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Reviewer: Jens Lallensack (talk · contribs) 15:53, 9 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]


Reading now, comments follow soon! --Jens Lallensack (talk) 15:53, 9 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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  • Unfortunately there is no data about the exact place, all we know is that it was filmed somewhere in Florida. And about "castle" or "palace", it is actually defined as a "castle" in the source. I am going to add this reference too, which has named it a "castle" as well. آرمین هویدایی (talk) 17:18, 11 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • The music video seems to have been shot the Miami Biltmore Hotel. Not a castle at all. I don't have a reliable source at hand, and if you can't find one, please just remove the word "castle" here, it is definitely a mistake. --Jens Lallensack (talk) 19:42, 11 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Jens Lallensack Thanks for devoting your time on it. We have addressed the issues. آرمین هویدایی (talk) 18:36, 11 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks! One open point left (the "castle") which I think really needs fixing, after that I am ready to promote! --Jens Lallensack (talk) 19:42, 11 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
@Jens Lallensack: Should I change it to "palace"?
No, its not a palace either (my first guess was wrong), it is the Miami Biltmore Hotel (which has been a hotel from the start) … But we can't state this without a source, unfortunately. Without a source, I think you have to change to "building", because only this is covered by the existing sources (hotels and castles are both buildings). --Jens Lallensack (talk) 20:12, 11 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
@Jens Lallensack: Done آرمین هویدایی (talk) 21:02, 11 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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آرمین هویدایی, I've struck the items I've taken care of and will start adding any links to the Credits section. If you add more linked personnel to the body, please remember to de-link them later. Please ping me if you have any comments. ResPM (T🔈🎵C) 19:08, 9 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Okay, that's taken care of. You should double-check them to make sure I didn't link the wrong person by accident. ResPM (T🔈🎵C) 19:28, 9 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

ResolutionsPerMinute Thank you for helping me on this article, I have no further comments. I will just add a newly published ranking list to the music video section now. آرمین هویدایی (talk) 17:18, 11 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@آرمین هویدایی: Looks good, as does the rest of the article. If you're all set, ping the review so they can check it out. ResPM (T🔈🎵C) 17:55, 11 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]