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Names

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"Castile herself was in difficulties due to poor harvests and..."

Isn't Castile a place? Using "herself" could be confusing. CW 15:52, 3 August 2005 (UTC)[reply]

I'm not sure if you can speak of a "Spanish state" in the 16th century (see Aftermath subsection). Spain was a geographical term for the peninsula, much as "Britain" is a term for a large island, long before it was unified politically. Anybody with an insight here? I replaced it with "integrated into the Spanish Habsburg domain" - but that seemed even less satisfactory and so have reverted to "Spanish state" - but that seems anachronistic. Charles never used the title of King of Spain, but rather King of Castile as well as calling himself King of Aragon. Would it be better that the line about "integrating" Castile be dropped altogether? Rob 6-Jan-06 — Preceding unsigned comment added by 210.49.191.69 (talk) 14:50, 5 January 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Have thought about a bit more - it still was the "Habsburg" as the empire had not yet been divided by Charles. Dropped "Spanish State" as it didn't exist. 7-Jan-06 — Preceding unsigned comment added by 210.49.191.69 (talk) 05:37, 7 January 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Castile is a country, but She/herself "refers to abstractions personified as feminine, and also for the soul, a city, a country, an army, the church, and others." (see she) --Polylerus (talk) 22:47, 23 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Rex Hispaniae

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The term Rex Hispaniae is used all along the Reconquest of Spain (since Alfonso III, 866-910), but the "Anónimo Mozárabe" chronicle, in the middle 8th century, told us about the "destruction of Spain" by the arabs. I think the Reconquest made the abstract conception of a nation, Spain in this case, based in the idealized past of the gothic kingdom. This concept was only shared by the kings, aristocrats, and, specilly, the clergy. They incite the war against the moors, so the restauration of the spanish church can be achieved. Spain was an idea, not a State, an anachronism in the Middle Ages. In the period of the Hagsburg dinasty we have examples of references to Spain, not as a geographical territory, but as a nation. Quevedo refers to Spain as "mine fatherland" in one of his sonets, and Quixote tells Sancho that he will not find in Spain more than four to six knights errants. Spain is not an isolate case. The High Middle Ages were the origin of most of the European nations, some of them based with evidence in the ancient roman jurisdiction, like Spain, Gaul, or Italy. Instead, the present day idea of nation is not the saim that the one of middle ages or modern times. Everything changes with the time, we can't search for our point of view of the question in the past, because that of ours respond to our context. This doesn't means that our forefathers hadn't got an own concept of nation, who suits whit their era. Excuse my poor english.

V.M.A. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 62.42.51.20 (talk) 13:27, 26 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Page title

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"War of the Communities" is a literal translation of the Spanish name for the conflict. There doesn't seem to be much English literature on the topic, but what little I've read uses "Revolt of the Comuneros" or "Comuneros Revolt of 1520-21." Checking Google Scholar...

So, yeah. Moving it back here as the normal English term, and adding a hatnote for the other revolts. SnowFire (talk) 00:37, 23 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Recent changes

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Pat: Nice to see some others taking interest. Unfortunately, I disagree with most of your changes, but I can see why you'd make some. To explain my thoughts:

Thoughts? I feel bad doing this, but I'm highly tempted to revert most of your changes here. For one, the spelling out numbers vs. using numerals issue is entirely optional either way, but needs to be consistent. If one of us writes one way and the other the other way, it'll look silly... and since I've been writing most of the article and trying to keep it consistent, I'd prefer if I could continue to write out numbers? SnowFire (talk) 23:17, 28 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I will attempt to reply to some of this:-

There are some problems with Juan López de Padilla's name, since Juan de Padilla on Wikipedia actually refers to another person. Further discussion of this problem should take place on e.g. the "Juan de Padilla" talk page.

I would argue that as a general rule Wikipedia articles should refer to someone by the name of their Wikipedia biography.

In these more sensitive times we should be cautious about referring to people by names like "Joanna the Mad" even if this was what her contemporaries called her. In some places names like "Joanna" or "Queen Joanna" were piped to "Joanna the Mad", which is itself a redirect to "Joanna of Castile", not a good way of operating. Also, while she probably did have some mental health problems, could these have been exagerrated by her political opponents?

