn (December 1, 2002). "Wisne tackles the lively arts ; An ex-Notre Dame nose guard swaps lots of injuries--and more than 100 pounds--for a promising acting career". Chicago Tribune.
They don't—they just make him WP:NOTEable. The GNG is not about notability. Bongomatic 16:26, 28 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]
The articles listed are human sympathy articles, or have you not bothered to read them? They are hardly grounds for notability. If, sometime in the future, someone feels like writing about him for reasons other than his injuries, that would make him notable.— dαlus Contribs 20:06, 31 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]
I did read them and the motives for them written (so long as they are independent of the subject) are of no consequence. Davewild (talk) 21:04, 31 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Comments by Andrew Wisne[edit]

Because there are a large number of comments from the same user making the discussion difficult to read, I have taken the liberty of moving them to one section, where they can be read and considered by other users without distracting from the rest of the conversation. In order to make the page clear, I've moved the direct responses to those comments as well. Individual !votes are above. Anyone (other than Mr. Wisne) who thinks this isn't a good idea is welcome to revert to the previous version of the discussion. -FisherQueen (talk · contribs) 23:18, 25 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]

  • reply I believe the fist paragraph to be a distortion of the truth.- Andrewwisne- May 25, 2009—Preceding unsigned comment added by Andrewwisne (talkcontribs)

IN RESPONSE TO Daedalus969 - ALL SOURCES ARE USED CORRECTLY AND ARE SOURCES OF INTEGRITY. FURTHERMORE ALL GENERAL GUIDELINES WERE MET REGARDING NOTABILITY. BEING A NOTRE DAME FOOTBALL PLAYER IS IN ITSELF NOTABLE. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Andrewwisne (talkcontribs) 22:10, 24 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]

General notability guideline Shortcut: WP:GNG If a topic has received significant coverage in reliable sources that are independent of the subject, it is presumed to satisfy the inclusion criteria for a stand-alone article. *The article Andy Wisne meets this criteria

1. "Significant coverage"- means that sources address the subject directly in detail, and no original research is needed to extract the content.* The article Andy Wisne meets this criteria

No, it doesn't. I has several trivial mentions, but nothing concrete to establish notability.— dαlus Contribs 22:22, 24 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • reply His opinion that the information regarding Andy Wisne in the Major stories in major publications is trivial is offensive and is his opinion . All information is factual and derived from Official and highly respected AP Sources. Someone who is well known and tells a factual story that helps people becomes notable. Especially by a source such as The Los Angeles Times and the degree in which it was written. It was published before Notre Dame played Southern California during Thanksgiving week. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Andrewwisne (talkcontribs)

After reading the line "Significant coverage is more than trivial but may be less than exclusive.[1]" The depth of coverage is anything but trivia. In a nuetral point of view Significant coverage has been met and then some

No, it is trivial. Period, it mentions you in passing, that is what we call trivial.— dαlus Contribs 22:22, 24 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • reply You might not have read it but the dpth of the story and the depth of coverage is anyting but trivial. The story's were about Andy Wisne - not in passing Forgive me if that sees like false judgement. The story's were about me. The Los Angeles Times and Notre Dame football are two integral parts of the American fabric in one way or another. Those are just two singled out areas where the subject at hand at certain times, more or less has been in some manner the focal point. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Andrewwisne (talkcontribs)
You've proven nothing false. I read the sources, and I made my judgment, as did all the other delete votes which outnumber keep votes. Do not make assumptions about others.— dαlus Contribs 20:18, 25 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Forgive me if it came as an assumption. I believe that if it was read thoroughly most would agree that they were major stories in major publiations that were extremely moving to most. If not moving to one the very nature of the stores apart from the emotional aspect are substantial enough to claim nobility- Andrewwisne May 25, 2009 —Preceding unsigned comment added by Andrewwisne (talkcontribs) 22:51, 25 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]

You will find, if you take the time to read, that mostly everyone here disagrees with you. Currently there are four delete votes and two for keep. If you want people to evaluate the article, then as FQ suggested, I suggest you stop responding here and let the AFD run it's course. Further responses will not help you in the least, and will in fact decrease the chances of this article being kept.— dαlus Contribs 22:56, 25 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]

2. "Reliable" means sources need editorial integrity to allow verifiable evaluation of notability, per the reliable source guideline. Sources may encompass published works in all forms and media. Availability of secondary sources covering the subject is a good test for notability.[2] *Writers Robyn Norwood (LA TIMES) and Jeff Carroll ( South Bend Tribune) are both writers of integrity and reliable.

