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I'd like to discuss your edits concerning the Willey tradgedy. I'm new to wikipedia, so please bear with me.
Is there a standard format for dates? I find 28 August 1826 unusual. I see that it allows for two links, but are they necessary? I don't like abbreviations, since I don't feed they're necessary. How about "the notch between Mounts Willey and Webster?" Your edits do not make it clear that the Willey family had both parents and five children at the home at the time of the mudslide. Did you leave out the Bible because it can't be verified? Did you leave out the "buried under ..." because it's too graphic? I also suggest using an 'mdash' in the sentence containing "... allure — tradegy and nature — was ..."
JJ 14:44, 11 December 2005 (UTC)
Added more details about the Willey tradegy. Made the changes I first suggested.
JJ 19:52, 11 December 2005 (UTC)
I failed to sign in, so the edit of 69.161.63.23 are me, JJ 02:22, 12 December 2005 (UTC). So, if you have talk, please address to me.
JJ 02:22, 12 December 2005 (UTC)
Can we get larger pictures. I click on them hoping to see big landscapes and they are just thumbnail sized. Broken S 02:49, 12 December 2005 (UTC)
The only images that do not have a link to a higher resolution image are the Thomas Hill of Crawford Notch and the Champney at 17. Is there a way to link the small images to larger ones on wikipedia? JJ 03:28, 12 December 2005 (UTC)
Outstanding article. I love reading about this kind of stuff--nearly everyone has heard of the Hudson River School artists, but you've done some great research into this important and lesser-known early center of artistic activity.
Your images are terrific--great examples. I also like that you don't "over-link" the article: for example, another writer might have linked the word "artists" in your first sentence to the Wikipedia article "artist". This is a pet-peeve of mine; I think links should only be inserted to clarify something not commonly known.
If I were to make one suggestion it would be about the introduction. As someone unfamiliar with the historical details of White Mountain art, I was reading the first paragraph and came upon the "1826 tragedy of the Willey family." My immediate reaction was, "What 1826 tragedy of the Willey family?" Even though you answer that question in detail later on, I would avoid introducing a new term or unexplained reference right off the bat. I would have three suggestions:
Above all though, do what you (and not necessarily what I) think is right. It's a work in progress. Great job! --Worldofdew 01:41, 14 December 2005 (UTC)
I'm adding this as a new section just for clarity. To what extent could North Conway in the 1850s be thought of as an "art colony"? I notice you don't use that term (and I'm not suggesting you should--I'm asking simply to learn your knowledgeable opinion). Most art colonies seem to be associated with impressionism, and while that's not the case here, there's nothing in the definition of "art colony" that restricts it to a certain artistic style. If it can be thought of as an art colony, does North Conway then lay claim to being America's first art colony? --Worldofdew 01:41, 14 December 2005 (UTC)
Campton & West Campton, New Hampshire also have a claim as an early art colony. E.H. Sanborn's Stag & Hounds was a gathering point beginning in the 1850's and possibly in the late 1840's. Asher Durand, W.A. Gay, Samuel Lancaster Gerry, William Trost Richards & Charles Alvah Walker were among the many artists who came to paint together. Importantly, this same locale was frequented by poets John Greenleaf Whittier, Lucy Larcom & Henry Wadsworth Longfellow in the same era... —Preceding unsigned comment added by 199.89.80.17 (talk) 20:37, 6 April 2009 (UTC)
I deleted the addition of George Shavey Noyes. The artist is unknown to me, and, therefore, I have no knowledge that he painted in the White Mountains. JJ 12:31, 14 September 2007 (UTC)
I suggest that we use these Notable people guidelines before adding artists to this list. Please discuss additions on my Talk page.
A GA review of this article has been completed, and an evaluation of the form and presentation of this article has been made in keeping with the WP criteria required for GA status. In short, the article has been found to be well written from a neutral point of view. The content is well researched, verifiable, and accompanied by numerous in-line citations, as required. The principal contributor to this article has assembled a wealth of published information on this subject and has made a major contribution to Wikipedia readers. Numerous illustrations have been added to accompany the text and all appear to have the necessary copyright clearance and documentation. Very few improvements can be recommended. These include the recommendation that more careful attention be given to Wikilinking notable artists' names and art terms that currently appear within the text, in particular those that already have WP articles that can be readily accessed. Examples include first references for Benjamin Champney, en plein air, Thomas Hill, and Edward Hill. In addition, it is recommended that more attention be given to improving the list of references by placing authors' names first and italicizing the titles of published works cited. These very minor corrections in no way detract from the major contribution made by this article and its principal contributor, both of whom deserve the gratitude of WP readers with an interest in this important area of American landscape art. Jack Bethune (talk) 20:47, 18 April 2008 (UTC)
Because this is such a long and complex review, with lots of comments, I have archived it to Talk:White Mountain art/GA1, to prevent it from getting lost in talk page archives. You can also access the review from ((ArticleHistory)) (top of page). Dr. Cash (talk) 15:49, 5 June 2008 (UTC)
I was asked to come over and comment on the sources for this article. The works listed int he Bibliography appear quite fine, mostly scholarly or specialized presses. The older stuff, from before 1900, is it being used as major underpinings of the article or is it used as contemporary "color"?
One thing, even things in the footnotes need to be sourced. So you need a source for the Champney birthdate that's given in a footnote.
I wouldn't use http://whitemountainart.com/artist_bio_index.htm as a source for anything. As an external link, it's fine, but it wouldn't be considered a RS. It's a great external link though!