I don't think it's good practice to leave passages commented out without any attempt to resolve the issues. PatGallacher (talk) 01:49, 29 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Well, the POV issues only apply when it's the editor's POV. Joannna's contemporaries thought she was mentally incapable, which is what's important. According to accounts which I don't think there's much reason to doubt, she refused to eat or sleep, refused to change her clothes or bathe, was convinced that her ladies in waiting were trying to kill her, etc.
As for names, the name of the article seems like a good rule of thumb, but "Joanna the Mad" is bolded and mentioned right at the top as an alternate name. Not that there's anything wrong with using Joanna I either, but Joanna the Mad is also correct. You may be right about political opponents, but, well, so it goes. Julian the Apostate's article is even at the location of his unflattering name; it's what was used to refer to him, so so it goes.
For Padilla, perhaps you have a point. I'll double-check the sources, and maybe he should be referred to by his full name in at least a few places.
For commenting out passages, I agree, but the article is still something of a work in progress. I'd like to submit this to WP:FAC eventually, and I'd definitely have removed that stuff by then. I kept it for the time being mostly because if, say, sub-articles are spun out where length isn't a consideration, commenting out "extra" info means that it's easy to find and move. Speaking of which: I'm considering something along the lines of a Military history of the Revolt of the Comuneros, comparable to the distinction between American Revolution and American Revolutionary War. Could be useful if the information on the battles swells too high, perhaps. SnowFire (talk) 02:36, 29 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Translation notes

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While I'm at it, figure I should lay out a few assumptions I've made in case people wonder why:

SnowFire (talk) 23:17, 28 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Hatnote

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I quote the guideline Disambiguation: "If there are three or more topics associated with the same term, then a disambiguation page should normally be created for that term". So the hatnote should be a link to a disambiguation page. PatGallacher (talk) 01:43, 2 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Well, I still lightly disagree, since ((about)) has options for as many as five extra uses, and I've seen the two other uses thing in quite a few good articles. But this is a pretty minor issue. I intend to bring this article off to peer review once it has some more references added, and I figure we can raise the question there to others and see what they think. I don't think it's a big deal either way. SnowFire (talk) 06:02, 4 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

(Edit: Since I linked this in the PR, a quick diff to see what we're discussing without digging through the archives would be this change. I think the rule of thumb is that when there are three possibilities, that's too long for a hatnote, but two is fine. Though admittedly these are a long two.) SnowFire (talk) 06:40, 29 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Lede section

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(copied from SnowFire's talk page, re this edit by Ceckauskas Dominykas)

The phrase is not logical. It says that king arrived with Flemish escort and these factors led to revolt. It sounds like Castilians were xenophobes, but this is discussed in any book on the subject that this had nothing to do with xenophobia. And phrase like this can disturb reader. I don't understand why you prefer non-referenced end illogical phrase over more detailed and referenced one. Maybe if you don’t like that it is discussed two times in the article you should delete the later phrase. --Ceckauskas Dominykas 15:32, 6 November 2009 (UTC)

Response: Okay, there's several issues here.

Republican flag

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About the relationship between Comuneros and the flag of the Second Spanish Republic, I don't have references, and es:Bandera de la Segunda República Española while thorough does not have them as well. --Error (talk) 01:17, 4 February 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Yeah. Will go back and try and research this myself later, but it seems that at the very least, adding the purple stripe was part of Castilian nationalism, but it's not clear how many people tied that to the Comuneros. Some, for sure, but I can't tell if it was a major amount. I'm removing it for now largely since there's not much room for more images in that section, but am going to try and take a second look and see if it can be restored. SnowFire (talk) 20:26, 7 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Good Article Nomination comment

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Huh, it says you're not supposed to start a section anymore... anyway, as can be seen, this is an A-Class article that was also a former FA candidate. Hopefully, since A>GA, this should be an easy pass, but I'm also interested in a peer review if possible about the prose. The FAC had some, to me, nebulous complaints about "the prose isn't good enough," and I'd be happy if anybody could give their thoughts on if there's any improvements to be made. (Vaguely tempted to have another go-round at FAC, but I haven't found much I personally would want to change since then, so perhaps a fresh set of eyes is needed.) SnowFire (talk) 20:26, 7 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Revolt of the Comuneros/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

I will review this article over this weekend.

