Hello! This is my first GA review, so I might do some missteps here and there. Trying to step out my comfort zone to see what works and what doesn't for me. I will start adding comments in a few days. lunaeclipse ⚧ (talk)23:50, 1 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Prose is well-written, and does not have any issues with spelling or grammar. Only issue is that "Summoning Satan" is not title case for some reason.
Done
"Rolling, which was created by fellow Tetris player Christopher Martinez ("Cheez") before the 2020 CTWC called "rolling", involves rolling the back of the controller with all five fingers to position the game pieces more quickly." — This sentence is not gramatically correct.
1b.
No MOS issues with the lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and/or lists.
Here's where this becomes a bit tricky. You've cited aGameScout's YouTube video on Thach to "stay true to the original source". However, the use of this video violates Wikipedia's guideline on self-published sources: "Never use self-published sources as third-party sources about living people, even if the author is an expert, well-known professional researcher, or writer." The best course of action would be to rather rely on the more reliable sources that reference the video.
Done This reference has been entirely removed now, but to do so, I added a few primary sources as citations. Can you double check to see if these are OK, or should these be removed altogether? Johnson52419:59, 6 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Same thing for maxout.gg. It's community run so that guideline also applies to that website.
Done
Thatch's videos, however, should be fine per WP:SELFSOURCE as they're not third party sources and contain uncontroversial self descriptions.
Y
CTM website gets a pass as it's just verifying his positions in the Tetris tournaments Thach participated in.
Y
Tetris Interest is a fan blog, making it unreliable. Either find another source to replace it or remove the source and its supporting statements altogether.
Done
I'd recommend using the original GamesRadar source as the Inkl URL leads a mirror page.
Done
2c.
Original research in the part about him mastering rolling, the technique itself, Thach's ethnicity, and the history of hypertapping.
Partly done Removed the information about mastering rolling and Thach's ethnicity since neither were explicitly said, but the history of hypertapping and how its performed are well cited and supported explicitly by the article. I don't see what needs to be done here? Johnson52419:59, 6 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Johnson524, the statements of Cheez being the creator of rolling and Joseph being the person who popularized hypertapping are not mentioned in the first paragraph of this section. None of the sources ([1][2][3]) you used in that part of the article support either of these claims. — 💽 LunaEclipse 💽 ⚧ 【=◈︿◈=】18:01, 7 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I'm not the nominator but tried to remove a bit of YouTube research from the article where possible. However I'm not familiar enough with the topic to do a more comprehensive removal of the YouTube/Maxout.gg sources. The input of the original nominator @Johnson524 would be useful at this point. StewdioMACK (talk) 08:26, 5 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@LunaEclipse: OK, minus a little more removal of the aGameScout source, all of your listed improvements are complete 🙂 I did ask for clarification on one of the things you said above if you could take a look at that. Sorry for the three day delay, life got really busy for a moment, but I should respond quickly to any new feedback now its the weekend. Thank you for your review and patience, and thank you @StewdioMACK: for helping out a bit too. Cheers! Johnson52415:58, 6 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
OK, all suggestions above have been replied to as of now. If you have any more suggestions, especially around better grammar/ways to word a sentence, please let me know. Cheers! Johnson52419:59, 6 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]