15:5415:54, 21 March 2024diffhist−56
Dune: Part Two
Undid goodfaith revision 1214842994 by MeAmME (talk) The Plot is a summary of the events of the story, not a play-by-play. Since Feyd dies, and his susceptibility to manipulation is never mentioned or explored again, it's not necessary to includeTag: Undo
13:1813:18, 18 March 2024diffhist−221
Dune: Part Two
Undid goodfaith revision 1214353419 by GymratW (talk) "Atomics" is already linked, and the extraneous detail about the knife fight is unnecessary. The additional wording in the final sentences has been removed several times.Tag: Undo
17:0617:06, 6 March 2024diffhist+22
Dune: Part Two
→Plot: Slight tweak to better reflect actual sequence of events. Odd punctuation. Reinserted lovelorn - never meant to be "heartbroken".
12:4612:46, 4 March 2024diffhist−24
Dune: Part Two
→Plot: Removed the quoted line - this has no context without an explanation of Stilgar's dreams for turning Arrakis into a "green paradise"