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Reviewer: Jezhotwells (talk ) 15:10, 12 March 2011 (UTC) [ reply ]
I shall be reviewing this article against the Good Article criteria , following its nomination for Good Article status.
Disambiguations : none found.
Linkrot : two found and tagged.[1] Jezhotwells (talk ) 15:18, 12 March 2011 (UTC) [ reply ]
Checking against GA criteria[ edit ] GA review (see here for criteria)It is reasonably well written .
a (prose) : b (MoS for lead , layout , word choice , fiction , and lists ) :
according various publications. various is a weasel word here, also missing preposition. Done
Statement reworded and "various" removed. Patriarca12 (talk ) 17:58, 12 March 2011 (UTC) [ reply ]
It is factually accurate and verifiable .
a (references) : b (citations to reliable sources ) : c (OR ) :
There are a large number of cites to http://www.al.com/blogs/ Blogs are not a [[WP:RS|reliable source. Done
Two dead links refs #166 & #199 Done
Otherwise references check, assume good faith for off-line sources.
All of the http://www.al.com/blogs/ have been removed as each one that was used was a secondary source citation. The two dead links have alos been fixed. Patriarca12 (talk ) 17:58, 12 March 2011 (UTC) [ reply ]
It is broad in its coverage .
a (major aspects) : b (focused) :
Thorough coverage of the subject
It follows the neutral point of view policy .
Fair representation without bias :
It is stable .
No edit wars, etc. :
It is illustrated by images , where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales ) : b (appropriate use with suitable captions ) :
Captioned and tagged.
Overall :
Pass/Fail :
On Hold for seven days for issues above to be addressed. Jezhotwells (talk ) 16:38, 12 March 2011 (UTC) [ reply ]
Ok, that does the trick. I am happy to list. Congratulations! Jezhotwells (talk ) 18:51, 14 March 2011 (UTC) [ reply ]
Thanks for taking the time for the review! I believe I have made all of the requested changes, but please feel free to let me know if anything else needs to be done. Thanks again! Patriarca12 (talk ) 17:58, 12 March 2011 (UTC) [ reply ]