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The following discussion is an archived record of a request for comment. Please do not modify it. No further edits should be made to this discussion. A summary of the conclusions reached follows.
There is a pretty close count between those who wish to include or exclude the name, and the arguments are generally split between "covered in reliable sources" for those seeking inclusion and "WP:BLPCRIME" for those opposed. I have down-weighed the argument that the possibility that Penny is notable affects the application of BLPCRIME. This argument does not hold up against BLPCRIME, which sets the threshold at public figure, not simply notable. WP:NOTPUBLICFIGURE, which is linked in BLPCRIME, makes it clear that notability does not make one a public figure. This was pointed out in the discussion by Caeciliusinhorto. I also found arguments based around the sourcing merely existing well rebutted by Caeciliusinhorto, as the arguments don't expand on how the use of a name rather than describing the individual contributes to understanding the topic.
The strength of the opposition is well summed up by Nemov, who said in their !vote to include if we're dogmatically following the guidelines then the answer would be to exclude. WP:BLP is a policy, not a guideline, and responses with strong, policy based rationales have more weight than those without. As such, there is no consensus to include the name. As challenged material about a BLP requires consensus to include, it should be removed. ScottishFinnishRadish (talk) 14:07, 14 June 2023 (UTC)
Editing to clarify per discussion on my talk page that I read the consensus as relating to the entire article. There was very little discussion about the lead itself, and the oppose rationales apply to the entire article rather than just the lead. WP:BLPCRIME doesn't end with the lead. ScottishFinnishRadish (talk) 18:30, 14 June 2023 (UTC)


Should the name of the killer be included in the lead section?

(original discussion in Talk:Name of Killer) --LoomCreek (talk) 01:17, 6 May 2023 (UTC)

LoomCreek - would you consider removing the name from this section until we have a decision? Just a thought. Cheers. Dumuzid (talk) 01:31, 6 May 2023 (UTC)
Comment, Sure LoomCreek (talk) 01:35, 6 May 2023 (UTC)
But you didn't LoomCreek? I.e. did you consider then dismiss it as not important? His name is still there in the lead section 16 days later; and you reverted me dropping the name from the whole article, but subsequently made this RfC about dropping the name from the lead only (without notifying me; while, yes, rather ANI me on a separate but related matter). It's rather useless to only drop from the lead. I request, again, dropping it (temporarily) from all of the article, and at least from the lead since/if you're actually only ok with that. comp.arch (talk) 15:34, 22 May 2023 (UTC)
@Comp.arch Why are you responding to week old talk comments (especially without even understanding the context)? This was about the talk page name. Stop being unnecessarily divisive. LoomCreek (talk) 20:56, 22 May 2023 (UTC)
Ok, if this was about this talk page section, then that was ambiguous; I read "this section" as referring to "the lead section" in the RfC, that Dumuzid's comment was directly under. It's good that you removed his name. I see though you (and many others) refer to him below, all the time. It will rather hard to drop his name from history, why I never use the name, not even here. comp.arch (talk) 21:43, 22 May 2023 (UTC)

