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Reviewer: Protonk (talk · contribs) 16:50, 13 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]


This article is fairly short, well sourced and largely a good summary of the subject. I have some comments below which mostly relate to the clarity of the prose and some minor POV problems (which are sometimes unavoidable when the sources all describe the event breathlessly). They should be pretty easy to clear up and the article passed in short order. Sorry for the long wait.

Thanks, Protonk (talk) 16:50, 13 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]