21:4921:49, 6 June 2014diffhist+4
Swordsmanship
Skipping the "at that time" bit, made things rather confused ...but I like the splitting into two sentences.
20:3620:36, 6 June 2014diffhist+40
Swordsmanship
I appreciate the effort, but I feel it kinda changed the meaning. I made another attempt at it ...though I feel it's too wordy
20:0420:04, 6 June 2014diffhist−50
Swordsmanship
I'd have to put these tags on almost every section... I guess the general refimprove tag will have to do.
19:4819:48, 4 June 2014diffhist−548
Classification of swords
I see no evidence of that ...and the citation was badly made (it is unclear what book is referred to). Also, this is not an advertisement page for the book.