12:4812:48, 4 June 2024diffhist+818
Use of human shields by Hamas
1.Comma placement, relevant, lead-worthy(wording could be better). 2.Misleading confusing edit summary. 3. Placement about “Critics say” has nothing to do with sources, just doesn’t fit in the first intro paragraph right after “while Hamas has denied using civilian areas…”, better flow after “According to”Tags: RevertedVisual editMobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit