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Starting review...

• Some of the numerical hyphens need to be replaced by ndashes... a few hyphens running loose
• Some of the footnotes do not have an accessdate filled in
• The most worrying part about the article is the heavy predominance on the official website, which is not particularly neutral, can you find other references to ease the burden on the official site?
• Controversy with indigenous Americans needs to be cited.

YellowMonkey (click here to vote for world cycling's #1 model!) 06:24, 11 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Follow-up by Conman33

Done

• Fixed accessdates
• Re-worded indigenous Americans controversy sentence - ultimately removed
• ndashes and mdashes added in

Working on...

• other/more sources

conman33 (. . .talk) 18:53, 13 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

I've added book/print sources. The problem with sources is that the ones in the article are the best around. I've searched the internet pretty good to find more sources, but there aren't many others. conman33 (. . .talk) 02:07, 16 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Ok. YellowMonkey (click here to vote for world cycling's #1 model!) 06:51, 18 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]