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Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment[edit]

This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Laurensuesharp.

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Edit needed[edit]

Article needs to be edited to reflect death of co-founder Dane Boersma. I'll see if I can't get around to it soon, but if someone else wanted to make that happen in the meantime, it'd be greatly appreciated. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Skittllz (talkcontribs) 00:07, 30 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Someone dealt with that at some point. 72.244.206.6 (talk) 01:56, 17 February 2013 (UTC)[reply]

No longer tagged with COI and tone issue[edit]

I copy-edited the article to address legitimate COI and tone issues raised last year. The article still needs references. 72.244.206.6 (talk) 01:56, 17 February 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I believe the citation issues are now resolved, as well as the advertorial tone. As the previous editor also feels the tone was addressed, I will remove that notation. I couldn't find independent citations for some of Dutch Bros' declarations of their donation amounts, however, I did find enough to support the claim the company is committed to supporting not-for-profits in the community. As an independent company, any claims of number of employees and earnings is by nature self-reported. Thus I removed the broken links. GreatFood4All (talk) 01:26, 27 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Logo image needs cropping and editing[edit]

I added Image:Dutch Bros. Coffee (2869850734).jpg as the logo. Perhaps someone could replace that image with a derived version that is cropped and edited for brightness and contrast. 72.244.206.6 (talk) 02:04, 17 February 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Hello and small request[edit]

Hi! I'm Hillary and I'm part of the Dutch Bros communications team. Due to my conflict of interest, I'm aware that I should not make any edits to the Dutch Bros page and that I should always disclose this financial connection. Before I go any further, I want to acknowledge that I've only recently learned about the conflict of interest guidelines and Terms of Use. I edited the page in the past (my edit was reverted) when I didn't know but will no longer do so, and I'll use requests instead.

My first request is hopefully very easy! Thanks so much to editors who had updated the page following our IPO, which fixed a lot of the figures in the company infobox. However, the revenue still needs to be updated. Please can this be edited as follows:

The source for this is our S-1 filed with the SEC, and it has also been reported in the media. This was an increase compared with FY 2019 revenues.

If there are any questions about this requested edit, please let me know! Thanks! Hillaryjbrown (talk) 17:02, 21 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

subst:ECOI|d Signed, I Am Chaos (talk) 17:20, 21 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Apologies, I meant to write:  Done Signed, I Am Chaos (talk) 17:20, 21 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks so much for your help! I have some more ideas on how to improve the page and plan to propose more edits in the near future. Would you be willing to take a look at them, when the time comes? Hillaryjbrown (talk) 03:30, 27 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

References

  1. ^ "Form S-1/A Dutch Bros Inc". SEC.gov. September 13, 2021. Retrieved October 14, 2021.

Requesting History edits and expansion[edit]

Hello again! Moving on from my request above, I wanted to address the page's History section. The current content is a little messy and it's missing many significant events from Dutch Bros' history. Since there's been a lot written about the company, I wanted to suggest filling the section out with well-sourced claims and give it a cleaner, chronological structure. My main updates are:

The whole draft of what I have in mind is on my user page. I would paste it here, but it’s pretty long, so I thought I’d put it in a place where it’s easier to edit.

Is anybody able to review this? If editors would like to begin with just the Early history portion, that may be an easy way to dive in.

To confirm my disclosure: I work for Dutch Bros and have a financial conflict of interest. Thanks! Hillaryjbrown (talk) 01:09, 13 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hey there User:I Am Chaos, thank you again for your help with the update to the revenue figure. I posted this new request last month to fill out the history section and thought you might be interested in taking a look? If you’re not or it's too much work, no worries. Just thought I'd check in with you first before I looked for help elsewhere. Thank you, Hillaryjbrown (talk) 02:19, 10 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Hey User:SJ Morg, I saw that you recently made some copy edits and added a line updating the number of Dutch Bros store locations. Thanks for sprucing up the page! I proposed a History draft on my user page back in October and I still need some help getting it approved. I have a COI, so I know I shouldn't make changes to the History myself. Would you be interested in looking the draft over? I would really appreciate it. Cheers! Hillaryjbrown (talk) 17:51, 27 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Sorry, @Hillaryjbrown:, but I have no interest in this subject, and the only reason I made a small edit to the article recently is that I happened across an article in my local newspaper that included some significant stats that were not in the WP article, and especially that I discovered the company had enough annual revenue to qualify for inclusion in the Oregon-based companies navbox. I have a long list of WP editing I am always trying to find time to do on subjects that do interest me, so I'm afraid it's a no. Sorry. SJ Morg (talk) 06:44, 28 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I have read the article and the proposed expanded history section, and am pleased that compared to some other business articles it does not seem to be tainted with an advertorial tone. though I randomly clicked a reference or two, I did not do a thorough review. My one concern is that the article as it already stands seems to overly emphasize the history, and the expansion would make that imbalance worse. I'm not familiar with corporate article enough to know what else should be included besides history. Thank you for your effort and especially for the forthright disclosure of COI. YBG (talk) 12:59, 19 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hey, User:YBG! Thanks so much for taking a look at my draft. I agree with you that the current version of the page is pretty history-heavy. I put together this revised History section to fix what already exists on the page, but I do have plans to propose new sections on the company's business model and operations, which contain details about Dutch Bros' leadership structure, how it trains its employees, and how its stores operate. Basically, I see this History fix as the first part of an overall improvement of the page.
Let me know if that clears things up, and if you would be interested in conducting a more thorough review of my proposed History section. Thanks again! Hillaryjbrown (talk) 03:39, 24 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Hey again User:IAmChaos, sorry to bug but I've not yet been able to get this request completed and wondered if you could help. One editor (User:YBG) has already reviewed and was complimentary about the draft. Is this something you'd have time to help with? Also, for both of you to reference, I've put drafts for Business model and Operations in my user space, so you can see what I'm thinking for the rest of the page to balance the History. Cheers! Hillaryjbrown (talk) 00:12, 5 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Requesting update to introduction[edit]