Really though, nothing wrong at all with the sources, they look excellent to me. Keep in mind I didn't read the article itself, just checked out the sources, and looked at how "reliable" they seemed to be. Ealdgyth - Talk 22:18, 16 May 2008 (UTC)
The edits by IP 72.224.186.142 we done by me. JJ (talk) 16:13, 19 May 2008 (UTC)
User:JohnJHenderson asked me to take a look at the Notes and Bibliography formatting. In general it's pretty good, but I do have some suggestions:
Those were the main issues I saw. I have to mention that I haven't yet read the full article, but I'm looking forward to it - I spent a good bit of time in the mountains years ago - and I'd be happy to give it a full copyedit if it's headed to FAC soon. Let me know. Maralia (talk) 17:26, 20 May 2008 (UTC)
(this discussion transferred to here from Rotational's talk page)
You added Charles Henry Turner to the list of notable White Mountain artists. Turner did paint in the White Mountains, but he is not, in my opinion, "notable" as the others are. I had requested that others "talk" to me before adding names to this list. Can you tell me why you feel Turner belongs on this list? Thanks. JJ (talk) 23:06, 6 October 2008 (UTC)
Hi there, I don't think that "notable" has a very objective basis, but in my opinion he is quite "notable". Is his inclusion here a mistake? ciao Rotational (talk) 09:27, 7 October 2008 (UTC)
Hi there again, I don't think that "large body of work" is a good criterion of "notability" - I started an article on him, which means that I feel he's sufficiently well-known to merit a WP page. No, I don't know any of his White Mountain paintings, but you say that you know of some, so that the question is really irrelevant. Finally, I think that you are perfectly entitled to control your pesonal White Mountain website, but WP policy encourages participation by multiple editors. ciao Rotational (talk) 13:20, 7 October 2008 (UTC)
Seems that there are two issues here - firstly, Charles Henry Turner's claim to notability and secondly whether he produced paintings of the White Mountains area. Both can be settled by the rather pedestrian means of doing a Google search - the venerable Smithsonian lists archival material here and states that "He summered in Hampton, and later in the White Mountains at Jackson." I presume that like most painters he didn't work on his stamp collection, but actually did some painting. User:JohnJHenderson says he knows about some White Mountains paintings done by Turner. How did you get drawn into this? ciao Rotational (talk) 18:16, 7 October 2008 (UTC)
Indeed! I didn't make that presumption. I was citing his presence there as a good reason for thinking that he produced paintings up there as well - which it seems he did. See here for a reference. This is all a storm in a teacup - I really couldn't give a fig whether John Henderson feels that Turner merits inclusion in his list or not. You still haven't explained your involvement in this....... ciao Rotational (talk) 19:15, 7 October 2008 (UTC)
I don't know Catherine Campbell's book and wonder who decided to term it a "definitive reference". If Turner is not mentioned in her book, then one can only see that as a careless omission. The Hampton Historical Society obviously does not see him as a minor painter. I see that the "notable" list of painters started off simply as "Artists of the White Mountains". You may never have seen any White Mountains paintings by Turner, "although I know some, but not a large number". Are you confused? I certainly am. Of course Turner was an artist - I don't think he needs anyone's grudging agreement to make him so. That he painted landscapes is undoubted (see the Hampton Historical Society reference above). That you choose to ignore him makes for a flawed article, not a strong one. Notability, as I've stated before, is very subjective, and should be seen in the same light as maturity - if you agree with my views, you're mature. "Agenda", makes this discussion sound politically sinister - this is supposed to be a discussion? Nevertheless, I see your friend Jack has taken it upon himself to remove the offending name without further ado. ciao Rotational (talk) 06:32, 8 October 2008 (UTC)
You tend to respond to difficulties like a politician - you ignore them. Unlike you, I have never claimed to be an authority on White Mountain art and this exchange was about one artist who happened not to fit criteria devised by you. What I do find disturbing is inconsistency, bad reasoning, arrogance and rudeness - and the "discussion" so far has been riddled with examples of the same. You seem to have a very low tolerance for other contributors and their contributions - witness your agitation at my temerity for adding the name of an artist without first clearing it with you, or the alacrity with which you reverted the list of names to two columns because it was someone else's idea. WP can only improve with the considered input of many editors and becoming overly-territorial about this article will not enhance its quality. Do read the guidelines on ownership and good luck in your efforts. Rotational (talk) 20:40, 8 October 2008 (UTC)
We have several works by Charles Henry Turner, including two which are of the White Mountains. In turn, Sam & Sheila Robbins showed a Turner watercolor in their White Mountain exhibit at Castle in the Clouds during the 2008 season. Turner's work has been exhibited and published in 2006 in the "Visions in Granite" exhibition at The Banks Gallery and book cited in the bibliography. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 199.89.80.17 (talk) 20:59, 6 April 2009 (UTC)
An anonymous editor added this bibliographic reference. By checking the ISBN reference, any reader will note that Douglas Nelson is not the co-author of this catalog. For example, just click here. Therefore, I have updated the reference for accuracy and reformatted for consistency. In the future, please avoid anonymous edits. JJ (talk) 22:21, 24 April 2009 (UTC)
This link is added under See Also, but the editor deletes references to WhiteMountainArt.com from the Boston Art Club article. What gives? Would the editor please identify himself, and try to justify his edits? JJ (talk) 01:24, 25 May 2009 (UTC)
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