There shouldn't be information presented in the lead that is not also presented in the body of the article. I'm refering specifically to the first paragraph of the lead, where it discusses his Navy and JPD service.
Just one issue with prose/MOS, and once this is taken care of I think the article will be good to go for GA status. Please let me know if you have any questions. Dana boomer (talk) 16:40, 23 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]