Reviewer: Nick-D (talk) 10:47, 14 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

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As per the comment on the article's talk page I'll be focusing on the article's prose. I should note at the outset that I have no prior knowledge at all of the topic covered by the article.

My comments on prose are:

Other comments:

Thanks for looking at the article! Replies:

Thanks again for the review. SnowFire (talk) 04:36, 18 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Assessment

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GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:
    B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
    C. No original research:
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:
    B. Focused:
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:

Please discuss your edits

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HCPUNXKID, calling my edits vandalism does not inspire confidence in you, this is a vanilla editorial disagreement. I wrote this article; it is basically a featured article in all but name, as the only complaints at the Featured Article Candidacy were vague prose ones, not factual ones. I've already explained my stance in my edit summaries; if you'd like to make changes, you need to actually discuss my points rather than call it vandalism. To recap, flags are not needed and misleading - neither side particularly rallied around a flag, and both sides considered themselves Castilians. The closest thing to a "rebel" flag would be File:Flag of Castile (purple).svg or File:Morado-comunero.jpg - but these flags were associated with the comuneros in the 20th century, long after the revolt itself. (But at least they are authentically linked, even if retroactively.) Basically it's a bad idea.

As for capitalizing royalist / rebel, the usual standard is *not* to capitalize it, and that'd be consistent with the rest of the articles. It's not a big deal, but it's not an improvement to edit war over that kind of thing.

As I already mentioned in the edit summary, the POW / executed symbols for leaders are for infoboxes on battles, not wars or conflicts. Check out World War I or the like. SnowFire (talk) 17:11, 27 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I congratulate you for writing the article, but that dont make the article your personal property. Also, I didnt read any WP rule that says that editions must be discussed before being made, thats what you claim. Saying that adding the flags is misleading is your personal opinion, not a WP policy, as flags are added always if are accurate in every conflict.
Neither side particularly rallied around a flag? False, royalists rallied aroud the File:Banner of arms crown of Castille Habsbourg style.svg, while Comuneros rallied around the File:Banner of arms kingdom of Castile.svg (wich was later mistaken as purple, giving birth to the 19th-20th century confusion).
POW / executed symbols for leaders are for infoboxes on battles, not wars or conflicts? False again, see Saddam Hussein at Iraq War.
Although, I hope that we can debate to reach a compromise in all these issues. Regards, --HCPUNXKID (talk) 11:50, 30 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]
When there's contention, it's preferred to discuss your edits, yes. Your first edit certainly required no such notice, but after I disagreed, you needed to actually explain why you thought your version was better rather than accuse me of being a vandal because I disagreed.
For flags, do you have sources that back up your claim? (If not, then there's no point going further. If so, then depends. Also, it isn't just "my opinion" that flags can be sketchy: there are explicit rules against the overuse of flags on English Wikipedia, because back in 2005-2007 people went around sticking flags on absolutely everything, and it got ridiculous. Flags of sub-national entities and during rebellions are in fact explicit cases to be very, very cautious about applying flags.)
You found a use where POW / KIA is used on an entire war article. Wikipedia is pretty big, so this isn't surprising. It doesn't mean it's right, though; I'd argue that it's the Iraq War article that is in error, as there are plenty of cases where the KIA/POW marker is NOT used, such as World War I or World War II. It's just not a good idea: does it add anything to mark Mussolini as "KIA"? It's just distracting. And what about Roosevelt, who died before WWII ended but of natural causes? He too died right before the end of the conflict, just not at the hands of enemy action. It's misleading and, more to the point, not useful for what a *whole war* infobox should be about. SnowFire (talk) 15:57, 30 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Image choice for King Charles I of Castile and Aragon

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I changed the portrait of King Charles I of Castile and Aragon to a high quality one, but have been reverted with the reasoning that the "focus is more on Charles" in the original. Which do you think represents the subject best?

@Hohum: I was the one who reverted. If you want to make and use e a cropped version, that's fine. I just think that including the frame is appropriate if the focus is the portrait itself (e.g. in an article about the painter), but that is not the case here - Charles himself is. SnowFire (talk) 19:47, 21 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]