This is awkward: He joined the military service of the Luftwaffe Is the part about the military service really necessary? When translating the German unit names, capitalize the English equivalents like 2nd Fighter Wing, etc. Get rid of the possessive in this: the Royal Navy’s Fairey Swordfish biplane Add a comma after At the end of the French campaign These are awkward and could be profitably combined: Reichsmarschall Hermann Göring had ordered Kriegsmarine torpedo boats on a search and rescue mission. Throughout the night the naval vessels searched for Wick
combine Reichsmarschall Hermann Göring had ordered Kriegsmarine torpedo boats on a search and rescue mission. Throughout the night the naval vessels searched for Wick: doneMisterBee1966 (talk) 07:18, 3 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Have you tried to confirm if the RN lost Swordfish on the date that Wick made his claim?
Ringlstetter (page 31) is not very precise. I had a look here and aircraft of this type were lost but I can't easily map them. Would this not be original research? MisterBee1966 (talk) 07:32, 3 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Only if you didn't have access to Peter Cornwall's The Battle of France Now and Then, which does not list any Swordfish or Albacores lost to any cause on 19 May.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 14:35, 3 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]