17:2617:26, 4 August 2021diffhist−60 m
Jabari Parker
→Boston Celtics (2021–present): Removed "Despite injuries among fellow forwards on the Celtics, "—We cannot know why he did or did not play in these games. The availability of other players is irrelevant, unless we know he ONLY played because of injuries, and such a statement would need to be cited.
21:2921:29, 1 October 2019diffhist−5
LeBron James
People have called LeBron the greatest basketball player ever. So why not say that directly? "He has been called..."
14:3914:39, 11 May 2018diffhist−5 m
Amelia Vega
→Personal life: Removed adjective "sweet" describing Instagram post. I am sure it was sweet! AmAl forever! But that's not an objective description of their announcement.
21:4721:47, 27 March 2018diffhist−54
Chocolate-covered coffee bean
Deleting "bitter flavor of the coffee beans can be overwhelming for non-coffee-drinkers." — Without a citation, this is simply conjecture, especially the word "overwhelming." What does it mean for the flavor to overwhelm?
14:5114:51, 8 April 2016diffhist+12
Tacocat
I removed the adverb "facetiously" from this sentence because it means "treating serious issues with deliberately inappropriate humor; flippant." I added "using humor and sarcasm" to keep the intended meaning.