IMDB is not a reliable source, period.— dαlus Contribs 22:22, 24 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • reply IMDB means Internet Movie Data Base. It could be compared to say that of an NFL.com which many people who own a wiki page used as referaces. IMDB keeps official track of an artsits work and records. Obviously that was a subjective opinion on your part. Without getting into an argument about positive and negative mindsets lets go back to neural point of view. IMDB is the official movie databse. Just like many NFL players use NFL.com- I have so many other sources I could use but this should be sufficient. A reason why it wouldn't would be entirely speculative

3. "Sources,"[3] for notability purposes, should be secondary sources, as those provide the most objective evidence of notability. The number and nature of reliable sources needed varies depending on the depth of coverage and quality of the sources. Multiple sources are generally preferred.[4] ** Because of the depth and length of the sources from the Los Angeles times featured article on Andy Wisne and South bend Tribune there is a plethera of information written by established writers of integrity. Again the storys were long, in depth, and moving. Including Significant coverage and reliable.

I already covered these in my post.— dαlus Contribs 22:22, 24 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]

4. Independent of the subject" excludes works produced by those affiliated with the subject including (but not limited to): self-publicity, advertising, self-published material by the subject, autobiographies, press releases, etc.[5] ** All infomation was derived from sources other than the auther himself. Including the 3 previous points mentioned above the subject at hand is notable for positve influence according to story's written by major publications independent of the wikepedia author. All information is true and correct as referanced.

Again, read point made at three.— dαlus Contribs 22:22, 24 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]

