Remove "and used it in his speech" as it is redundant and potentially confusing as Reagan's speech was an announcement speech rather than an acceptance speech like Roosevelt's.
This focuses primarily on the aspect of his opponents primaries. Some content should be added about the rivalry between Carter and Regan directly.
Yeah, but this section is for providing an in-sight on campaigns of Reagan's opponents. I have tried to keep this section brief and concise, as mentioning some background information about them is important. Other aspects of Reagan's campaign have been provided in the 'Campaign' section. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 09:52, 9 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"pledged to deliver a balanced budget for the first time since 1969." this needs elaboration and clarification. It appears Reagan was not necessarily the first to propose it since 1969, but rather, if successful, he would have been the first to do it. Possible elaboration on the effects Regan's policies actually had on the national deficit.