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Reviewer: MathewTownsend (talk · contribs ) 10:39, 3 July 2012 (UTC) [ reply ]
review Basically the article is fine but some of the prose could be clarified.
"DE 11 was created by 1936 on a road taken over by the state by 1931." - can this be clearer? "DE 11 begins at the Maryland border in western Kent County, where MD 302 continues to the west towards Templeville, Maryland" - so here the road split? MD 302 goes west, and DE 11 heads northeast? "In the center of Hartly, the route crosses DE 44. After DE 44, the road heads north before curving northeast and leaving Hartly." - something like "In the center of Hartly, the route crosses DE 44, then heads north before it curves northeast and leaves Hartly."? "and passing a few homes." - passes a few homes "before coming to " - it comes to an end In the "History" section: "by 1920", "by 1931", "by 1936" - its a little clumsy - perhaps there's no other way to phrase this. These are suggestions to improve the prose. I made an edit.[1]
MathewTownsend (talk ) 22:20, 3 July 2012 (UTC) [ reply ]
Thanks for the review, I have replied to the above comments. Dough 48 72 22:29, 3 July 2012 (UTC) [ reply ]
replyGreat! I just made one more little edit for the sake of prose.[2] GA review-see WP:WIAGA for criteria (and here for what they are not)
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