5. Reliable sources- goes without saying

It does, really, as IMDB is not a reliable source, and all mentions are trivial.— dαlus Contribs 22:22, 24 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Lastly, I have moved this comment in regards to chronological order, and removed your second, keep vote, as you are not allowed to vote twice. I shall tell you the same on your talk page.— dαlus Contribs 22:22, 24 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]
First of all what section of the newspaper should have no bearing and if it does it is cancelled out by the depth of coverage and the multiple amounts of noteworthy accomplishments. All information in both refeanced stories were true. Both authors are authers of integrity. The article that came out in November 27, 2002 was featured on the cover of the sports section of The Los Angeles times and was a two page full length article that is still talked about to this day. It was also featured in the "arts and entertainments section" of th Chicago Tribune" The article "Out of The Darkness" written by writer Jeff Carroll was a two day two part story that won the writer first place by the society of professional journalist. Meaning a moving and touching story. Is that considered noteworthy? Not only was all information factual but it helped people/society in a postive manner. All referances were used correctly and are surces of integrity. Being a Notre Dame footall player is in itself notable. Being the subject of two moving and powerful true stories, that the subject told the writers, are other reasons. Within the big scope there are many other noteworthy elements. If one has read the storys and researched the subject at hand this arguement becomes totally and utterly irrelevent —Preceding unsigned comment added by Andrewwisne (talkcontribs) 22:37, 24 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]
I have re-added this comment in good faith, but do not keep adding keep votes. Such is against the rules. The rule is, one vote per user, and that includes fake accounts, meaning. One vote per user, not per account. As to your points, they are invalid with GNG. I have already addressed them. Good day to you sir, do not try to vote fix again.— dαlus Contribs 22:44, 24 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • reply A man that has cow bone implanted in his gum, started for Notre Dame in the trenches, survived two near fatal car accidents and lived to tell about it- These are all just part of the big story/ Trivial?? What kind of people are we dealing with here on Wiki. It kind of hurts to realize respect is hard to come by no matter what hell storm you have been through. As tiring as it is I will continue fighting. Being a Notre Dame football player is noteworthy ( a starter) losing a 100lbs in 5 month after a career ending concussion ( just one of many noteworthy facts you can read about in the story- have you read it?) and having the story come out in the LA Times and in the arts section of the ChicagoTribune is noteworthy. That as just the first phase. I could go on and on. Expression not vanity. Have you read the story's?
  • reply The very point is that your missing th point. I don't give a rats butt if I'm the subject- thats political language. I am well known, been through hell and back and turned it around in a positive manner- all of which is well documnted. That is Noteworthy- no other way around it- aside from being a starter for the Univesity of Notre Dame football team. It is a tricky argument because the very word Notre Dame creates emotion in one direction or another. It looks to be a simple argument on both sides. What would a man filled with intergrity decide on this page??—Preceding unsigned comment added by Andrewwisne (talkcontribs)
  • reply Damn write I wrote this. I think this is a matter of likers and haters. Because if we come back to neutral point of view there is absolutely no reason Andy Wisne, myself, is not notable. I have had to fight for everything in my life and I'll be damn if I let someone sepculate for me. I know whats going on and the information has integrity, is reliable, and I think the common folk would say what I have done so far and the story of my life to be noteworthy.—Preceding unsigned comment added by Andrewwisne (talkcontribs)
That's a pointless comment. Many people write their own stuff. That should have no bearing on this argument—Preceding unsigned comment added by Andrewwisne (talkcontribs)
No, it is not, and it is rude to say otherwise. The reason the comment has a point is because many people do not write their own stuff, as they will have a clear bias in favor of themselves, and more often then not, write in a POV that favors themselves, such as how you continuously say that you deserve a break. Well here's a news flash. Wikipedia is not here to give out breaks.— dαlus Contribs 20:20, 25 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • reply The point is not being the subject of an award winning piece. The language was used, quite honestly, in attempt to stay some what modest in this conversation. I passed those story's on to the writers. They were about me and my life. What they stood for, what they were about moves society in a positive way. Your configuration of the facts I'm laying down is going into a different direction. If we do have polar opposite opinions then we must come back to neutral point of view. If all information is indeed factual and the person at hand did play football at Notre Dame and is well known for a story that moves society in a positive fashion, and overcomming major opstacles while enduring depression then his accomplishments need and must be recognized. For many many people have read them and some moved by them. You don't even have to combine all this together to get to notability buy lets do it here. Let's combine it all. I think we have a conflicting pattern of negative and postive trains of thought. Again nuetral point of view- For they are well documented—Preceding unsigned comment added by Andrewwisne (talkcontribs)
It's more like relevant news and a man expressing himself. That's not vanity. If you think a man who had cow bone implanted in his gums, being diagnosed with bipolar disorder, and having a career ending concussion is vanity- you need to check yourself. These are sources that are not only reliable but have integrity. Ok- if you consider them small then they are all part of the big pictue within the true story of a man who has overcome obstacles. But none of it is small to me. As I know I'm very blessed—Preceding unsigned comment added by Andrewwisne (talkcontribs)
  • reply I concur Mr Cunard. Thank you —Preceding unsigned comment added by Andrewwisne (talkcontribs) 06:59, 25 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]
I had no idea the world was filled with this many angry customers. Well, maybe I did. Anyway the information was combined in a long story within multiple story's. In the "Big Picture" those were elements included about the journey of Andy Wisne thus far. As far as the google thingy I think if you examine it further you will find that is not the truth. Maybe your imagination is getting the best of you? Imdb, a celebrity profile, work on amazon and his ND profile aren't myspace. Usually when you sign a contract you have to read the whole thing- metaphorical language —Preceding unsigned comment added by Andrewwisne (talkcontribs) 23:17, 24 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • reply That is the furthest from the truth. Everything written is true and factual. It is well documented. It is just another form of the truth. Nothing manipulated just written in brief. It is a story of the truth and nothing but the truth. If it is only the truth then neutrality becomes a pointless topic. It is passing information along to one source to another. That is it in a nutshell.—Preceding unsigned comment added by Andrewwisne (talkcontribs)
  • reply You have the right to your own opinion. My imdb is what it is. I'm not really concerned what you think about that. I just want to get all the paper work done so I can focus on getting a movie- Andrewwisne May 29 2009 —Preceding unsigned comment added by Andrewwisne (talkcontribs) 19:31, 25 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • reply - No one is trying to manipulate the outcome of this, and, if you bothered to read the edit summary that an admin left, you would see that. I suggest you strike through the above as it is a baseless labeling, and therefore, a personal attack. Nothing is being manipulated. And if you would stop taking offense at everyone who votes delete, you would see that.— dαlus Contribs 23:32, 25 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Sorry that I missed the comments you added while I was reformatting. It's quite difficult to keep up when you're adding comments nearly once every minute, all of which make the page impossible to read. -FisherQueen (talk · contribs) 23:42, 25 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • Reply - Your strong point is no such thing. It is weak as it cites no evidence, and is a baseless bad-faith accusation, as all of your statements exist quite clearly below.— dαlus Contribs 23:37, 25 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]
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