13:5613:56, 18 May 2024diffhist−2
Apocalypse Never
→Negative: copyedit; whether ordinary or scare quotes are justified or needed around "environmental activist" is unclear, so I'm leaving them untouched - the context suggests that Shellenberger is not an environmental activistcurrent
10:1710:17, 18 May 2024diffhist+349
Maquon, Illinois
→Geography: minimal copyedit - see Indian for disambiguation; the source is a racist source - "another people who had to give way to the onward advance of the white man" - but probably OK for the etymology until/unless a better source is given; add archive created by request to https://archive.today (see the "share" link after the archive is ready)current
23:2623:26, 17 May 2024diffhist+43
Abiy Ahmed
→top: correct title of "NOBEL" source: a live article is not the best source, but we should at least cite the title correctly, per the archivecurrent
23:2123:21, 17 May 2024diffhist+1
Abiy Ahmed
→top: incorrect quote - the Wayback archive of 20190420170527 says "fourth", not "third"; difficult to speculate who the fourth one was apart from Meles Zenawi and Hailemariam Desalegn, but official Ethiopian web pages are often inaccurate - it's not our problem to fix them
23:0123:01, 17 May 2024diffhist−34
International Criminal Court investigation in Palestine
→Reactions: if the reader really needs to be reminded who Khan is at this point of the article, let him/her click on the intrawiki link; copyedit; reduce Wikivoice interpretations: avoid rather WP:WEASELly "warned" ("warn" tends to imply legitimacy: it's up to the sources and courts to interpret whether the statements were warnings or threats of perverting the course of justice; e.g. 'I warn you that the coffee is scalding hot' vs 'I warn you that I have a loaded gun')current
22:4322:43, 17 May 2024diffhist−23 m
Peaceful transition of power
→United States: dmy; copyedit to be less WP:WEASELly and for WP:RELTIME (in fact, Trump is still repeating the lies, but the source is June 2021 which is a long time ago; for the purpose of this article, trying to talk about "now" is mostly a distraction; sourced predictions for Nov 2024/Jan 2025 would, at a minimum, need a new paragraph and strong sources to avoid being too crystal-ball-y)current