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GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:2012 Istanbul suicide bombing/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Editoneer (talk · contribs) 17:35, 3 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]


Lead Section

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Revolutionary People's Liberation Party/Front has its own article and these topics are wider than this attack itself, so in that case I think those information will be irrelavant with the attack "in the Wikipedia concept". If that were an academic article, I would totally agree about mentioning that, even more, such as the background of the organization, but readers can easily get that information from the article of the organization.--Nanahuatl (talk) 21:28, 4 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Background

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gunfire?--Nanahuatl (talk) 21:38, 4 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Yes. Editoneer (talk) 04:40, 5 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done.--Nanahuatl (talk) 23:19, 5 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
This was a different event that was ocurred about a couple of months ago. A routine police checkpoint, and the taxi just don't stop and the people inside start shooting at the police, the sources say.--Nanahuatl (talk) 21:38, 4 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Can you mention that inside the article? Editoneer (talk) 04:40, 5 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I thought it was clear, since the paragraph starts with "On 20 July 2012" and the last sentence of the paragraph ("After the death of Hasan Selim Gönen, the information that DHKP-C was preparing for action against the police stations was reported to the press").--Nanahuatl (talk) 23:19, 5 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
A better word should be "border" or "limit" I assume, or just leaving that :D--Nanahuatl (talk) 21:38, 4 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I mean, if we leave it like that it is a different part of the story, so maybe just "limit". Editoneer (talk) 06:21, 6 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
What's your suggestion?--Nanahuatl (talk) 21:38, 4 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I've contacted a Turk from Wikipedia:Discord and told me that you probable meant "sideways". Editoneer (talk) 04:40, 5 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks, done.--Nanahuatl (talk) 23:19, 5 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
As I said above, that part is not the suicide bombing, another incident that caused to this attack. "Two men" was wrong, I tried to fixed the sentence.--Nanahuatl (talk) 21:38, 4 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
THe male passenger, try not to hurry up, "THe". Editoneer (talk) 04:40, 5 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done.--Nanahuatl (talk) 23:19, 5 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Sure, I can translate in a while. "McDonald's thing" is just a reference of an unrelated activity of Işıklı, one of the people that mentioned in the article. It also mentions that she killed a police officer before, but also irrelevant with this attack.--Nanahuatl (talk) 21:38, 4 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Attack

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AM :) Done.--Nanahuatl (talk) 23:25, 5 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Inside of the station, done. The x-ray device is located after you enter through the door, a few steps away.--Nanahuatl (talk) 23:25, 5 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
The name of the station is that, The 75th Anniversary Police Station.--Nanahuatl (talk) 23:25, 5 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
A mistake, should have been "two". Done.--Nanahuatl (talk) 23:25, 5 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Again, translate how? The sources? In here or to translate for you to understand them?--Nanahuatl (talk) 23:25, 5 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Yes, translate the sources here so I can understand them, as I assume you're turkish and that Google Translate can easily paint a different story. Editoneer (talk) 06:21, 6 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Losses and Damages

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Done.--Nanahuatl (talk) 23:26, 5 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done.--Nanahuatl (talk) 23:26, 5 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
The source doesn't mention such thing.--Nanahuatl (talk) 23:26, 5 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Investigation and assailant profile

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Done.--Nanahuatl (talk) 23:27, 5 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
It's the name of the cemetary.--Nanahuatl (talk) 23:27, 5 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Reactions

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Others

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The article is good but it has problems but it's not that bad, I'm leaving this to you and then to the second reviewer, thanks. Editoneer (talk) 19:28, 3 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@Nanahuatl:, I must rush you to do progress, this was open for 7 days, if you don't respond, the article will be failed because of inactivity. Editoneer (talk) 07:25, 15 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]