Ok, reviewing now. Although I suspect there won't be much as your warship articles are usually of a very high quality, so anything I do find will be inherently nitpicky in nature.
No duplicate links.
No DAB links.
External links are all fine.
"In 1912 Essex returned home" - could do with a comma, "In 1912, Essex returned home".
Was there any particular reason she was slower than expected?
"The Mexicans resisted and stray bullets hit Essex, wounding one man the next day who was shot in both feet." - Could you flip around the arguments there, as it makes it sounds like the Mexicans resisted and bullets hit the ship... which then wounded a man the following day. I take it the Mexicans resisted, which then the following day the bullets hit the ship and someone was wounded?
Thanks for the review. I've gone ahead and linked Prince Arthur like I meant to as I really don't understand why some people think that a stretch of text in blue rather than black is actually a big deal. I think that I've done everything else that was needed as well.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:41, 6 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]