References

  1. ^ Grechenig, Nicklisch & Thoeni, Punishment Despite Reasonable Doubt - A Public Goods Experiment with Sanctions under Uncertainty, Journal of Empirical Legal Studies (JELS) 2010, vol. 7 (4), p. 847-867 (ssrn).
That's not the way charges are handled in Wikipedia. If charges are laid against an individual, and if that person's name is widely sourced, then there is nothing in WP:BLPCRIME to prevent inclusion of the name of the accused. WWGB (talk) 06:54, 6 May 2023 (UTC)
Ah okay thanks for the clarification. I was taking what I presumed could be the strictest definition given the level of discussion here.
If that's the case then I wonder if Dumuzid still opposes, since that seemed to be their major point of contention. LoomCreek (talk) 08:36, 6 May 2023 (UTC)
As clarification in the section it says "editors must seriously consider not including material...that suggests the person.. is accused of having committed, a crime, unless a conviction has been secured" wouldn't that bar discussing accusations/charges? LoomCreek (talk) 08:42, 6 May 2023 (UTC)
The words that you quoted are prefaced by, and apply only to, the statement "individuals who are not public figures". If Penny is charged, his name will be published around the world, and he will certainly pass the "public figure" test. WWGB (talk) 09:31, 6 May 2023 (UTC)
@WWGB Ah okay, was just trying to understand. LoomCreek (talk) 16:46, 6 May 2023 (UTC)
Just for the record, I would disagree with this interpretation of WP:BLPCRIME as it would basically swallow the entire rule, but reasonable minds can differ. Cheers. Dumuzid (talk) 17:00, 6 May 2023 (UTC)
WP:BLPCRIME only requires that "editors must seriously consider not including material ... ". Besides, Penny is no longer non-notable; his name has been published around the world. WWGB (talk) 07:11, 8 May 2023 (UTC)
I totally agree with @WWGB. Furthermore, the existence of this RfC is enough to be able to affirm that the addition or non-addition of the ex marine's name to the article is being under serious consideration. Now the context is different from when Daily Mail published the ex marine's name and then deleted it. We have to keep in mind that Wikipedia is not a primary source, but if the article's content is supported by references it is acceptable. After the ex marine's name appeared for the first time, a short time later the Daily Mail published it again, other magazines published it.. and right now it is published all over the world. Sadly, this case is already part of NYC's history. And as I said in a previous message, it is not our job to assert whether or not the ex marine is guilty or not guilty of something, but to bring encyclopedic coverage of this incident trying to give the article accurate content. Salvabl (talk) 02:25, 9 May 2023 (UTC)
People think this is simpler than it actually is. I don't even see "him" (alone) admitting killing Neely (nor does the coroner actually state he killed Neely! Not his job; the DA charged, but I've not seen him state anything publicly). His statement WP:BLPSELFPUB (through his layer team) is "[he] with the help of others, acted to protect themselves, until help arrived." So we're just naming him, not the other two. Were do you draw the line regarding BLP policy. You can say two others (unnamed) were involved, since they DID touch Neely. If they hadn't helped, Neely might have escaped and still be alive. So who is at fault? We don't know what would have happened, if they hadn't helped, nor what happened in the minutes not caught on video. There's no argument that the others have not been charged (as a former police officer has suggested should be done). We included the seemingly "main" guy before he was charged. We can't know if the others will not be charged in the future. Should we just includes names of people we or the news like to name? There is no rush in including his name until conviction. How does it help, really, having it? Neely is as dead either way, justice goes its course (unless you do not believe in the justice system). "We don't get to decide for readers which content is important or not". That's exactly what we do, and is our purpose, per consensus, except is some cases, i.e. regarding privacy! Then we don't get to decide, against policy. already "part of NYC's history. [we should] bring encyclopedic coverage of this incident", why just this?, we should name every defendant in NY history (with or without video "evidence"), and since this is English language WP, in at least those countries, I guess the whole world, even if neither party is notable. It's just up to what news stations know about and care to report? comp.arch (talk) 20:45, 18 May 2023 (UTC)
A charge doesn't change any of the dynamics discussed before and it's already been discussed on those grounds anyways LoomCreek (talk) 23:55, 17 May 2023 (UTC)
  • For individuals who are not public figures; that is, individuals not covered by § Public figures, editors must seriously consider not including material—in any article—that suggests the person has committed, or is accused of having committed, a crime, unless a conviction has been secured. Daniel Penny's name is not material that suggests he has committed a crime. Combefere Talk 19:07, 18 May 2023 (UTC)
    How do you mention his name without suggesting "he's accused of a crime?" that suggests the person has committed, or is 'accused of having committed, a crime, unless a conviction has been secured.' Nemov (talk) 19:16, 18 May 2023 (UTC)
    As of now, the first sentence in the article reads: "On May 1, 2023, around 2:30 p.m., Jordan Neely, a homeless 30-year-old black man, was killed by Daniel Penny, a white 24-year-old ex-marine, who placed him in a chokehold while they were riding the F train in Manhattan on the New York City Subway." That statement includes Penny's name without suggesting that he has committed a crime, or is even accused of a crime. Penny killed Neely. This is a neutral, verifiable fact, supported by dozens and dozens of RSs. Stating this fact is not equivalent to stating that he is guilty of second-degree manslaughter. Penny's name and his involvement in the killing of Jordan Neely are notable, regardless of whether or not he will be found guilty, or even whether or not he was charged with a crime. Combefere Talk 19:57, 18 May 2023 (UTC)
This seems like an okay place to ask but I don't see how editors must seriously consider not including material ... is as definite as you say, A. B.? It seems to me that we should err on the side of not including in the general case but if there's sufficient discussion and notability of the person, we could find a consensus to include the name without violating policy. So it's a discussion about where this falls instead of a bright-line policy decision. What, if anything, am I missing? Skynxnex (talk) 19:20, 18 May 2023 (UTC)
Skynxnex, to answer your question:
  • If you read the entirety of Wikipedia:Biographies of living persons, you'll see that the tenor of the policy is that we bend over backwards to avoid BLP problems.
    • By the way, aside from this particular case, all active editors should take a few minutes to read that particular policy.
  • It's a small but telling thing about the policy's intent - missing from the excerpt quoted above is that "not" is in bold font:
    • editors must seriously consider not including material…
So I believe there's a little wiggle room in the policy, but only just a little. --A. B. (talkcontribsglobal count) 19:50, 18 May 2023 (UTC)
Thanks for your reply. Skynxnex (talk) 20:24, 18 May 2023 (UTC)
Yeah. Just wanted to briefly pop in to say that I agree that the article clearly suggests that the suspect committed a crime (for instance by saying he was charged with one), but also that "must seriously consider not" is not equivalent to "must not." Cheers, all. Dumuzid (talk) 19:23, 18 May 2023 (UTC)


