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Reviewer: Taylor Trescott (talk · contribs) 01:19, 1 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I will handle this review. Taylor Trescott - ^{my talk} + _{my edits} 01:19, 1 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Sounds good, and thank you. — Cirt (talk) 02:23, 1 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Review

• The hatnote can be removed per WP:NAMB.
• I assume his date of birth is difficult to find?
• Since you have a citation for his wife, maybe she should go in the infobox.
• Field was raised in the San Fernando Valley. Field played guitar in Los Angeles for a period of time as a young man. Perhaps change the second "Field" to "He" to avoid repetition.
• Reference 1: Playback Magazine should be linked.

That's it! Taylor Trescott - ^{my talk} + _{my edits} 21:11, 1 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Response to above GA Review

1. Removed hatnote, per WP:NAMB.
2. Yes, date of birth was quite difficult to find, didn't come across any info on that in any of the secondary sources during the course of my research.
3. Added wife info to infobox.
4. Changed 2nd "Field" to "He", good idea for copyedit, thanks.
5. Linked Playback Magazine in this reference, thanks for pointing that out.

Thanks again for the GA Review, — Cirt (talk) 17:50, 2 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Promoted to GA. Good work. Taylor Trescott - ^{my talk} + _{my edits} 18:05, 2 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you! That makes 100 WP:GA contributions to Wikipedia. :) — Cirt (talk) 21:53, 2 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]