01:1301:13, 23 September 2017diffhist−18 m
Brilliant Earth
Removed "Africa" after Botswana and Namibia, because countries don't need to have the continent specified (you don't say "France, Europe" when referring to France).
11:5911:59, 30 June 2012diffhist−214
Maxwell International School
Removed long-winded information about Dwight International from the opening paragraph. Being physically situated where Maxwell used to be doesn't merit taking up half the introductory paragraph.
00:2400:24, 17 May 2010diffhist−552
The Gambia
→Religion: The link to the reference for the Rastafarian religion is a broken link, and therefore there is nothing to back up this information.
03:0703:07, 22 September 2009diffhist−543
AMD CrossFire
The opening paragraph had multiple logical and gramatical problems. Stripping the excess away leaves it much more informative.
17:4117:41, 30 August 2009diffhist+311
AMD CrossFire
→Advantages: CrossFire can use different GPUs (as opposed to SLI). I know it's not particualarly well written, but this needed to be stated and I'm hoping the writing will be cleaned up.
22:5022:50, 27 February 2009diffhist−77
Serekunda
Removed lines about "Twin Cities" and "Memphis, Tennessee, United States". Why were they there in the first place?
24 December 2008
23:5623:56, 24 December 2008diffhist−85
Nicole Sullivan
Fixed bad commas, removed quotes from proper names, and removed the extra detail about the cat that she doesn't voice, all in the intro paragraph
01:4301:43, 11 December 2008diffhist−91
Clone High
→Synopsis: My understanding is that the clones were to have their various abilities used for the US army, not necessarily to all just be soldiers. Also helped the wording of a couple sentences