Going forward, I suggest the community consider modify BLPCRIME to include WP:CATOUTOFBAG. That is, an explicit carve-out for cases involving widespread, reliable, national news coverage. Since charges can be dropped, it should also include a requirement that any previously named suspect immediately get their name scrubbed if no longer charged.
This should be a discussion elsewhere- probably and RfC at the Village Pump. —A. B. (talkcontribsglobal count) 15:31, 19 May 2023 (UTC)
Note on comment - the WP: prefix there, it isn't to imply there's such a preexisting rule (in any context), in case people misunderstood or just scan text quicly, rather that you want such a rule. Precisely since there's no CATOUTOFBAG policy (or guideline), it doesn't seems like an excuse to pretend as if there were one. I dear no longer to strike people out (as I did before when BLP[CRIME?] policy were actually misrepresented, as just being a guideline). I don't meant to imply anyone trying to misrepresent anything, intentionally, I take all are acting in good faith. comp.arch (talk) 23:00, 19 May 2023 (UTC)
For the record (and particularly for the closing editor), I don't think this is an accurate representation of the emerging consensus here. By my count, only one editor supporting the inclusion of Penny's name (Nemov) made the argument that widespread reliable news coverage should trump or overrule BLP; and only one editor (Skynxnex) no editors relied on the looseness of the phrase "must seriously consider" in BLP. My interpretation of the consensus here is that there is no clause in BLP that precludes or even discourages us from using the name in the lead (or article). The few editors who have voted to exclude the name frankly have not done the work to explain which part of BLP is supposed to do so. On the flipside, the editors supporting inclusion have collectively quoted and deconstructed nearly every sentence in BLPCRIME and BLPNAME and found no cause for concern there. Of editors who support inclusion, the vast majority seem to think that there is no part of BLP that is violated by including the name.
You might have your own issues with the wording of BLP and the confusion surrounding it, but I'd encourage you to consider that you may have mischaracterized your opposition here in assuming they relied on those concerns. This article and BLP sit next to each other quite comfortably, as written each. Combefere Talk 07:51, 28 May 2023 (UTC), Edited 19:40, 1 June 2023 (UTC)
@Combefere I'll say I didn't "rely" on the looseness of the phrase only, really, but instead was trying to respond to people who thought WP:BLPCRIME had to apply where even the most strict reading of it would allow its inclusion so it's back to just a general consensus of editors instead of an WP:IAR situation ignoring policy to include it. Skynxnex (talk) 18:51, 1 June 2023 (UTC)
Noted and updated. Combefere Talk 19:40, 1 June 2023 (UTC)
Thanks! Skynxnex (talk) 19:41, 1 June 2023 (UTC)
Comment It seems to be a pretty settled consistent majority at this point. Perhaps it's time to close the discussion? LoomCreek (talk) 17:27, 1 June 2023 (UTC)
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RfC "Name Inclusion, reopened" has not been closed

Resolved

@LoomCreek has now named Neely's assailant even though the active RfC has not been closed. The edit summary says, There is now overwhelming consensus 29 to 9, with arguments for exclusion largely focusing on a narrow interpretation of policy addressed by the inclusion side on several different points of policy. While I tend to agree with that argument, unless I grossly misunderstand procedure, RfC closures should only be done by uninvolved editors--particularly not by an editor in favor of their own !vote, and almost certainly not by the editor who opened it in the first place.

