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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs ) 20:52, 16 July 2021 (UTC) [ reply ]
Add alt text to every image in this article.
"In common usage the word" → "In common usage, the word"
"2.8 million year old" → "2.8 million-year-old"
Remove the comma after "branched progression".
"In the 5th century BCE history" → "In the 5th century BCE, history"
"In Africa the Kingdom" → "In Africa, the Kingdom"
"In West Asia the Achaemenid Empire" → "In West Asia, the Achaemenid Empire"
Add a comma after "the fall of the Western Roman Empire in 476".
Add a comma after "this same time period".
"super powers" should be written as one word (see article ).
"early 1800's" → "early 1800s"
"enhancing exchange of resources" → "enhancing the exchange of resources"
"Through invention humans" → "Through invention, humans"
"overconsumption and combustion of fossil fuels has" → "overconsumption and combustion of fossil fuels have"
Remove the comma after "in some individuals".
"Through history human populations" → "Throughout history, human populations"
"body weight and body type is" → "body weight and body type are"
Add a comma after "the 23 pairs of chromosomes".
"hundreds of thousand" → "hundreds of thousands"
"harbour" and "labour" → "harbor" and "labor" (consistency)
"which are private" → "that are private"
Remove the comma after "development in the human".
Add a comma after "in developing countries".
"to a painful labor" → "to painful labor"
Remove the comma after "time periods".
Add commas after "for example" (both times).
"Central African Republic" → "the Central African Republic"
Add a comma after "the developing world".
Remove the comma after "in human culture".
"and the way in which they are prepared" → "and how they are prepared"
"more lower" → "lower"
Add a hyphen between "chromosome related"."debate over what extent" → "debate over to what extent"
"processing of the things in experience" - reword
"the mental processes'" → "the mental processes"
"which can be defined" → "that can be defined"
Add a comma after "in which case".
"behavioural" and "practised" → "behavioral" and "practiced" (consistency)
"as of quality" - reword
Resolve the [better source needed] tag.
"all the diverse human societies" → "all diverse human societies"
Remove the comma after "locally occurring".
Is "auditively" a word?
"Art is a defining characteristics" → "Art is a defining characteristic"
Is "musics" a word?
"humans musical abilities" → "humans' musical abilities"
"synchronised" → "synchronized"
"30,000 year old" → "30,000-year-old"
"humans capabilities" → "humans' capabilities"
"species of animal" → "species of animals"
"In many societies it is" → "In many societies, it is"
"social organizing principle" → "social organizing principles"
"who identify" → "that identifies"
"Also there is no" → "Also, there is no"
"on what" → "of what"
"ethno-political" → "ethnopolitical"
"obtaining power and ability" → "obtaining power and the ability"
Optional for this article but try to archive references. Thanks for the review. Will work through these. Aircorn (talk) 00:07, 19 July 2021 (UTC) [ reply ]
Sorry, life got in the way. Many of these were done by other editors while I was away. I have made the other changes or have left a comment above. Thanks for reading the article and your useful review. Aircorn (talk) 08:03, 25 July 2021 (UTC) [ reply ]