19:4319:43, 30 April 2024diffhist−24 m
Ibn al-Khattab
→top: Copy edit ▸ Minor grammar and especially diction throughout paragraph, incl. alphabetization of lists.currentTags: Mobile editMobile app editAndroid app edit
09:1009:10, 30 April 2024diffhist+14 m
Death of Brian Wells
→Conspirators: Copy edit ▸ Grammar ▸ Punctuation: Can't use semicolon here — colon or 𝑒𝑚 dash, and 𝑒𝑚 dash works better here as it's essentially a "softer" colon.Tags: Mobile editMobile app editAndroid app edit
23:5723:57, 28 April 2024diffhist+23 m
Killing of Debanhi Escobar
→Background: Copy edit ▸ Presentation ▸ The "𝑐𝑎." form of "circa" was both italicized and chosen over the preferred "c." form as a judgement call simply to differentiate it from the "d." that precedes it.currentTags: Mobile editMobile app editAndroid app edit
05:5105:51, 28 April 2024diffhist−2 m
Rubik's Cube
→Permutations: Copy edit ▸ Grammar ▸ If we keep the "one in twelve" then the "are" must be changed to "is". We could do that, but given the context I think "are" would be preferable if it's doable, which it is by changing the diction slightly. I did so — up to you now.Tags: Mobile editMobile app editAndroid app edit
22:1322:13, 26 April 2024diffhist+29 m
2010 Filair Let L-410 crash
→Accident: Copy edit ▸ Presentation ▸ This produces exactly the same output but prevents line-wrapping to occur between "1" and "kilometer", which it was doing on my device.Tags: Mobile editMobile app editAndroid app edit
21:3321:33, 26 April 2024diffhist−2 m
Animal attack
→top: Copy edit ▸ Grammar ▸ Either (1) pluralize only the word "hormones" as I did, or (2) pluralize "androgens" and "estrogens" and get rid of the word "hormones" altogether, but you can't pluralize everything as it was.currentTags: Mobile editMobile app editAndroid app edit
19:2519:25, 24 April 2024diffhist+51 m
Death of Ian Tomlinson
→top: Copy edit ▸ Presentation ▸ All time declarations made to conform to one standard as per ᴍᴏꜱ᎓ᴛɪᴍᴇ, and with ᴡᴘ markup favored over ʜᴛᴍʟ for improved readability.Tags: Mobile editMobile app editAndroid app edit