Several hours ago, I strongly suggested on their talk page that they self-revert, but was told to bring the discussion here. Xan747 (talk) 00:02, 17 July 2023 (UTC)

To clarify for the record. I did not formally close the discussion. You are allowed as an editor to make informal changes based on talk discussions. See WP:CLOSE.
If a shift in opinion happens it is open to be changed. However given the current overwhelming rough consensus, as is the standard, the article should represent that in the meantime.
With the final close decision happening sometime in the future, by someone else. -LoomCreek (talk) 00:48, 17 July 2023 (UTC)
Wikipedia:Requests for comment was more helpful to me. In bold it says, If the matter under discussion is not contentious and the consensus is obvious to the participants, then formal closure is neither necessary nor advisable. Why have a formal process that can be informally closed is beyond me, but this is Wikipedia.
So, my apologies to you for suggesting that you had in any way violated policy because clearly you have not.
And no, you didn't formally close it, you implicitly did with you edit. I think a formal close by you, with the justification you used in your edit summary, would be good for the record and to take it off the backlog as a courtesy to RfC patrollers. Xan747 (talk) 01:59, 17 July 2023 (UTC)
The RfC has not been closed as admins appear reluctant to overturn a decision by one of their own. With a very wide margin to include, why delay the inevitable? WWGB (talk) 01:49, 17 July 2023 (UTC)
I'm not sure this is wp:iar territory yet, @WWGB, nothing is on fire. -Xan747 (talk)
What rule has been "ignored"? Over 75% of the interested Wikipedia community favour inclusion of Penny's name. Formal closure of the RfC is just a formality. There's no rule that says we must wait for formal closure of a clear consensus. Justice delayed is justice denied. WWGB (talk) 01:59, 17 July 2023 (UTC)
Based on how formally the previous RfC was handled, I was under the mistaken impression that only formal third-party closures were accepted. Having now reviewed actual policy has put me right. If you really think justice served is being named on Wikipedia, I'm not sure we have the same understanding of the word. But other than that I think our view on why to name Penny is pretty much the same, so I will drop the stick now. Xan747 (talk) 02:13, 17 July 2023 (UTC)
No worries, glad it could be resolved. - LoomCreek (talk) 02:27, 17 July 2023 (UTC)

Penny is not a serving marine

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An editor has replaced every occurrence of Penny with "the marine". Penny is no longer serving, so that label is erroneous. Should we use "ex-marine", "the accused" or some other label? Opinions sought. WWGB (talk) 05:10, 15 June 2023 (UTC)

Given that Penny has now been indicted by the grand jury, his name should probably be included in the article. 72.14.126.22 (talk) 07:04, 15 June 2023 (UTC)
My bad, I probably should have done ex-marine or the accused throughout. I was just updated to reflect RFC closing. WikiVirusC(talk) 13:03, 15 June 2023 (UTC)
My fault for using "the marine" as well. Would prefer "ex-marine" to "accused" as being more neutral but will accept either, can't think of any other option. Xan747 (talk) 13:18, 15 June 2023 (UTC)
I commend to everyone's reading, at least once, this from the official Marine Corps website:
https://www.marines.com/life-as-a-marine/life-in-the-marine-corps/once-a-marine-always-a-marine.html
("Once a Marine, Always a Marine") – There truly is no such thing as a former Marine, as after service our Marine Veterans are just as dedicated to advancing our Nation and defending its ideals.
The term "Marine veteran" adequately conveys that they are no longer in active service, for whatever reason.
ETA, later: Have changed all non-quoted occurrences to either "Marine veteran" or simply "veteran". – .Raven  .talk 05:05, 17 June 2023 (UTC)
I was questioned on that capital "M" in "Marine". Some sources:
– .Raven  .talk 05:58, 17 June 2023 (UTC)
And for more sources re the "ex-", see here. – .Raven  .talk 06:22, 17 June 2023 (UTC)
This was discussed in the "Marine" capitalization section above, and the 2-0 consensus was to follow WP:MARINE guidance, which is no caps when referring to individuals. If you were to take your arguments to the policy talk page, I would support you. Pending a change, I think it best to stick to current policy.
I think it is important to distinguish between active-duty/reservist status and discharged. I would prefer "ex-marine" or "former marine" over "marine veteran" or "veteran" as being the more neutral options, but most RS except Military.com and NPR are using "veteran marine." Xan747 (talk) 13:06, 17 June 2023 (UTC)
Okay, @Xan747, PriusGod, Skynxnex, WikiVirusC, and WWGB: and anyone else interested:
Please see Wikipedia talk:Manual of Style/Capital letters#Capitalization of "Marine" – .Raven  .talk 02:33, 18 June 2023 (UTC)
I changed all instances of "the marine" to "the ex-marine" in the article where appropriate. If someone feels strongly he should go by some other label, I won't contest it if they make that change. Xan747 (talk) 14:24, 15 June 2023 (UTC)
I think "ex-marine" is probably WP:UNDUE since I don't think we know that his ex-marine-ness is really that defining of a trait at this time, as far as I know. I don't have a great replacement but I'd be supportive of figuring out a replacement (this isn't to say changing it all to "ex-marine" for now was a mistake). Skynxnex (talk) 15:32, 15 June 2023 (UTC)
@Dumuzid referred to him as the "defendant" above, which seems softer than the suspect, or the accused, but not as flattering as ex-marine. Xan747 (talk) 18:57, 15 June 2023 (UTC)
Once a marine, always a marine. You dont need to be a currently-serving marine to be addressed as a marine. Unless someone is dishonorably discharged, its not "ex marine", its "marine".
Also, its pretty sad to see how pages like this involve some of the most BS information in them, like how Daniel Penny supposedly choked Neely for 15-min, a statement that is patently false. The words of an eye witness are irrelevant to that matter, eye witness testimony is INCREDIBLY unreliable, ESPECIALLY when they try to determine how long an incident occurred. You can clearly see on video that it didnt last that long, and you can also see that Daniel rolled Neely over to his side to make sure he didnt choke while he was unconscious, which clearly shows that he had the well-being of Neely in mind. But it seems like the people that have edited this page only care about making Penny look as bad as possible, while simultaneously trying to make Neely look as innocent as possible (like using a 10-year-old photo of him). If we're going to talk about Penny being an "ex-marine", why tf then would people be acting like Neely was a "Michael Jackson impersonator", when he hadnt done that for years? XD3vlLx (talk) 19:13, 1 July 2023 (UTC)


