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Reviewer: ZooBlazer (talk · contribs) 22:28, 15 March 2024 (UTC)
I've done DYK, FLC, and FAC reviews involving your articles, so I figured I might as well complete the foursome (is that the right word?) by doing a GA review. I should have my comments posted later today or tomorrow. -- ZooBlazer 22:28, 15 March 2024 (UTC)
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Comprising six shows--> Should it be comprising of six shows?
receiving praise for its theme and Velasquez's vocal abilities and connection with the audience--> Comma after "abilities"
On August 3, 2022, Velasquez--> Velasquez should be linked as it's the first mention of her outside the lead.
she would be performing a concert residency--> also link concert residency for the same reason as above
announced that Solo will be staged--> should it be would be staged now that everything is past tense? I notice you use was in the next sentence for promotion.
Madonna's "Crazy for You" which--> add a comma before "which"
She proceeded withand
She then started--> Maybe adjust the wording of one of these sentences to not both start with "she" back to back.
In a review of the opening night, Leah Salterio writing for ABS-CBNnews.com highly praised--> I think there should be a comma after .com
Using this version of the article:
Spotchecks all support the information the refs are used for in the article. Earwig picked up no major issues.
@ZooBlazer: Thank you as always for reviewing my nomination. All comments actioned and look forward to the rest. Pseud 14 (talk) 01:49, 16 March 2024 (UTC)