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Reviewer: Amitchell125 (talk · contribs ) 10:44, 3 October 2020 (UTC) [ reply ]
Hi, I'll review this one.
Lead section / infobox[ edit ] Unlink Iran .
I’m unclear why the first sentence has a citation—is that he was an Iranian prince controversial at all?
Mostly by new accounts and IPs. --HistoryofIran (talk ) 18:48, 6 October 2020 (UTC) [ reply ]
I would take out the citation here. Amitchell125 (talk ) 21:02, 6 October 2020 (UTC) [ reply ]
Done, moved them to the background section. --HistoryofIran (talk ) 23:48, 6 October 2020 (UTC) [ reply ] ...abrupt death… - can you be more specific about how he died? No capitals in ‘’Astronomical Diaries’’.
...abrupt death… - can you be more specific about how he died?
Who was Lucian?
Added that he was a 2th-century Roman historian. --HistoryofIran (talk ) 18:48, 6 October 2020 (UTC) [ reply ]
The son is not named, it was most likely Apodakos. - Ref 6b (Shayegan) appears to be more definite about his son’s name than this.
Not sure I understand, thoughts? --HistoryofIran (talk ) 23:34, 6 October 2020 (UTC) [ reply ]
It's now looking OK. Amitchell125 (talk ) 06:10, 7 October 2020 (UTC) [ reply ] Add source for Binar (1983).
Add source for Garthwaite (2005), presumably this book .
Add source for Brosius (2006), presumably this book .
Link C.E. Bosworth (Clifford Edmund Bosworth ); Wilhelm Eilers.
url available for Shayegan here .
url available for Binar here .
url available for Schuol here .
Bosworth, Hansmann (1998) and Schippmann are not currently used for citations, and need to be moved out of the 'Bibliography' section. I would put them in a 'Further reading section' if you want to keep them in the article, otherwise they should be deleted. Amitchell125 (talk ) 21:11, 6 October 2020 (UTC) [ reply ] I have put the article on hold for a week until 14 October . Regards, Amitchell125 (talk ) 18:37, 6 October 2020 (UTC) [ reply ]
Great work, now passing. Amitchell125 (talk ) 06:12, 7 October 2020 (UTC) [ reply ]