In the absence of consensus to include Daniel Penny's name in the article, how should we refer to him? Suggestions have included "the accused", "the assailant", "the defendant", "ex-Marine" and "veteran". WWGB (talk) 06:30, 17 June 2023 (UTC)

  • The defendant is most neutral, carrying neither implication of guilt nor heroism. Xan747 (talk) 12:17, 17 June 2023 (UTC)
  • Name him. As far as I know, we typically name the accused in criminal cases. I would do so here. Failing that, I guess we could say "the defendant". Adoring nanny (talk) 13:31, 17 June 2023 (UTC)
  • Name Penny in the article and in the lead or use the term Assailant
Terms like "defendant" or "the accused" only make sense in a legal context regarding the case against Penny, and should be used solely to describe and reference the legal action and indictment.
Otherwise, when discussing Penny's actions and the event overall, "assailant" is both factual and accurate, as Penny is indisputably responsible for choking Neely, an act which led to the man's death (and a fact that even Penny has not denied). 72.14.126.22 (talk) 02:38, 19 June 2023 (UTC)
He can always be referred to as "Marine veteran" or thereafter "veteran", per sources cited. "Defendant" works if referring to when he was charged, and thereafter until the case ends one way or another. – .Raven  .talk 02:41, 18 June 2023 (UTC)
Anything that doesn't refer to his marineness. What matters here is the fact he's accused of the crime, not random trivia about him. "The ex-marine" reads like something a newspaper would write for elegant variation. -- Maddy from Celeste (WAVEDASH) 07:22, 18 June 2023 (UTC)
Good point here, it's not as if his being a Marine is somehow the defining element of Penny's persona or character. 72.14.126.22 (talk) 02:36, 19 June 2023 (UTC)
Name him per Adorings argument. In absence the ex-marine. LoomCreek (talk) 09:18, 18 June 2023 (UTC)
Name him or the defendant. Strongly oppose using the terms ex-Marine, veteran, et cetera. nf utvol (talk) 00:39, 20 June 2023 (UTC)
Name him per my comments in what feels like a dozen disparate discussions about this subject. Combefere Talk 00:46, 20 June 2023 (UTC)
Name him - I don't see why we wouldn't. His name is the most accurate and neutral word. The void century 22:56, 20 June 2023 (UTC)
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Policy discussion at BLP mentioning this article

There is an ongoing policy discussion at WP:BLP entitled Naming accused perpetrators of crimes debating the question of whether articles about high-profile criminal cases should name any known suspect(s) prior to conviction, especially when they are only known for their involvement with the event in question. This article is featured as one example of four fitting these criteria which either did not name the suspect(s) after being published by reliable sources, or not until after consensus to name was obtained by discussion. I will be copying this message to the other articles so that interested editors have an opportunity participate in the debate. Xan747 (talk) 17:56, 22 July 2023 (UTC)

