GA Reassessment[edit]

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Hi, I am reviewing this article as part of Wikipedia:WikiProject Good articles/Project quality task force in an effort to ensure all listed Good articles continue to meet the Good article criteria. In reviewing the article, I have found there are a number of issues that need to be addressed. As many sports related GAs are unmaintained and not improved, I will be providing only a cursory review to begin with. This review will be placed on the talk page and I will notify the wikiprojects involved (not necessarily at the same time). The article will then have seven days from the day of notification for someone to come forward and start making the suggested changes and taking responsibility for the article here. If someone comes forward, I will supply a more detailed review, if someone does not then the article will be delisted. If someone is working on the article then, within reason, there will be no time limit in which the changes have to be made.--Jackyd101 (talk) 00:21, 27 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

The prose is not good, maybe a 4/10 average. There are a lot of loose sentences unconnected to the text around them.
Very few references for an article of this length. Some appear to be unreliable, others are improperly formatted.
No Personal life section and many other sections are impossible to understand.


Good work, article now passes GA.--Jackyd101 (talk) 20:39, 3 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]