Hello! The page looks much better now, with all the up-to–date information that's been added. Thanks again to the editors who gave me feedback on my section drafts. Moving on, I wanted to make a comparatively minor request: can we add a couple pieces of information to the introduction? My suggestion on content and sourcing is this:

Dutch Bros Coffee is a publicly held drive-through coffee chain in the United States.[1][2] Founded by Dane and Travis Boersma in 1992, it is headquartered in Grants Pass, Oregon.[1][3] It has company-owned and franchise stores primarily located in the western United States.[1][3]

References

  1. ^ a b c Rogoway, Mike (August 21, 2021). "Dutch Bros seeks to raise $100 million in IPO, hopes to have 4,000 coffee stands someday". The Oregonian. Retrieved October 4, 2021.
  2. ^ Patton, Leslie; Hytha, Michael (September 15, 2021). "Dutch Bros Shares Get 59% Debut Boost After $484 Million IPO". Bloomberg. Retrieved October 5, 2021.
  3. ^ a b Beltran, Luisa (August 23, 2021). "Dutch Bros Coffee Goes Public". Barron’s. Retrieved August 23, 2021.

I think it's a good idea to add the company's founders and its founding year, as well as rephrasing that last sentence to reflect the fact that the company has stores outside of the western United States. I'll ask User:Timtempleton if they agree, but obviously other editors are welcome to weigh in too. Thanks! Hillaryjbrown (talk) 16:56, 5 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Hillaryjbrown: Happy to help, but don’t forget to see how you can pay it forward with an hour or so helping out at the Helpout section at Wikipedia:Community portal. It’s going to be a new pet project of mine to help improve Wikipedia while cleaning up the COI request backlog. I’m taking a short Wikibreak but should be back in a couple of weeks. TimTempleton (talk) (cont) 02:28, 7 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Hi @Hillaryjbrown:! I've updated the lead, with some minor changes that I felt. I didn't add citations to it because it's supported later in the article. I hope you're not disappointed at how long this took--responding to COI edit requests require a lot of involvement by editors to make sure things are alright. If you need anything from me about this, don't hesitate to ((ping)) me. SWinxy (talk) 01:28, 9 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
So sorry for the delay in replying- thanks for jumping in to make these changes, User:SWinxy! I definitely appreciate the time and effort from volunteer editors to review these requests, and I'm grateful for your help with this one specifically. Thanks again. Hillaryjbrown (talk) 23:08, 23 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Requesting a few updates to the article[edit]

Hello! I've returned to this Talk page to ask for a few small updates to the article. They are as follows:

Updated Operations

Dutch Bros is headquartered in Grants Pass, Oregon.[1] It is majority-owned by Travis Boersma, who holds the title of executive chairman, and Christine Barone is its president and CEO.[2][3] In September 2021, Dutch Bros became a publicly traded company, selling 21 million shares for a total of $484 million.[2] As of December 2023, the company consists of 831 store across 16 states and employs approximately 24,000 people.[4]

References

  1. ^ "Form S-1/A Dutch Bros Inc". SEC.gov. September 13, 2021. Retrieved October 14, 2021.
  2. ^ a b Patton, Leslie; Hytha, Michael (September 15, 2021). "Dutch Bros Shares Get 59% Debut Boost After $484 Million IPO". Bloomberg. Retrieved October 5, 2021.
  3. ^ Bjorke, Christopher (August 20, 2021). "Dutch Bros files for IPO, seeks to raise $100M". Phoenix Business Journal. Retrieved October 5, 2021.
  4. ^ "Dutch Bros Inc. 2023 Annual Report (Form 10-K)". U.S. Securities and Exchange Commission. February 23, 2024.
Updated Charity

Through "Drink One for Dane", Dutch Bros. Coffee donates to the Muscular Dystrophy Association.[1] Its other annual charitable initiatives include Dutch Luv, which benefits local food banks, and Buck for Kids, which supports local youth organizations, including Boys and Girls Club chapters.[2][3]

References

  1. ^ "Dutch Bros holds 16th Annual Drink One for Dane fundraiser to support the fight against ALS". www.mda.org. MDA.
  2. ^ Aikins, Adjoa (February 1, 2024). "Dutch Bros kicks off Dutch Luv Giveback". KMPH. Retrieved April 3, 2024.
  3. ^ Leister, Allen (September 14, 2023). "Dutch Bros Coffee to host fundraiser for Boys & Girls Clubs of Benton and Franklin Counties". KEPR. Retrieved April 3, 2024.

I think these edits are fairly straightforward, but if any independent editors have questions, please ask away! Thanks so much, Hillary Hillaryjbrown (talk) 19:30, 10 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]