• "The event was the first pay-per-view (other than WrestleMania, SummerSlam, Survivor Series, and the Royal Rumble) " - with that many exceptions, calling it the first is always going to be awkward.
  • Reworded. -- iMatthew _T.C. 11:43, 14 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
• Raw, Smackdown, etc. may need italics. Check their articles.
  • When referring to the brand itself, we do not italicize, but when we are talking about an edition of the show, it is italicized, and I went through the article and found no mistakes there. -- iMatthew _T.C. 11:43, 14 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
• "to answer the ten count." - what's the ten count?
  • Reworded. -- iMatthew _T.C. 11:43, 14 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
• "the two fought up the entrance ramp, where, from there..." - a bit choppy, can you reword this.
  • Reworded. -- iMatthew _T.C. 11:43, 14 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Please leave me a note when done. Cheers, giggy _(:O) 11:08, 14 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]

 Done -- iMatthew _T.C. 11:43, 14 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]