House Resolution 448

I've been told to seek consensus before making changes to this article, so here goes. Should the section on reactions and protests refer to House Resolution 448, a bill in the House of Representatives to recognise and honor Daniel Penny for his "courage in apprehending a threat to public safety"? A proposed congressional resolution about the case seems relevant and noteworthy. Truecrimefan22 (talk) 18:19, 22 July 2023 (UTC)

@Truecrimefan22, I agree that the proposed resolution is relevant and noteworthy. However, the only secondary source you gave is Fox. There is strong consensus on this page (see the archives) that Fox should not be cited in this article for factual reporting due the politicized nature of this event--not even for attributed opinion, which WP:FOXNEWSPOLITICS says is acceptable. Your other two sources were primary and shouldn't be used on their own without RS to interpret and establish notability.
In this case I could !vote for a weak include on the basis of citations given because the primary sources validate the Fox story. But knowing the past consensus, I would not do so without the support of other editors. For the record, here is the edit of yours that I reverted, with the citations, so everyone is clear what you propose:
On May 25, Republican politician Andy Ogles proposed House Resolution 448 in the United States House of Representatives to "recognize and honor Daniel Penny...for his heroism and courage in apprehending a threat to public safety".[1] The resolution was supported by Marjorie Taylor Greene and other Republican representatives.[2] The text of House Resolution 448 made reference to Neely's arrest record and stated that descriptions of Penny as a vigilante and white supremacist "[had] no basis in fact". Neely's death was not referred to in the resolution.[3]

References

  1. ^ "House Resolution 448 - Recognizing and honoring Daniel Penny of West Islip, New York, for his heroism and courage in apprehending a threat to public safety". Congress.gov.
  2. ^ Morris, Kyle; Keene, Houston (25 May 2023). "Republicans push resolution to 'recognize and honor' Daniel Penny for 'heroism and courage'". Fox News.
  3. ^ "Text of 118th Congress, House Resolution 448". Govtrack.

Xan747 (talk) 19:50, 22 July 2023 (UTC)

There's also this source, which while from local news isn't Fox and would likely be considered reliable. This should probably be included. Elli (talk | contribs) 19:52, 22 July 2023 (UTC)
@Elli, good find. I forgot to mention that I searched for other sources before I reverted and didn't find any. This puts me in the "solid include" camp. I'll add back the content but change the citation accordingly. Xan747 (talk) 19:56, 22 July 2023 (UTC)

Ok here is my edit: On May 25, Republican politician Andy Ogles proposed House Resolution 448 in the United States House of Representatives to "recognize and honor Daniel Penny...for his heroism and courage in apprehending a threat to public safety". The resolution was supported by Marjorie Taylor Greene and other Republican representatives. The text of the resolution made reference to Neely's arrest record. On the same day, Ogles wrote on Twitter, "In Democrat-run cities across the nation, crime is rampant, and the desperate cry for order is loud. Rather than take action to protect everyday citizens, Leftist government leaders prioritize political agendas over justice." Tennessee State Rep. Gloria Johnson responded to the resolution on Twitter, saying, "Maga republicans sure love criminals." I removed some text that was supported by the Fox story, but not in the WSMV-TV source, and added the two tweets. Xan747 (talk) 20:26, 22 July 2023 (UTC)

@Xan747 Which content was not supported by this WSMV-TV report? The "no foundation in fact" comment is the only part I can see that you've removed, and it is included in the article (the resolution's full text being shown at the bottom). Truecrimefan22 (talk) 20:31, 22 July 2023 (UTC)
That one, and "Neely's death was not referred to in the resolution." I have been warned a few times on this talk page about WP:SYNTH and "cherry-picking" statements found in WP:PRIMARYSOURCE. One editor went so far as to completely remove a primary source citation linked to by a secondary RS, which irked me because as a reader of Wikipedia articles, I *want* to be able to examine the ultimate source material when it is readily available so I can form my own conclusions. /rant
TL;DR: I'm cautious about quoting pieces of a primary source not quoted by a secondary RS. And I've learned to absolutely never interpret a primary source. If you want to restore some content only found in the text of the resolution itself, I won't stand in your way--just be warned it might be challenged. Xan747 (talk) 20:49, 22 July 2023 (UTC)