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Reviewer: Jim Sweeney (talk) 07:48, 17 October 2010 (UTC)
#Citation consistency reference 1 just has the author while reference 2 has the author and book title. They all should be presented the same way.
#Reference 3 61st–63rd, 65th–70th Foot is not actually referenced
#Reference 11 needs to be formated as per the others WP:CITESHORT and the book added to the bibliography
#What makes http://www.britishbattles.com/bunker-hill.htm a reliable source
#Reference 20 needs to be formated as per the others WP:CITESHORT and the book added to the bibliography
#Reference 35 what makes http://www.lightinfantry.org.uk/ a reliable source and it appears to link to the wrong page. Its also shown as blacklisted on the link checker tool.
#Reference 40 needs to be formated as per the others WP:CITESHORT and the book added to the bibliography
#Same with reference 43
#Reference 51 consistency the date is written as Retrieved 10-04-2009 all the others are written as Retrieved 30 July 2009
#In the formation section there is nothing about the size of the battalion any problems they had recruiting
#In the seven years war section 137 other ranks out of an establishment strength of 790 were fit for duty - is there anything for the officer numbers
#As unrest grew the 64th took place in an incident which lays a claim to the first blood of the American War of Independence being shed in Salem, Massachusetts and not Lexington - theres no suggestion previos to this that the first blood was shed at Lexington, needs clarification.
#On 26 February 1775 a supply of weapons and ammunition was known to be in Salem - how
# the 64th were the last regiment for Halifax, giving them the distinction of being the last British unit to set foot in the Commonwealth of Massachusetts - were the last regiment to leave for Halifax ? and have no British units set foot in Massachusetts since ?
#after the first mutiny - first rebellion consensus has it the mutiny is POV depending upon what side you support
#Drummer Thomas Flinn is linked but a brief mention of why he was awarded the Victoria Cross
I've put the article on hold for seven days to allow folks to address the issues I've brought up. Feel free to contact me on my talk page, or here with any concerns, and let me know one of those places when the issues have been addressed. If I may suggest that you strike out, check mark, or otherwise mark the items I've detailed, that will make it possible for me to see what's been addressed, and you can keep track of what's been done and what still needs to be worked on.Jim Sweeney (talk) 09:05, 17 October 2010 (UTC)