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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs ) 21:06, 1 May 2016 (UTC) [ reply ]
Will do ASAP. JAG UAR 21:06, 1 May 2016 (UTC) [ reply ]
I would recommend removing all red links from the lead, but I'll leave that up to you
One of these days, I'll start those articles.
The lead summarises the article well, so no issues there
"Her conning tower was protected by four inches of armour" - convert to metric
Converted in the armament section.
"She was still assigned to the 3rd Battle Squadron of the Grand Fleet in Scapa Flow at the start of the war " - World War I
"As a scout cruiser, the ship was only lightly protected to maximize her speed" - maximise
I think that my subconscious leaves these in so you have something to comment on, sigh.
No dead links
No dab links
Ref 6 needs filling out
Excellent work once again. Once all of the above are done this will pass. JAG UAR 21:13, 1 May 2016 (UTC) [ reply ]
Thanks for looking this over. BTW, I finally remembered that tonne is the British spelling of what Americans call metric tons, and all those usages have been abbreviations so they never made an appearance.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk ) 21:52, 1 May 2016 (UTC) [ reply ]
Thanks for addressing them, and the "tonnes" confusion! Without any further ado, promoted JAG UAR 22:43, 1 May 2016 (UTC) [ reply ]