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Adding a self-contradictory tag. I cleaned up a lot of unclear wording and organized the introduction, but there are many contradictions later in the article.
The History section probably needs to be entirely rewritten and re-cited. For example, the introduction claims that the term Personal Branding was first mentioned in 1997, however, the History section states: "Personal branding, self-positioning, and all individual branding by whatever name, was first introduced in 1937..." Later it mentions Tom Peters, but I'm going to leave this to avoid a circular reference. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Somethingartsy (talk • contribs) 22:34, 22 June 2019 (UTC)
Hi There,
I am trying to help fix the issues in this article and I think that the entire section, Goffman's Self-presentation theory should be removed, as it is a long semi relevant tangent to the definition of personal branding and is written like a literary critique which is not good. I wanted to get feedback from other users before making this change. Advice anyone? LilMew88 (talk) 18:21, 14 May 2020 (UTC)
Too much of this article sounds as if written for academic assignments. The use of "you/your" is one of many clues that this is an article that suffers from too many editors. The topic needs an article, but more on what "personal branding" is and less on how to build my brand. I'm just passing through, but hope experienced editors who care more about this page can improve it. I wish you well. Pete unseth (talk) 01:31, 28 December 2021 (UTC)