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Reviewer: Adityavagarwal (talk · contribs ) 11:04, 8 August 2017 (UTC) [ reply ]
Having a go at it! Would make straight forward changes, and feel free to revert any of my edits in case of any mistake.
your changes look ok. Cas Liber (talk · contribs ) 15:00, 9 August 2017 (UTC) [ reply ] "At 9 to 11 cm (3.5–4.3 in) long" this could use the conversion template.added Cas Liber (talk · contribs ) 15:02, 9 August 2017 (UTC) [ reply ] There should be something about taxonomy in the lead, for example about John Latham describing it.added Cas Liber (talk · contribs ) 15:00, 9 August 2017 (UTC) [ reply ] " ...synonymy. though the name Myzomela dibapha was occasionally used. particularly" There are just two extra fullstops punched in. not sure how that happened. comma-fied now Cas Liber (talk · contribs ) 11:49, 10 August 2017 (UTC) [ reply ] Link John Gould and Richard Schodde.link added Cas Liber (talk · contribs ) 15:00, 9 August 2017 (UTC) [ reply ] New Caledonia should be linked too.link added Cas Liber (talk · contribs ) 15:00, 9 August 2017 (UTC) [ reply ] " ...The Wakolo myzomela, Sulawesi myzomela, Banda myzomela and New Caledonian myzomela were" per MOS:OXFORD , the comma list should be consistent. Later in the section, " ...to the Pardalotidae (pardalotes), Acanthizidae (Australian warblers, scrubwrens, thornbills, etc.), and the Maluridae (Australian fairy-wrens) in a " has a different comma list style.I don't like Oxford commas but they are very very useful for slotting references behind if needed...so added one Cas Liber (talk · contribs ) 15:03, 9 August 2017 (UTC) [ reply ]
I mean, we should have consistency. There are a few places like "Insects eaten include beetles, flies, bugs and caterpillars" where there is no comma before the and . So, would you prefer the Oxford commas or the other ones? I could change them according to the comma style you prefer. Adityavagarwal (talk ) 16:54, 9 August 2017 (UTC) [ reply ] Adityavagarwal (talk ) 11:49, 9 August 2017 (UTC) [ reply ]
better to add commas for ease of reference-slotting Cas Liber (talk · contribs ) 11:49, 10 August 2017 (UTC) [ reply ] Would be completing it by today, most probably (just have to study a bit more for tomorrow's exam).
Link Queensland, (Gippsland, Victoria), New South Wales, omnivorous, and Syncarpia glomulifera. links added Cas Liber (talk · contribs ) 09:12, 10 August 2017 (UTC) [ reply ] "... in early Spring (August) and" I think that the month of August falls in Summer (or Autumn), but not early Spring.August is winter/early spring in the Southern Hemisphere (where I am, as well as the scarlet myzomela) Cas Liber (talk · contribs ) 09:12, 10 August 2017 (UTC) [ reply ]
Ah, din't know that. Adityavagarwal (talk ) 10:32, 10 August 2017 (UTC) [ reply ] Link fledged, wingspan, covert feathers, and incubate.links added Cas Liber (talk · contribs ) 11:05, 10 August 2017 (UTC) [ reply ] "It has relatively long wings for its size; when the wing is folded..." I think it should be "It has relatively long wings for its size; when the wings are folded..." instead.done Cas Liber (talk · contribs ) 11:05, 10 August 2017 (UTC) [ reply ] Giving one more read now...
Ref 25 does not have anything about scarlet myzomela (was archiving the web-urls, so I came across the issue). you have to enter the name in the search box and it will show the data on the relevant species Cas Liber (talk · contribs ) 11:50, 10 August 2017 (UTC) [ reply ] Point number 3 is to be fixed.done now Cas Liber (talk · contribs ) 11:50, 10 August 2017 (UTC) [ reply ] Also, I have commented on point number 6.advised now Cas Liber (talk · contribs ) 11:50, 10 August 2017 (UTC) [ reply ] The rest is superb! Adityavagarwal (talk ) 11:27, 10 August 2017 (UTC) [ reply ]
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Awesome article! Just few nit-picks there. It is a pass. Adityavagarwal (talk ) 13:21, 10 August 2017 (UTC) [ reply ]