"Hubbard taught that humans could recall the details of these lives through a process known as auditing" -> I'm quite likely to be wrong, but I believed auditing was the process of removing engrams and achieving Clear; I was told nothing of thetans and past lives (maybe I didn't pay enough). That's a good point, I was using the term a bit broadly, I know there are a number of different practices in the church and some of them apparently get into the former life stuff eventually. I rephrased to avoid implying that about auditing. Mark Arsten (talk) 01:09, 15 September 2012 (UTC)[reply] "Academics who study religion" -> I know "religious academics" doesn't really work here but is there a better way of going at this? Theologians, theology critics, etc? How about "Scholars of religion"? Mark Arsten (talk) 01:09, 15 September 2012 (UTC)[reply] "Xenu placed several billion of his citizens onto DC 8 planes" -> DC 8 points at Douglas DC-8, is this right? I believe so, that's where the link on our Xenu article points. Mark Arsten (talk) 01:09, 15 September 2012 (UTC)[reply] "Because thetans had been "implanted", or forced to believe, various faulty ideas" -> is the use of implanted correct here? It's in quotes so I assume it's meant to be nonstandard but if the parenthetical comes out this reads "Because thetans has been "implanted" various faulty ideas", which is odd. Ok, I rephrased that to hopefully convey the same meaning with the awkward/incorrect wording. Mark Arsten (talk) 01:09, 15 September 2012 (UTC)[reply] "Urban notes that this is similar to Aleister Crowley's teachings about astral projection, although he notes that Hubbard did not use that term" -> two "notes" here; change the second one to "adds" maybe? Good catch, changed. Mark Arsten (talk) 01:09, 15 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]
B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
Maybe move the Rinder image to the left to avoid three images stacked horizontally like that. Images are fine in and of themselves, all free. (File:Planetstoriesclichecover.jpg is Commons, too, but it might be a bit much);
Not really sure I'm putting this on hold other than force of habit, but it's a well-written article with little to be addressed. GRAPPLEX00:39, 15 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]