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Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 08:53, 22 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

• Added long beach college alumni cat
• any stats or anything of what he did during his basketball career
• basketball position?
• "He returned to United States" add the
• "that year, but missed" remove comma
• "general manager, though" remove comma
• how do u no he became admin assistant in 1973. The source is from 77
• "accepted an offer from the San Diego Chargers as assistant to the owner. He served in that position from 1981 to 1982 " i dont see where in the ref it said assistant to the owner
• "He returned to his role of assistant to the president in 1986" dont see that in ref
• "He later served as their general manager in 1992 before the league suspended. He subsequently retired." No source
• any after football info?

That's all I think. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 09:21, 22 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@BeanieFan11: Someone just changed stuff and in the navbox, so I'll have to look at this again. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 00:03, 29 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

 Closed with the nominator BeanieFan11's permission. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 20:15, 22 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]