19:4019:40, 24 May 2024diffhist+4
Talk:Elizabeth of Russia
A reading of the article, with its laudatory tone and non-encyclopedic paragraphs, leads to rate it below C-class. This is in agreement with several comments in the talk page.current
18:1118:11, 23 May 2024diffhist−15
China Gate (1957 film)
→Production: There is no prostitute protagonist in Pickup on South Street. Therefore we either remove this movie title from the sentence or we remove the reference to the protagonists being prostitutes. I chose the latter.current
23:1223:12, 22 May 2024diffhist+37
Homonationalism
→Israel: Added unbalanced template to Israel section. A more balanced section and article would include views described, for example, in academic papers such as https://www.jstor.org/stable/10.2979/israelstudies.24.2.14 or https://onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/full/10.1111/anti.12100current
14:0114:01, 17 May 2024diffhist−1
List of China Beach episodes
→Season 2 (1988–89): Corrected innaccuracy in the plot of episode 2x4. The Vietnamese woman whose cousin is killed is not the Vietnamese barmaid. The latter was played by actress Marion Yue, while the former was played by Elizabeth Lindsey, a Hawaiian actress.current
09:4709:47, 17 May 2024diffhist+4
Pinkwashing (LGBT)
A more balanced article could include views described e.g. in academic papers such as https://www.jstor.org/stable/10.2979/israelstudies.24.2.14 or https://onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/full/10.1111/anti.12100Tag: Reverted
19:1919:19, 16 May 2024diffhist−33
China Beach
→Cast: Deleted innaccurate bit of info. Rick was in Khe Sanh, but what is said in the sentence didn't happen after the battle of Khe Sanh, but long before that event.
12:1612:16, 15 May 2024diffhist−27
Diễm Liên
→Childhood: Nothing in this page is sourced. The only reference is not about the actress and singer, but about her most famous movie, and doesn't tell anything about her. I just corrected a sentence to remove parts of the sentence that were either unintelligible or incoherent with what is said in other paragraphs of the page.current
19:0219:02, 12 May 2024diffhist−500
Past Lives (film)
→Accolades: Deleted duplicated entry in the table of awards: Film Independent Spirit Awards was entered at the 'F' for "Film" and also at the 'I' for "Independent".
08:1108:11, 11 May 2024diffhist+22
Zambia
→Religion: Giving numbers about an undefined group of "denominations" doesn't make sense. It looks like they are referring to Protestant denominations. Since I'm not an expert, I wrote "non-Catholic Christian", as I don't know if all these denominations qualify as Protestant.
17:1117:11, 2 May 2024diffhist−385
The Wailing (2016 film)
→Release: Deleted two sentences. The cited source doesn't presently match what was said in the sentences I deleted. Streaming services release movies in specific countries, but not in others. If you don't mention the countries where the streaming service has released a movie, the information is useless.
12:2512:25, 20 April 2024diffhist−56
My Mister
Removed sentence as it should say in what countries it is currently available on Netflix or iQIYI. In my country it is not available on either of them, but on Viki. The sentence was also unsourced.
30 March 2024
14:3514:35, 30 March 2024diffhist−50
Lifeboat (1944 film)
→Production: The absence of a musical score doesn't make this film unique among Hitchcock's American films nor does the cited source say so. There is at least one other Hitchcock American film with no musical score and only music sung or played by the characters as in Lifeboat, that is The Birds.
26 March 2024
20:1420:14, 26 March 2024diffhist−2 m
Touch of Evil
→Filming: I removed a comma and a space. The citation should probably be placed at the end of the sentence, but I leave it as it is as I'm not sure.
19:5019:50, 26 March 2024diffhist+632
Touch of Evil
Undid revision 1215677771 by Doniago (talk) It's disputable that constating that year 1950 is previous to year 1958 constitutes undue synth or undue OR. This would warrant deletion of the inaccurate paragraph. On another note, this interpretation of WP recs would merit a simple revert to my previous edit: en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Inaccuracy#Should_inaccurate_material_be_excluded_from_the_encyclopedia?Tag: Undo
14:0514:05, 26 March 2024diffhist+631
Touch of Evil
→Filming: I added a reliable source to my previous edition stating that the Gun Crazy heist scene was filmed from inside the real moving car. The relevant pages of the newly added page are freely available at [https://www.loc.gov/static/programs/national-film-preservation-board/documents/gun_crazy.pdf ''Gun Crazy''] chapter by Richard T. Jameson on the National Film Registry website (I'm not sure right now how to add this, I might try later).Tag: Reverted
20:4720:47, 25 March 2024diffhist+544
Touch of Evil
→Filming: I removed the blog citation, while keeping the rewording of my previous edition so that no explicit claim is made that something is incorrect, as requested in the previous revert.
19:2919:29, 25 March 2024diffhist+758
Touch of Evil
→Filming: I reworded my previous edition so that no explicit claim is made now that something is incorrect. I also added a new source that provides a general history of scenes filmed inside a moving car, including mentions to Touch of Evil (1958) and Gun Crazy (1950).Tags: citing a blog or free web hostReverted
24 March 2024
09:2209:22, 24 March 2024diffhist+586
Touch of Evil
→Filming: I included sources for my previous edition. One of them is to a youtube videoclip, which could be improved with a more acceptable reference.Tag: Reverted